#2||AsYa FF: Cupid Strikes (Chp 8 to Chp 12) - Page 23

Yowza!! This is BRILL!! Oh my... i absolutely LOVE this!! The concept, the characters, the portrayal of everything, the whole story so far... just absolute GENIUS!! Wow *gets all teary* i'm in love with it, the confession between Asad and Zoya was sooo sweet!! And everything else was awesome!! You've done such a great job, i really hope you update soon, i'm sooo eager to read on!! Also if possible please can you pm me when you update? Thanks a bunch!! x

Part 8


sis this part is my fav part

loved Asya scenes too the core yrrr

wow they are in loves yrr

loved the bed room scene

and then the fight scene ..

poor zoya and her last words made me emotional😭

Zoya trying to understand her Feeling..
while Asad seems to e me a lover boy😳

realliii loved this part yrrr

this story is being so awesome

lluv sehr

Originally posted by: -Mrinalini-

Loved the way they spoke their hearts out and shared their feelings and likes and dislikes with each other! 😳

Finally they KISSED?????? YIPPEEE!!!!!

OMG!! You and me do confession at the same time! DAMN Girl! How much of Telepathy can we do at a time? 😲 😆

The Best dialogues:

Asad found Zoya standing on a balcony of the same hotel where there was the engagement party. She was facing the sea and the cool breeze was blowing her hair.

"Zoya" shouted Asad.

Zoya did not stir from her position.

Asad moved further closer and said "Zoya"

Zoya knew that it was time to face everything and turned around to look at Asad.

"I am not here to apologize for what happened as doing that would mean that I regret it or that it was wrong. But I don't think like that. For me it was perfect" spoke Asad making direct eye contact.

Zoya turned back again as she digested each and every word. She had not expected Asad to speak so directly about it.

Asad on seeing Zoya's reaction said "You can't turn your back towards the truth."

Zoya was still shocked and did not say a word.

Asad moved towards Zoya and grabbed her hand. He made her turn around to face him and holding both her arms said "You can't deny that there is something between us. There is a strange hidden desire for each other deep within us. You can't refuse the fact that I love you and you love me."

The closeness was driving Zoya crazy. "You are hurting me" spoke Zoya as she struggled to move from Asad's grip.

"I didn't mean to" apologized Asad and left her arms.

Zoya again turned to look back at the sea.

Asad on seeing Zoya's reactions said his final words while walking away "You can run away from me as much as you want. You can turn your face away me till whatever time you want. You can deny your love for me till your last breath. But you can't run away or turn or back to your feelings. You can't lie to yourself."

Zoya turned on hearing this to see Asad walking away from her. She felt that something very precious was slipping away. "Asad" she shouted.

Asad stopped in his tracks and immediately turned to look at Zoya.

Zoya started moving towards Asad while speaking "You asked me what my last words to you would have been so I am telling them to you now.Those words are that I may take a journey even to the end of the world but yet will find no one like you. Not even in the world of movies or books. Not even in my world of Harry Potter."

Asad realized that Zoya had indirectly told him that she loved him. The words 'not even Harry Potter' were ringing in his head and a huge smile spread on his face. He opened his arms for Zoya.

Zoya seeing this ran and quickly hugged Zoya with all her might and Asad replied back with equal passion.

Unknown to them someone had seen and heard everything and was smiling ear to ear.

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I read this ^^^ part again and again!!!

This was the CUTEST CONFESSION EVER! 👏

Ab ye Razia aur Ghafoor kyun aa gaye?

I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapter!

Ab I want another KISS.. Pretty Please! *batting my eyelashes* Obviously.. AFTER CONFESSION KISS to banta hai boss! 😉

Love the whole update!

Love you heaps my baby sista! 🤗 ❤️

Continue soon! 😳

*hi five*

And now... listening to "Mitwaaa... Ishq pe zor Nahi!"

Originally posted by: RiDz_rox

i loved it Mahima.. you are such a talented writer.. sorry for the late reply darling

Originally posted by: anushreemishra

Wow lovely update...the first scene between asad and dilshad was so sweet...i love their bonding and i loved dilshad line"even if you don't call me ammi you treat me like that"

Zoya getting all worked up seeing asad's wounds was sweet...and i loved the cockroach wala dialogue...i love how he always manages to make her smile...

the dance was super hawwt😳and hayye their first kiss was so romantic...

I loved how asad confronted zoya and spoke his heart out without any hesitation and zoya's proposal was so unique and beautiful"i can never find anyone like you not even in harry potter land"...

Great update...loved it😊

Originally posted by: starsinmyeyes

Loved it Mahima...great update

Originally posted by: rads73937

LOVED IT A LOT.

THANX FOR THE PM.

TAKE CARE

Originally posted by: aashiqua

wow..ur amazng writer..lovd it to d core..dilshad is so sweet..and d confession

Originally posted by: zoas91

beautiful! the dance, the kiss, the confession evrything was just so perfect !

Glad you liked it

Originally posted by: snehalparab

what a perfect update loved aweee zoya loves him more than any hero or even harry potter loved it and asad confession that he does not regret it all I am just happy after reading your update thanks for this lovely one

Glad you liked the confession