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Do you know I love Mob stories. I write mob stories... I breathe mob stories.
I don't think I'll be able to write much with the amount of excitement I feel right now. I'm so happy that you are writing a MOB STORY! 😆 Zoya seems too afraid of her husband. I may be wrong, but was their marriage an arranged one? From what I read they have been together for a few months and mob bosses usually don't jump into relationships they know very little about... and he was 'in touch' with Tanveer before Zoya arrived... which was a few months ago. Honestly, Asad doesn't seem like the cheating type. He's ruthless, but greedy when it comes to his wife.
He's still in the honeymoon phase of their marriage while Zoya is overcoming it and seeing past the appearances. He HAS killed a lot of people, destroyed families... tortured them, but is he one to hurt her for her own good? Can he be so hopeless? I'm sure he has his reasons, but it just seems odd that he can turn on his own wife and go for the 'other woman' he shooed away.
Mind boggling. Let's hope for the best.
To tell you a secret... I have a similar scene written for a mob story of mine... I was shocked to read it. And I thought, WHOA, great minds think alike? 😃
I don't think I'll be able to write much with the amount of excitement I feel right now. I'm so happy that you are writing a MOB STORY! 😆 Zoya seems too afraid of her husband. I may be wrong, but was their marriage an arranged one? From what I read they have been together for a few months and mob bosses usually don't jump into relationships they know very little about... and he was 'in touch' with Tanveer before Zoya arrived... which was a few months ago. Honestly, Asad doesn't seem like the cheating type. He's ruthless, but greedy when it comes to his wife.
He's still in the honeymoon phase of their marriage while Zoya is overcoming it and seeing past the appearances. He HAS killed a lot of people, destroyed families... tortured them, but is he one to hurt her for her own good? Can he be so hopeless? I'm sure he has his reasons, but it just seems odd that he can turn on his own wife and go for the 'other woman' he shooed away.
Mind boggling. Let's hope for the best.
To tell you a secret... I have a similar scene written for a mob story of mine... I was shocked to read it. And I thought, WHOA, great minds think alike? 😃
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