FAASLE II: QH FF. Links to Threads I and III pg 1 - Page 86

Originally posted by: me2you

Yes, yes, yes. You have no idea how happy you made me with this update. Totally unexpected!

Tears, for the second time. Yes, I confess: I had tears in my eyes from the moment you said 'listen to the song while reading the following part', and from there it started for me.

thanks 4 listening to that song Narges as I feel that song adds more to my update..there are things I can't communicate by writing

The first half made a few things clear as in Shireen's relationship with Razia and their past.

Ayaan is indeed a not very happy man. I wonder how his relationship with Humeira is. Was it a love or arranged marriage? It seems he cares for her, because he was quite happy that she is coming back.

will elaborate later but ayaan does love humeira in this one :)

Loved the interaction with Asad and Farhan. He is quite clever, he recognized Mr. Khan immediately 😃 I am in love with this kid, he brings a smile on my face 😊

an autistic kid who can't communicate with the world will help Asya communicate :)

Just like Zoya, Mr. Khan seems also to know how to handle a kid. Is that a hint for a future track, Di? 😉 Unke bache honge na? Ya phir, will they adopt Farhan eventually? I can actually see that happening.

let's see:) In my original story, Farhan was their kid as they had consummated before separation

Second half: I can't express in words Di, how beautiful and amazing it was.

Actually the word is not beautiful it is..khoobsurat. Yes, that will do justice with the second half. I told you na, I had tears because of the khoobsurati of the story, because of the khoobsurati of the dialogues, because of the khoobsurati of the emotions, the feelings, the depth, the pain, the love and the tadap. The way you built up the scene was exceptionally good. I could totally imagine the scene. It was crystal clear.

thanks a ton Narges. This is indeed my fav scene from this ff of mine...i re wrote it for Asya just for this scene :)

Silently they gazed at each other. They didnt exchange any words.

For me, it all started here. What followed was just something else, ek alag se feeling, ek alag sa emotion. I love silent communication but it has to be done at the right time, place and situation and what better timing than their first meeting after five long years...

And then...her hug. Yes, it was her hug only. As much as he wanted to hug her back, Mr. Khan is and will always be the Mr. Khan: she is now someone else's wife.

Yes, she is but she belongs only to you Asad, only to you...

Oh Sangeeta Di, saach mein mujhe yeh update bahot acha laga. It got me to another world. Maybe you are thinking I am getting way too kind now, but let me tell you one thing: I don't care! This is what I feel and you have the right to know it 😃

I don't want to think about what is gonna happen in the next chapter. Don't want to ruin my mood and will just enjoy this khoobsurat moment... 😳

Bheegi bheegi raaton mein was a very well chosen song and this one, from now on, will always remind me of Asad and Zoya in this scene from Faasle. Period.

I love this song too...inspired me to write this scene too :)

Thank you, thank you so much. Ek badha sa wala hug aap ke liye 🤗 hug to u 2 Narges :)

Originally posted by: AAK0007

Amazing update. I felt the emotion of asya. Hope asad dont misunderstood zoya. Please make everything fine btwn asya.
Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: bheegi

Originally posted by: Aye12345

Whoop!! Whoop!! I can't believe they saw each other... oh my God, at least they now know that each is still alive and safe!! Their silent conversation was really emotional and just simply AWESOME!! I really hope that our Asad miya starts falling for her more, even though he thinks she is now married, for some reason i think it would be fun to see if he would get jealous, which could be interesting and funny, of course!! I'm sooo happy you updated, i can't wait to read on, now that they know about each other!! I'm happy that Humaira is still alive, thank you for this and i hope you can update soon, please pm me when you do... thank you.x