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Posted: 12 years ago
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Kash Tum Mere Hote Part-3


Important details
1.)name of zoya's mom is FATIMA
2.)zoya's mom calls her PARI
3.)tameem also loves tanveer from the childhood,they are neighbours,n tameem proposed tanveer once but she refused his proposal
Location: zoya's home

doorbell rings
Fatima-ramlal darvaja khol do,zoya beti aaa gai

ramlal-ji malkin

zoya enters the house,n starts dancing n singing the song BAJLI GIRANE MAI HU AAI,KEHTE HAI MUJHKO HAWA HAWAI

Fatima-ab to sach me sare ghar me bijli giregi humari toofan beti jo aa gai hai,beta hath mu dho lo humne aapke liye pizza mangwaya hai

zoya-wow pizza,abhi aai... Nai mai nai khaungi pizza n khana bhi nai khaungi

Fatima-aisa kyu pari beta(with affection fatima calls zoya as PARI),aap khana kyu nai khaogi?

Zoya-kuch nai mom

Fatima-beta kuch to baat hai aap hume btao

zoya cries

zoya-mom khana khane se mai aur moti ho jaungi,aur padhai me mai vaise hi gadhi hu ekdum

fatima-aur ye kisne kaha aapse ki aap moti,aap ekdum fit n fine ho,bas thodi ki golu molu ho aap,aur thoda diet food khaogi to sab theek ho jaega,ramjaan aa raha hai,is ramjaan aap pure roje rakh lena to aap ekdum fit ho jaogi,aur padhai ki tension mat lo aap,aap na bahut intelligent ho but problem ye hai ki aap sirf exam ke samay padhti ho,promise karo ki ab se aap daily 3 hour pura man laga ke padhogi to dekhna aapke marks bahut ache aaenge,kyuki exam ke samay 12 hrs padhna aur roj 3 hrs padhna ek hi baat hai even roj thoda padhna jyada better hai kyuki isse stress nai hota

zoya smiles n hugs her mom

zoya-mom aap duniya ki sab se achi mom ho

now zoya tends to go toward her room

fatima-abhi bhi naraj ho kya pari?

Zoya-nahi mom,naraj hoe mere dushman,mai padhai karne ja rai hu,aur ha ek slice pizza mere room me bhijwa dena,waise bhi kal se ramjaan chalu hone wala hai

Asad's home
asad is at his home using Facebook
he got a friendrequest by a strange girl Zara,
he thought for a while n accepted it,he got a message by her that



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hume to apka hi intejar ta... ki ap frnd req accept kre or hum jiinda ho jae

Saturday at 11:21pm Sent from Web


lagta hai ki koi pagal ladki hai anyways i am not gonna reply this despo ladki and also i have to inform tanveer abt her thinks Asad

he shuts down the pc,and calls tanveer

phone rings
some one picks the phone n its the welknown male voice

then tanveer comes on phone

asad:ye tameem tumhare ghar pe kya kar raha hai princess

tanveer:are jana dnt forget that he is also my neighbour and family friend

asad:i dont like him being there in your house

tanveer:dnt be possesive he is my best friend

asad:so what aur tumhi ne kaha tha ki wo tumhe bachpan se pyar karta hai,jao shadi kar lo usse,bata do apni mom ko tmhe usse shadi karna hai

tanveer:ha ha bta dungi mom ko,mom to khush ho jaegi,humari family chahi hai ki humari dosti rishtedari me badle par phir bhi hum aapse pyar karte hai aur aap humse aise baat kar rahe hai aapko pta nai hai ki aapne hume kitna hurt kiya hai

tanveer cuts the call n throw the phone on soya,
asad again calls

this time tameem picks up

asad:dur raho tanveer se

tameem:tanveer sirf meri hai

asad:tanveer mujhse pyar karti hai

tameem:pyar to wo apne kutto se bhi karti hai,par yaad rakhna shadi uski sirf hum se hi hogi

In the feat of anger asad cuts the call and he forgets to tell tanveer abt this Facebook girl zara

to be continued soon...

Kya zara naam ki id tameem ka koi trap hai asad ke liye ya phir zoya hi hai zara???,kaise ek ho paenge asad and zoya???

to know more wait for the next epi


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Posted: 12 years ago
#32
Tanveer seems to be good... knowingly unknowingly Asad always ends up hurting Zoya...
Asad seems to be really in love with Tanveer then how will Asad n Zoya will fall in love...
Tameem is a bad guy? Zara is his plan? Or as you said Zoya is Zara??
Anyways I love this story please pm me when you will update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#33
Awesome...I hope asad gets the soft corner for zoya soon...can't wait for u to update..plz post soon.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh thank god u updtd! 😃 d updt good as usual! Bt it was a very chotu updt! :-( i want looong looong updts! Anyways zoya n mum part ws cute! Im eagerly waitn 4 d big twist!hope ul updt early ths time n tht too a long 1!😳 tnx 4 d updt!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: mysticlover

Tanveer seems to be good... knowingly unknowingly Asad always ends up hurting Zoya...
Asad seems to be really in love with Tanveer then how will Asad n Zoya will fall in love...
Tameem is a bad guy? Zara is his plan? Or as you said Zoya is Zara??
Anyways I love this story please pm me when you will update...

ya in my story everyone is good,ya right now asad is deeply in love with tanveer but the destiny will conspire to bring asya together,
ok abt zara keep on guessing u will know soon the secret of zara in next episode
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Posted: 12 years ago
#36

Originally posted by: Jassieg

Awesome...I hope asad gets the soft corner for zoya soon...can't wait for u to update..plz post soon.

asya are not gonna be together so much soon,
now asad have to suffer alot n zoya have to grow as a mature,confident girl,destiny will conspire to bring them together
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Posted: 12 years ago
#37

Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1

oh thank god u updtd! 😃 d updt good as usual! Bt it was a very chotu updt! :-( i want looong looong updts! Anyways zoya n mum part ws cute! Im eagerly waitn 4 d big twist!hope ul updt early ths time n tht too a long 1!😳 tnx 4 d updt!

thanks,yep i updated long but as i told u that yesterday the update got deleted so i had only this short update,sorry
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Posted: 12 years ago
#38
Apna Tou Chahaton Mein Yehi Usool Hai,

Jab Tu Qabool Hai,

Tou Tera Sub Kuch Qabool Haii.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#39
awesome story and update soon...and pls if u can pls make and index so it will be easier to knw in which page u have update the parts
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Posted: 12 years ago
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looks intresting n different n plz pm when u next update

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