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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you!😳
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I will update this story next year!
...now that my exams are over!
Will give two chapters as a compensation for being so late! 😃
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Hello guys! Here's the next update.😃


Chapter 5

After fifteen minutes

Asad wonders why there isn't any announcement about the flight. He checks the time anxiously as it becomes ten minutes past the scheduled arrival time & still there is no news. There, Zoya reaches the Khan Villa after a journey in the taxi for 30 minutes. She looks at the building looking beautiful under moon light & rings the doorbell. In a few seconds, the door is opened by an excited Nama, with Dilshad on her toes, with a dazzling smile on her face. Zoya is stunned for a second as the smile is so like her own Mom.

"Salam walekkum. Zoya?" Najma enquires.

"Salam Walekkum. You must be Najma!" nods Zoya smiling.

"Aap...Dilshad Phoopi...Kya main aapko Phoopi bula sakti hoon?" Zoya enquires politely.

Dilshad sees the sadness, longing & innocence in Zoya's eyes, and feels motherly love for her. She opens her arms & Zoya steps in for a hug.

She ushers Zoya inside & Zoya's gaze travels around the house impressed & she asks

"MA!!!"

"MA?" Dilshad & Najma ask at the same time confused.

"Mashah Allah! (Dilshad & Najma smile at each other) This house is so beutiful. Who designed this?"

"Bhaijaan", Najma gives her the information readily, "Asad Bhaijaan!"

"Zoya, where is..."

Zoya interrupts & says hurriedly "Oh yes Phoopi! Actually my flight arrived one hour earlier, so I came. You can ask Mr Asad Ahm...I mean MrKhan not to go to airport anymore! I didn't have his number." She finishes with a smile.

"But he already went!" Najma says with a slight frown.

"What?"

"Koi baat nahin! Najma take Zoya to her room. I will call Asad!"

Dilshad walks towards the phone & Najma ushers Zoya to the guest room.

There is approaching enquiry station when he gets the call from Dilshad.

"Jee Ammi", Asad's gruff but respectful voice comes from the other side.

" Asad, Zoya already aa gayi hai. So you come back."

"Aa gayi hai? Lekin Ammi..." Asad is confused.

"Her flight came one hour earlier. Now you come back, okay?"

"That's why there is no announcement. Ammi why didn't she wait?"

"She thought of not troubling us Asad!"

"Ammi she has come here for the first time, that too at night. If something happened...well, did she rich safe? Did she have any problem on the way?" Asad rubbed his forehead.

"Asad she is absolutely fine beta. Don't get so tensed up. Come home."

"Okay Ammi". With that Asad cut the call.

"Ho kya gaya ise?"

Dilshad said to herself baffled at Asad's behaviour. She knew he was protective of his friends & family...but this much? That too for a young girl? It is quite unnatural for him to show so much concern for a girl who isn't his sister.

After cutting the call, Asad turned to his car & made way to his home. But he remebered he had an importtant meeting the next day & that he had forgot to get an important file home & hence went to his office before going home. He informed Dilshad too & asked her not to keep food for him. By the time Asad reached home, it was quite late at night & everyone had been off to bed. E made way to his room quitely & worked on his laptop for the next day's meeting.

After about an hour:

There Zoya's thoughts always diverted to her time in New York. She missed Reehan, Appi, Jeeju & all her friends. Reehan informed her that he would skype her in an hour. So she arranged her things in the closet and went out to get some drinking water. She drank water silently praising Mr Asad Ahmed Khan for his architecture skills. As she turned around to go back to her room, she mistakenly went towards Asad's room that was opposite hers. As she was about to push the door, it burst open & Asad came out dressed in his white nightwear. They looked at each other shocked, for different reasons though. Zoya was shocked finding an unknown person coming out of her room & he was shocked to see her'- Zoe who had been in the back of his mind constantly ever after he saw her in the beach that day.

"This girl is driving me nuts", Asad said holding his head as he thought she was a part of his imahgination again. "What's wrong with you? Can't you leave me alone for some time?"

Zoya was stunned to the core. See the audacity of this stupid man!

"What's wrong with YOU, not me, Mister? What the hell are you doing in MY room? And what do you mean by that?"

Asad was shocked realising that Zoe was really there before him, in blood & flesh. He wasn't imagining. And she was fighting with her!

"First of all, you are in my room. And then you are asking me to leave me alone, as if I am dying to be with you! Look Mister, you..."

Asad was getting irritated by her constant babbling and snapped at her:

"First of all, this is my room!"

"Oh really?", she glanced at him with wide eyes.

"Jee", said Asad calmly.

"This is my room", Zoya said loudly.

"This is my room, Miss New York!" said Asad matching her voice.

"You stalker! How do you know my name? You are following me aren't you?" Zoya glared at him, trying to look as threatning as possible.

Asad felt angry because nobody had ever accused him or talked to him like that.

"Look, this is MY house & MY room! So you better not..."

"Oh really? This is my Phoopi's house! This is the house of Asad Ahmed Khan, the owner of Dilshad Constructions. You don't know him, do you? Let me tell you, he is very very powerful & can beat ten thugs at the same time. He will kill you if you stay here for a second more, or if you lay even a finger on me. Get it? So better leave NOW & never look back at me or else I will make sure that Mr Kha...Asad gives you a lesson that you will never forget!"

Zoya made up these stories to threaten this stalker'. Asad tried his best to control his smile as she kept praising & boasting of Asad Ahmed Khan'. Finally a smile crept upon his face as she corrected the name & said Asad'! It sounded so different & beautiful when coming from her mouth. And she looked so vulnerable, adorably cute & innocent while babbling up like this, fear in her eyes. He won't ever get tired of adoring her beauty.

