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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow ywr it was awsum simply awsum
Loved the kiss
No precap:(
Plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
hmmm.. asad stole zoya's second kiss... ❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
That was ...


I Loved it to core ! !

The way you explained AsYa's emotion ! ! Mindblowing !


Asad saxing Zoya and dat bone crushing hug ! Awww...

i really loved that !


Than that all accusions...realizations ! and than KISS 😳 😳 And than nok-jhok regarding the room !! u described it beautifully ! ! 😳 😳



LOVED it ! !
update soon please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Comment repeated...ooOpss...sorry ! ! ! Had to edit !
LOve ya ! 🤗 😆 😆
Edited by Asya_fannn - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey the last two updates were lovely.😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
2 passionate now dat's what i call a treat. thnks for an lovely, hottt, intense update.
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved the update!!
the kisses and hugs were awesome!!
also finally the misunderstandings have cleared now!!
very well penned!\thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150


Res

Unres

yipeee i m d first...

like mad i was going on refreshing d page that u wil update now...and finally u updated😃😃😃

coming to the update...it was the best👏👏👏

asad saving zoya from falling then hugging her but den again remebered the covo between zoya and kabir...it was perfect👍🏼👍🏼

thee whole convo was lovely dovely...😛

and there KISS it was perfect😉





in short i loved the update❤️❤️

u very well explained the emotions of asya...ur the queen of expressing one's emotionss⭐️⭐️⭐️

precap...??😭😭😭

updatee nxt prtt soonn😳😳

Hahahaha silly girl 😆 😆 😆
Anyways glad you liked the update !

Thankew so much for the appreciation 😳 😳

Precap ! 😆 😆 idk.. 😆 😆 sidhe update 😳


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ...Asya...

--RES--

--UNRES--


LOVE IT!!
UR THE BEST WRITER!!
I WISHED TO BE 1ST BUT COULT NOT

--MY FAVORITE LINES--
Zoya : " What was he saying??"

Najma : " Ammi said he was saying... "I hate you zoya" and she started crying. 😭

Zoya was deep rooted in her position. She couldn't speak anything. Was that Asad, whose footsteps I heard when I was talking with Kabhir. Could that be him?? Did he misunderstood my response to Kabhir's proposal as well?? Oh god !! Asad...

Without speaking a single word, she rushed towards the exit, reached to her car and drove off.

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Asad on hearing her scream rushed towards the balcony and was shocked to see her, fighting with her life, strongly holding on the railings, eyes closed tightly and screaming his name.

" ZOYA! ! !" c'mon catch my hand. Nothing will happen to you, trust me."

He gave his hand to her and after some effort she was able to hold it. He gently pulled her over the railing and to his balcony. As soon as she stepped onto his balcony, he gave her a bone crushing hug, as if his life depended on it. " Are you stupid?? What were you doing?? You know what could have happened??"

And suddenly he remembered :

" Zoya! I LOVE YOU! I really do."

"Yeh keheneke liye yaha laye the?? I LOVE YOU too silly!"
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" Who said that?? Who said that I don't care for you?? And who said that you don''t mean anything for me, when you are the only thing that means world to me right now!" She said...rather shouted !

"Is that what you said to Kabhir as well??" He said sarcastically.

"Oh...that was the reason. Was that you outside, while I was talking to Kabhir??

"YES THAT WAS ME WHO LISTENED HIS PROPOSAL TO YOU AND YOUR ACCEPTANCE!! And I am sorry if I shouldn't have. You can't play with me now. Right?? I am extremely SORRY ! " He said sternly.

"Asad, you are taking me wrong. I said him I love you too as a friend not as a boyfriend. Even he misunderstood that I accepted his proposal but later on..."

"STOP IT ZOYA! FOR GOD SAKE! I DON'T NEED YOUR EXPLANATIONS! JUST GET OUT OF HERE!"

"I am not giving explanation Asad. I am saying you the truth."

"And the truth is that you love kabhir and you are with him." He said taunting her.

"NO! THE TRUTH IS I LOVE YOU DAMMIT! Why don't you get that?"
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" Please, Zoya. Enough of this. Don't play with me and my emotions." He couln't stop his tears. 😭

She came closer to him, took his wounded hand on hers and slowly spoke, " I am not playing with you Asad. please aaise naraj mat ho mujse.. bardast nahi hota." 😭

"JHUTT ! sap jhutt. Sach toh yeh hai ki u love kabhir and you are flirting with me right now. Making fun of my emotions for you." He said angrily and huffed off to his room and sat on the floor, his back rested on the edge of the bed, knees folded up and his head rested between his legs.

Why is she saying that she loves me? Why now? She accepted Kabhir's proposal in front of my eyes. Did i really misunderstood? But ?? He couldn't comprehend the happenings around him.

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He looked at her and said, " Please zoya, I will not come between you and kabhir, never. But leave me alone. I would not be able to see you in front of me. Dar lagta hai kahi kuch galat na kar baithu ! please !" He pleaded her.

