asya FF Destiny part 1 page 4

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

It seems pretty interesting..it is very different..cant wait to for the next part..update soon.

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Shruti

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Very nice..continue soon thanks for the pm.

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Linsie

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

Asad is a ass... hmmm nice update...
Update soon

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nknaini

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

awesome story yar and nice concept and pls update soon and thanks 4 the pm

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veenisha

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

this is superb writing loved it

I really hope Asad falls for zoya soon

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Kurup

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

nice update...continue soooner...One thing tat i dint get is how come azad and zoya are staying with dilshaad and family...Is it going to b in a flashback mode...Coz they are rich enough and there family itself consists of 5 to 6 members and now azya tooo...

sorry if this quest troubled u, but just felt like asking...

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akaswan

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

very interesting please continue soon

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

hey tis is superb...luv it...

both asad n zoya are acting as husband n wife just to stay at the house its very interesting...

oh no hope asad will nt hurt zoya n hopefully tat by acting like tat they both will fall in love...

thx fr the p n do pm me for the next part...please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Black.Jack

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

Will someone please kick Asad's ass here! why a jerk? anyways nice start! by the way what's Zoya's job? and how are they staying at the Khan's residence...i mean koi relatives vaghera hain? and why do they have to act married? ... will we get to see Zoya teaching this jerk some lessons here?

nice update! continue soon!