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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

what i think is to show the same pain because when someone is in love there is no need of words to be spoken there eyes spoke a lot

and little of that... for asya...

and by end of the 7 days... they should burst in to confession

of what happen six years ago...

how wrong is zoya...?? 😡 😡

thanks for the suggestions, i hope you will accept it the way i will write it

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: NAVI55

👍🏼Brilliant update dear...👍🏼 thanks dear

Finally Asad has a chance to patch things up with Zoya...I really hope that all the misunderstandings will be cleared... hmmm i will try to fulfill ur hope soon😉
I would love to read about asya but also Sidra and asad's growing closeness. What would be even better would be if you can write about all of them as a family... ohkay will try
What's with Nikhat and Najma...Don't they get along here??? well wait dear
Waiting to read your next update... updating

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Originally posted by: srilu_123

amzing one

thanks dear



Originally posted by: Azraa01

Just read it all in one go and it was superb.thanks dear. Please pm me when you update. sure

You need to let Asad and Zoya clear the misunderstandings within a day or 2 so we can get Asya-licious moments and Asad Sidhra bonding.. hahahaha will try

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hello everyone, i am here with next chapter, apologies in advance as it's not asya filled update, it's just a formal update, please bare with it i promise next update will only of asya and sidra and will try to update sooner



Part 10;-


zoya was busy in packing her and sidra's bag while sidra was busy in thinking a reason that why they both are leaving her family and where will they go... in every 15 minutes she came with a new reason making her mind and she was doing this from last 2 hours and now she came again 'mama, mama please listen' sidra said 'yeah baby...what happen?' asked zoya who was now zipping up there suit case 'actually mama, i think we are leaving aunty, uncle, hamza bhaijaan and mady becauj we are playing a game and you want me to stay away from them so i can win this game...right na mama?' sidra said with a bit excitment of playing game, 'no baby it's jus...' zoya was going to deny about this reason but she stopped in the mid, she carried her suitcase and put it on the corner of the room and sat on the bed with sidra on her lap 'why you think that it's a game?' zoya asked sweetly 'wo...actually...wo mama...you know my best friend swmayya...hain na?' zoya remembered old times when she saw sidra struggling for words totally like her father, asad but she was recovered from this thought as soon as sidra questioned her again 'yeah my jaan, i know her very well'

'you know na mama that she was like me?' here comes an other question 'like you?' zoya frowned 'han na mama, she was like me, she did'nt have abu and her uncle ehsaan and aunty kashaf was very bad, they always scold her, she don't like them' 'ohkay then' 'so mama one day she told me that she and her mama are leaving her uncle and aunty's home and will leave this city too' 'oh but why are you telling me this beta?' 'ara ara mama wait na let me finish' she pouted 'ohkay ohkay i'm sorry i will not disturb you now' said zoya holding her ears 'it's okay mama, so i was sad but she was very happy and she told me that her mama told her that they are playing a game and if they want to win this game so they have to leave this city and when they will win this game they will come back here' she said with little sadly 'so she came back right?' zoya asked again 'mama' sidra glared her and said in an angry tune 'oops sorry, i am zipping up my mouth, i promise will not speak anything again' replied zoya and then placed one of her finger on her lips, sidra giggled and continued 'then you know what happen, when we are in class one na, i mean last year she came back and not only with her ami but with her abu...she told me that it was her gift becauj she won that game, she lived away from here for 6 months na' as soon as she finished she looked at zoya waiting for her to speak but she kept quite 'ofho mama why are you not saying something, i had finished already' sidra said getting irritate from her silence, zoya removed her finger from her lips and sighs 'thank God finally this stroy is over...hmmm...ohkay so that's why you think that it is a game...'