"Mere sath jo karna hein karo but aise naraj mat ho Asad. Kabhir sirf mera dost hai, but you are someone special, someone more than friend from the very first day. Kabhir proposed me today, but i didn't take it seriously. I thought he was saying I LOVE YOU in a friendly manner so i said him in the same sense. I was not serious. But later on when i found he's serious, I rejected his proposal saying that i love someone else, and you very well know who that someone else is."

Asad looked at her.
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She picked his phone from the bed. Handing the phone to him she said, "Speak with Kabhir and clear your misunderstandings." Asad turned the other way. He couldn't face her after what he had accused her of.

Zoya was getting angry by now. " Mr. Asad Ahmed Khan ! You don't have the right to accuse me without knowing the truth. You have to talk to Kabhir, and even then if you think that I was wrong, I will get out of your life and go back to NY.

Asad looked at her instantly on hearing that grabbed her hand and made her sit on his lap.
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And before Zoya could respond, he had pressed his lips on her and was kissing her passionately implying all his anger, frustation, pain, love, in that kiss. Zoya's hand snaked his neck in its own accord and she found herself deepening the kiss. Right now this was the only thing they found right to do, to decrease the tension rising between them.
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Zoya : " You stole my second kiss as well." She raised her eyebrow.

Asad : " You wanted Kabhir to steal it??" He smirked at her.

Zoya, who didn't notice that smirk on his face thought he was still angry with her.

Zoya : "Asad you were the one, i had my first kiss with and now this second one as well. You were the one i chatted with, whole night. Your text brings smile on my face. Your presence quickens my heartbeat. Your absence creates havoc in my mind. You talking and hugging any other girls makes me jealous. Your funny jokes and talks makes me laugh out loud Asad. So how come you think that Kabhir might be special than you? You were the one for me Asad...always. ALWAYS... I LOVE..."

Asad placed his hand on her mouth. "Don't you think i should be the one saying that??"

And he once again smacked her lips with his own in a gentle kiss which turned into a much more passionate than the previous one.

Zoya was shocked at his words and action at first...she tried to comprehend what did that mean..but later on gave up and concentrated on the breathtaking kiss by a person who right now seemed to be a deadly-kisser.

After parting away Asad gently took her hand in his.
" I don't need any explanations now Zoya. I am sorry for not trusting you. For misbehaving with you. I AM SORRY ! " He looked into her eyes, guilt clear in his eyes.
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asad : "ROOM??" He looked around his room and at once stood up! " What did i do to my room?? Zoya! yeh sab tumhari waja se huwa hai, aab sab tum hi thik karoge!"

Zoya : "Accha ! Did i say you to break these things. You yourself did this turning into a mad lover."😆😆

He moved closer to her, held her by her waist and said, " On whose love?"😆

Zoya : "Of course mine😳." She pecked him lightly on his cheek and tried to run away when Asad held her hand.

Asad :"Who's gonna clean the room??"😆😆

Zoya : " Oh my god Asad! your hand! Oh god! Even I forgot about it! Come here, let me first aid it firstly."

She bandaged his hand, while he looked at her, mesmerized by her beauty, her innocence. How could i even think that she would ditch me. Asad ! You are just impossible. " I LOVE YOU ZOYA!"
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He watched her laughing and mentally promised himself that, he will always keep her happy and never let that tear exit out of her eyes and engulfed her into a sudden hug surprising Zoya.
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love it..
your the best writer!!😳
i gave a long list and i covered every part😆😆😆cuz i love u and ur full part.
i thought asad would have tried to kill himself but thank god😆

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Awww baby 😳 😳 thankew so much !
Glad you liked !

yeah u mentioned most of the past 😆 😆

Yeah even i planned to write accident wala part bt dn thut of changing it 😆

anyways thankss 😳

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Mahima--

wohoo

finally an update

this was superb

glad that all misunderstandings are now clear

loved the whole confession part

and kisses and hugs were amazing



She was in her balcony. Should I go?? Yeah Zoya you can. He always sneaks to your room and why can't you. But it seems lil bit dangerous. The gap between our balconies is not too much but...I will go..that's final.

He gave his hand to her and after some effort she was able to hold it. He gently pulled her over the railing and to his balcony. As soon as she stepped onto his balcony, he gave her a bone crushing hug, as if his life depended on it. " Are you stupid?? What were you doing?? You know what could have happened??"

" Who said that?? Who said that I don't care for you?? And who said that you don''t mean anything for me, when you are the only thing that means world to me right now!" She said...rather shouted !

"NO! THE TRUTH IS I LOVE YOU DAMMIT! Why don't you get that?"

And before Zoya could respond, he had pressed his lips on her and was kissing her passionately implying all his anger, frustation, pain, love, in that kiss. Zoya's hand snaked his neck in its own accord and she found herself deepening the kiss. Right now this was the only thing they found right to do, to decrease the tension rising between them.

She bandaged his hand, while he looked at her, mesmerized by her beauty, her innocence. How could i even think that she would ditch me. Asad ! You are just impossible. " I LOVE YOU ZOYA!"

Thankew so much mahima dee 😃 😃
I will also give only kisses and hugs in my update i guess 😆 😆

bacchi hu na can't write mature contents 😳 😆 😆

Anyways glad u liked 😳

Love ya too !!!! ❤️

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