"Hello! Are you listening to me Mr Stalker?", Zoya snapped his fingers before his eyes. That brought him out of his lala land. He smirked at her & sais in ored to tease her:

" Well, have you ever met this Mr Asad Ahmed Khan?"

"Of course! What do you mean...what do you think...I am not lying, okay?" She was enrvous & defensive.

" Okay mam! What are you to him that he won't let anyone touch you?"

Asad was enjoying teasing her & of course, he won't let anyone touch her if asked.

"He...he...(Zoya racked his brain for a possible answer)...well, he...he is..my...my...FIANCEE!!!! Yess! He is my fianc & we are going to marry soon, okay?" She smiled & patted herself in my proud of her presence of mind.

Asad was caught off-guard by her reply. He never expected this to come out of her mouth & he blushed deeply.

" Aaa...actually...I am..." It was his turn to stutter.

"What happened? Scared, hun?", It was Zoya's turn to smirk.

"Can...can you please leave?" Asad finally said.

"Allah miyaan, what's wrong with you? This is my room & my house. Why should I leave?"

"Look, I am Asad Ahmed Khan & I don't know you. You are definitely not my fiancee. I have work. Please leave." He went into his Akdu mode.

Before he could protest, he went into the room & got his ID, that had his photograph & said Asad Ahmed Khan'. He showed her a family picture of his, Dilshad & Najma together. Zoya was left speechless & embarassed to the core. She felt very uncomfortable & said...

"Actually MrKhan...I am sorry. I thought...it was a stalker...so I lied...to scare..."

"You don't scare stalkers like that Miss", Asad was amused thinking of her lies again. How she claimed to be his fiancee.

"Miss Farooqui...Zoya Farooqui!" Zoya extened her hand for a hand shake, smiling.

"You...you are Zoya? Anwar Mamu's..." Asad was baffled.

"Yes! And m sorry you had to wait at the airport. And now...well, this is actually my room!" She added politely.

"Well Zo...Miss Farooqui, this is my room actually." Asad told her finally over the shock.

"No! Najma said it is mine & even my things are there in here!"

"Miss Farooqui, your things aren't here. Your room..."

"Allah Miyaan, what's wrong with you? I told this is my room! Why don't you believe me? Why don't you let me enter?" Zoya was annoyed now. So was Asad.

"Okay, come in & see. Your room is the opposite one." Asad opened the door and rubbed his forehead. She was giving him headache now.

Zoya stormed in & was surprised seeing the fully colourless' & totally clean & tidy room. She stopped in her tracks. Asad looked at her, hiding his smile.

"Well?" Asad raised his eyebrow.

Zoya was thinking hard to come out of her maun brat' and say something to get back at him. Suddenly her iPad beeped in her hands & her screen lit up with Reehan's cheerful face. She was so so glad for the distraction. She smiled at Asad unable to hide her happiness at being saved from the embarrassment and said "I got a call!" and immediately turned away & almost ran away. Asad smiled at her condition, but that smiled got wiped of his face and he fisted his hands when he heard some part of her conversation as she went away "Reyyy!!!!! I miss you so much!...aww, I love you much more! You know,..."

So that was the reason for her happiness. Asad felt so angry.

"Such a spoilt man! Calls a girl so late at night. Of course, she is no good. How cheerful she was! I hate such girls!"

Feeling angry, he shut off his laptop & went to bed. But sleep was far from his eyes. She had managed to spoil his mood.

"Such girls are always a disgrace to our society & culture. They will never be fit to be anyone's wife or bahu. They are total misfit in any respectable family"

Asad muttered to himself as if he got flashbacks of seeing her in arms of another man, her lover' back in NY, and then her telling him few minutes back how she was engaged to Asad'. His name coming from her mouth still rang in his ears like a sweet & bitter torture.



A/N. Kindly ignore any typing errors

Preeti🤗

Edited by PreetiASYArocks - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey Preeti ! U seriously cracked me up...
This was really very goo chapter... U again made me revisit
those surreal memories of qubool hai... U excatly made same as the show to enter zoya in that house and she said MA...
That funny convo with asad was really ROFL moment...
Without knowing him she said to him that she is his fiancee...
And that room thing u made it in ur own way that was good n zoya was adamant to see that room was her.
Do continue soon... And pm me...
Thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: --SH7_Sunny--

Hey Preeti ! U seriously cracked me up...
My pleasure😳
This was really very goo chapter... U again made me revisit
those surreal memories of qubool hai... U excatly made same as the show to enter zoya in that house and she said MA...

You know there are some scenes in QH that I will never ever think of changing!


That funny convo with asad was really ROFL moment...
Without knowing him she said to him that she is his fiancee...
And that room thing u made it in ur own way that was good n zoya was adamant to see that room was her.
Do continue soon... And pm me...
Thanks for the pm



Am glad you liked it. Most people might have forgotten the story though. I admit even I read all the parts again before writing this chapter😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update loved it
I think i have no words for it
It was just fab
It reminded me of old QH
Plzz plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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That was a lovely update..
Read all the parts in one go..
Please pm me when yu update.. Wouldn't wanna miss this..
I have sent you a buddy request..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pinks2911

That was a lovely update..

Read all the parts in one go..
Please pm me when yu update.. Wouldn't wanna miss this..
I have sent you a buddy request..



Ya I accepted it😃
Thank you
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Originally posted by: -Hinaloveasya-

Awesome update loved it

I think i have no words for it
It was just fab
It reminded me of old QH
Plzz plzzz do continue soon


Thank you so much Hina!😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you Prizi😳

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