'yes but mama i don't understand one thing that her uncle and aunty were not good but my uncle anwar and aunty zeenat are very nice na so why we are leaving' her question again took zoya in her thoughts, sidra waited for her reply but zoya was losted so she shook her through her shoulder 'mama,mama answere na' she said 'huh? what answere baby?' zoya said coming out of her thoughts 'mama i am asking that her uncle and aunty were not good but my uncle anwar and aunty zeenat are very nice na so why we are leaving?' 'ohh, actually jaan we are leaving because i too want to give you your abu' zoya said after thinking a strong answere 'but mama i already have my abu na...you told me yourself that mady is my abu'
'yes i told you but because mama and mady are not husband and wife na so you can not call him abu infront of everyone' zoya said and sidra cheered 'yay that means i can call mady ''abu'' for always' she said jumping on the bed 'but mama what we have to do?' sidra asked as she stopped jumping on the bed, zoya looked at her with a smile 'jaan come here' zoya said extending her hand for sidra to take it and she took and came and sat beside zoya 'ohkay now listen, and yeah don't speak between me, first let me finish then you can question...ohkay?' zoya asked and she nodded

'ohkay so you guessed right, we are playing a game and in this game we will go and live somewhere else for a whole week and during this if we will not meet anyone like uncle anwar, aunty zeenat, hamza bhaijaan and yeah mady so we will win this game and then our gift will that you will get your abu' the way zoya explained she too noticed changing expressions of sidra, from excitment to confusion to sadness and finally to happiness she kissed zoya on her cheek and then ran outside the room to explain others about there game...zoya stood looking at sidra running out of the room look sidra is just like you asad, she always remind me of yours, the way she speak, the way she smiles, her dimples, her nature everything is just like you asad, i don't understand why you don't want to listen anything about our daughter asad, i know that you love sofia but what was the need to bring sidra between all this, you never tried to meet us not even contacted us, and just cut out this damn "us" it was only sidra, and now the way you behaved outside the court it was like you really want your daughter back, i don't know but when ever i think that i know you asad you do something which make me believe that i can't understand who you are actually... she felt something wet on her cheeks and touched it to find tears, she was crying, she always promised herself that she will never cry but she do, she cry for him, for asad...she can't not again

Next Morning
asad was getting ready he was happy finally he was going to meet his daughter, zoya this time i will not let you go, i will fix everything, i need answeres zoya... you have to answere all my questions zoya, i know i never contacted you but it was because of your rudeness because you never told me the reason before leaving, i never knw what mistake i did, but now i will do whatever i can to bring you back
with that he took his coat from the bed and left from the house with his car's keys

zoya and sidra were ready before, sidra was eagerly waiting for that person with whom she will go 'oho mama, who will come to pick us, i am so excited' said said pacing in the drawing room 'just relax sady, he will be here at 9, relax' said mohsin trying to control his irritation 'it's 9 mady, see your watch' said sidra looking at the wallclock and then doorbell rang and sidra ran towards the maindoor with joy and open it...zoya heartbeat skipped and she slowly walked towards the door, she looked at sidra who was looking at the person with shock, yes she was looking at asad shockingly 'sidra, we will go with him' said zoya as soon as she reached to the door, sidra looked at zoya and then back at the door where asad was standing 'Mr.Khan, mama we are going with Mr.Khan?' 'yes sidra you both are going with me' before zoya could answere sidra's question asad intereuppted them 'now zoya can we please leave i don't want to waste this precious time' said asad looking at zoya who was looking losted

zoya and sidra bit goodbye to all and left with asad, they all reached at Khan Mansion after a good drive of 30 minutes, no one was speaking anything during the drive, asad and zoya losted in there thoughts and sidra noticing both of them one by one, as soon as they reached khan mansion, asad carried sidra inside the house leaving zoya outside, all the memories of past flashbacked infront of her eyes, it was'nt the first she came to this house after those 6 years but this time the feeling was different, she rememebered everything there fights, there love, there understanding and then there missunderstandings between eachother...everything was perfect, everything then why asad why you did that...what was the need to do that? again tears start falling from her eyes and like always she wipped it but does she know that THE ASAD AHMED KHAN had gone through the same


first of all sorry for any mistake and then please do share your precious comments and don't forget to hit like button

A/N;-guyz please bear with this story the way it is proceeding, i know what i am writing but i can't do it if you guyz will not support me so please be with me till end

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

resed so soon
u r the first
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Both reached khan mansion
Now it's time to clear all misunderstanding between Asya
Hope they will forget the past
& find each other again
Thanks for PM
Continue soon

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