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goingreen

@goingreen

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#91

I LOVE IT HAHA. Love the critique at the start especially, super creative! You've set the start beautifully, spelling out the main background behind the story very clearly (: Can't wait to see how the next writer continues, and can't wait for my turn too :p

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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#92

well...that was...interesting😕

i think that's the word i'm looking for😕

my reaction after reading about Asad and Humeira and that to like this was😲

i'm still shocked😲😲

but i stand by interesting

waiting to see what Zoya does😊

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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#93

Originally posted by: goingreen
I LOVE IT HAHA. Love the critique at the start especially, super creative! You've set the start beautifully, spelling out the main background behind the story very clearly (: Can't wait to see how the next writer continues, and can't wait for my turn too :p

the critique in the beginning was a joint work of Google and me! i'm just a writer i cant critique hence i had to take google's help!😆

glad you liked it

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#94

this whole ff is unique one

leaves and other continues more like relay

this prt was absolutely fantastic

asad and humeira hmmm this is a twist

funny was rashid he said f@@ck her omg!!

this is hell exciting..

waiting fr milli part

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#95

gud one yr...really a kickass..start...ayan...he is responsible...not asad...

thnks 4d pm..continue...yr...MILLI...NNHHIII...wo meri supari killer mujhe tadpa tadpa ke..cliff de de ke maregi...but i love milli babies..update...

aa milli mein bhi tuhe tang karungiii...with lots 4 reply...😉

pari

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JASLEEN

@Jasleenkaur01

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#96

Nice start... Loved the whole part...Its always nice to read posts by Sadie n when such talented writers of this forum comes together then its a Treat for us... Waiting for the next part... Continue soon...

~JAZ~

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#97

ASAD AND HUMEIRA?????????

OMG!!!!!!!!!

LOVED IT.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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Homeslice

@Homeslice

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#98

Awesome start Sadie :D Loved it so far! Lets see what happens next! :)

Good luck Milli :)

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#99

Originally posted by: --starstruck--
Price of Redemption!

Whoa!!

Great start to the series...

I was just so shocked with the critique at the beginning..I thought it would rate 0.5 😆 ..Dhamakedaar it was!!!

Humaira is pregnant and its Asad???? I hope there is some misunderstanding...

What is Zoya upto now???

thanks for the pm :)

Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 12 years ago

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#100

Oh. My. Gosh. 😲
Oh my gosh. 😲
Ohmygosh!! 😲
O. M. G. 😲
Omg!! 😲
omg! 😲

That was an amazing first chapter! 👏 👏 👏
I just LOVE the idea you came up with, it's truly amazing and different! ❤️
I love the idea of cooking, restaurants, critics, and stuff! 👍🏼
Can't wait for the story to progress!
Love Zoe's feistiness, too! 😉
LOVEITLOVEITLOVEIT!!!
Btw, who's doing the next part?

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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