AsYa SS ~| Reliving Mangalpur |~ LAST PART on PAGE 123 - Page 54

Originally posted by: mochhug

AHHH I LOVE THIS!!!!! WHY DIDN'T THEY DO MANGALPUR LIKE THIS!!?

Sorry my excitement got the best of me.. But seriously!!! Amazing, dhamakedar update!!! I swear I feel like I'm watching the Mahasangam in an alternate universe

When you wrote him thinking about making a fire I IMMEDIATELY wondered if Zoya would react later 😃😃😃 And she did! Ahh! I love love love love love love love it!

And the way he was protectively wrapping his arm around her, and covering her, and OMG HE PICKED HER UP! And the way she leaned into him more... *SWOONS*

Next update? Hmm well... maybe feeding each other 😃 They only showed him feeding her one morsel 😆

OR maybe you can show her having a nightmare! And he can comfort her! Then maybe he'll know about her fear and why it haunts her.. and maybe build from there in one or two updates more

Do what you think is best love! You are already doing a SMASHING job!

Can't wait for more!!

Originally posted by: rutu83

well i'll just sit here and reread this chapter sighing and smiling a stupid smile while you go ahead and update woh actually 😉 hint hint nudge nudge😆

Originally posted by: Linsie

I just love the way you write about that night effect
sound around the hut and stars...so lovely
Asya moments so sweet

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

finaallly I got the update...

I mst say u r MAAAZING SHAMAZING...

I mean yaar ek raaat ko itnaa lamba strch kiya ..😆 but phir bi flawless...

I dint felt any pailam paali...😆

d way u describe n elaborate each n every emotion n situation its WORTH APPLAUDING...👏

im sure CVs too couldn't hv done it if given a chance (ONCE AGAIN...😆)...😳

haaaye ye dekh ke na muje ek song rather ek MASHUP yaad aaayaa...

bouln?

if u r forcing this much to mein bol hi deti hun... 😆🤣

RAAT AKELI HAIN(BHUJ) HII NII DIYE...

HUM TUM EK JHOPDI MEIN BAND HO AUR THAND BADH JAAYE...

I know it sucks... it obviously do...🤣

pyaaz neeche rakh de yaar im going...🤣

well on a serious note I loved d whole update but SPECIFICALLLY d part whr ASAD is hurt tht zoya is not sharing her secrests wid him...n d way u wrote made it ol d more perfect...👏👏

awwieee 4 me... n guchhhe...

SHUKRIYAA...SHUKRIYAA...

🤗

TNX 4 D PM!!!😳

Originally posted by: --starstruck--

Haaayeee alisha i love love love LONGGG comments!

dil garden garden ho gaya 😆😆

you are so cute and adorable and i love

tera song 🤣 🤣 🤣 bohot hi mast tha! Yo baby yo! 😎

itne pyaare pyaare comments padh ke mere aankho main aasun aa gaye

itni khushi, haaye itni khushi :') :') :') 😆😆

and you named ayra guccheee? 🤣

how adorable 🤗

ale mela baiiiby... 😆

yeaah I call her SHEHED GUCCHE ... HONEYBUNCH u see..

🤗🤗 im khush s bhii zyaada happy u liked it... 🤗

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa

sachhhiii??

shukriyaaa... shukriya...

ale mela baiiiby... 😳😆

yeaah I call her SHEHED GUCCHE ... HONEYBUNCH u see.. 🤣

🤗🤗 im khush s bhii zyaada happy u liked it... 😳🤗

Originally posted by: Gurmeet4Drashti

Hey ...

This was just brilliant ...

I've got no words to describe how beautiful this chapter was ... I don't know for some reason I didn't want the chapter to end ...

It was just lovely !!!

Thanks for the pm :D