#1 |Akhir Dil Mil Hi Gayee| [Chapter 1 to Chapter 13] - Page 67

when will you update????? Update soon...

so sorry for late comment . woww.. relived the mu between

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27

Hahahaha silly girl 😆 😆 😆

Anyways glad you liked the update !

Thankew so much for the appreciation 😳 😳

Precap ! 😆 😆 idk.. 😆 😆 sidhe update 😳

pleasureee😃😃

sidhe update , so wen u updating😉😉

i m waiting😛

That was simply adorable!!
Asad's anger... his lashing out n breaking things was so intense... I totally loved it...
Then Zoya's entry n she climbed the rail to his room like a crazy lover herself but slipped making way for Asad to save her...
The series of accusations n kisses n hugs that followed were really amazing...
Finally, they patches up n everything is just fine!! :)

Originally posted by: Asya_fannn

That was ...

I Loved it to core ! !

The way you explained AsYa's emotion ! ! Mindblowing !

Asad saxing Zoya and dat bone crushing hug ! Awww...

i really loved that !

Than that all accusions...realizations ! and than KISS 😳 😳 And than nok-jhok regarding the room !! u described it beautifully ! ! 😳 😳

LOVED it ! !

update soon please...

Aww thankew so much dea for that colourful comment !

Originally posted by: jasminerose

hey the last two updates were lovely.😊

Originally posted by: aish-au

2 passionate now dat's what i call a treat. thnks for an lovely, hottt, intense update.

Originally posted by: -Raj-

loved the update!!

the kisses and hugs were awesome!!

also finally the misunderstandings have cleared now!!

very well penned!\thanks for the pm.

Originally posted by: Tazzytaz

I love it. It's awesome.

Originally posted by: jazsidhu

hey tis is amazing...

luv it...

fabulous...

asad n zoya are too cute n luckly all the misunderstanding are clear between them...

asad n zoya confess their feeling for each other...

eagerly waiting for the next part...

thx fr the pm n do continue soon n do pm me...