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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#521

so good...i love ur style to put each & evry detail ..loved it..

waiting 4 d next

pari

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#522

I just love the way you write about that night effect
sound around the hut and stars...so lovely
Asya moments so sweet

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rads73937

@rads73937

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#523

AWWW IT WAS SUCH A CUTE UPDATE.

THE WAY ASAD CARED FOR ZOYA.

IT WAS JUST AWESOME.

LOVED IT.

THANX FOR THE PM. TAKE CARE.

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A.Hajnal

@A.Hajnal

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#524

That was awesome up-date...Asya are getting close up-date by up-date...Lovely...!!! 😳

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Santhosh Banda

@Santhu.The.King

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#525

Update After Long...It Was Awesome 👏
Felt Bad For Asad... He Thinks Zoya Don't Trust Him Enough...😭
His Illusion Will Break Soon... Just Like Zoya's 😉
Well... Update Soon... Woh Actually Next.. 😛

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#526

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa
finaallly I got the update...
I mst say u r MAAAZING SHAMAZING...
I mean yaar ek raaat ko itnaa lamba strch kiya ..😆 but phir bi flawless...

I dint felt any pailam paali...😆

d way u describe n elaborate each n every emotion n situation its WORTH APPLAUDING...👏

im sure CVs too couldn't hv done it if given a chance (ONCE AGAIN...😆)...😳

haaaye ye dekh ke na muje ek song rather ek MASHUP yaad aaayaa...

bouln?

if u r forcing this much to mein bol hi deti hun... 😆🤣

RAAT AKELI HAIN(BHUJ) HII NII DIYE...

HUM TUM EK JHOPDI MEIN BAND HO AUR THAND BADH JAAYE...

I know it sucks... it obviously do...🤣

pyaaz neeche rakh de yaar im going...🤣

well on a serious note I loved d whole update but SPECIFICALLLY d part whr ASAD is hurt tht zoya is not sharing her secrests wid him...n d way u wrote made it ol d more perfect...👏👏

awwieee 4 me... n guchhhe...

SHUKRIYAA...SHUKRIYAA...

🤗

TNX 4 D PM!!!😳

Your song was hilarious Alisha😆😆 ...pyaaz niche rakh de???😆😆

Sadie, If you are wondering what guchhe is...its my nickname given by Alisha😳😆😆

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#527

Originally posted by: -HoneyBunch-

Your song was hilarious Alisha😆😆 ...pyaaz niche rakh de???😆😆

Sadie, If you are wondering what guchhe is...its my nickname given by Alisha😳😆😆

sachhhiii?😲😃😆 thaaanx...

obvio yaar muje laga bechaari inni dair se DHAIRRRYE K SAATH sab sun ri hain... ab tak to...volcano phaattt...😆

oh yaaa thaanx 4 mentioning haan gucchhhe m bhool gyi thi..😆

yeah Sadie she is my pyaala sa cuchi cuchii coo guchha...😆

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-khaleesi-

@-khaleesi-

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#528

I was anxiously waiting for your update since 31st. Please continue soon this time. 😊

I loved this update esp. the part with AsYa sleeping in each other's arms.

Asad is a sweetheart! ❤️

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mrs. varun dhawan but you can call me fari. :)

@daydream.

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#529

Aw, that was awesome! 👏 👏 👏 One of the best parts so far! 👍🏼

"Mr.Khan, stop smiling at the moon and go to sleep!" 😆 Loved this, for some weird reason.

I loved Asad in this chapter he was all thoughtful and sweet. . .and his OCD in the shed! 😆

Anyways, so Asad doesn't know about Zoya and the fire thing. Huh. Wonder when he'll find out. 😳

This chapter was SOSOSO cute, how they were in each other's arms and everything, and awww!

LOVED IT! ❤️

-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Nida

@Gurmeet4Drashti

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#530

Hey ...

This was just brilliant ...

I've got no words to describe how beautiful this chapter was ... I don't know for some reason I didn't want the chapter to end ...

It was just lovely !!!

Thanks for the pm :D

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