Asya: sachi mohabaat

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Just an attempt to write something On asya.


Zoya came to tannu after graveyard incident.
Zoya: tanveer muje tumhari sharat manjoor hai. Main Mr. Khan ko kuch nahi bataugi. Ab tum muje bato ke mere Abu kun hai.
Tanveer: hum Jante they zoya ke tum apne Abu se Milne ke liye kuch bhi karogi. Par tumhare Abu ka pata mien tume mere aur tumhare Mr. Khan ke Nikah ke bad bataugi.
Zoya: tanveer mien tum par trust kyun karo ke tum Nikah ke bad sab sach bata do gi.
Tanveer: with evil smirk, tumhare pass muj par trust Karne ke bina aur koi rasta bi to nahi hai.

Zoya look with tears to tanveer and leave the room by nodding her head to yes to tannu.



In zoya room:

Zoya was thinking about tanveer. In her head: agar mien mr. Khan ko sab kuch bata bi deti hu to Kya wo muj par trust karege. Nahi kabi nahi. Wo pyar to mujse karate Hain trust nahi. Wo mujse proof mange ge jo mere pass hai nahi.
Ya, Allah meri madad kar. Mujhe rasta dikah.

At same time her phone ring.
She talk to that person on phone.

Soon after she left the home.
Zoya was walking in mall.

Zoya was too busy with her thoughts that she did not notice steps properly.
She slip from one step and was about to fall but there is someone who grab her at exact time to avoid to hit the ground.
Who is this man, he has cute face, medium complex and his look is dashing. A cute smile on his face is cherry on the cake.
Zoya was looking at him with smile.

There was someone else as well who was witnessing this with angry look. He was about to catch zoya but unfortunately this time he was late. Yes it is asad. Who is looking shatered.

Zoya with loud voice said farhan.
Farhan: aur kyun ho sakta hai. Tumhari girne ki adat abhi tak gayi nahi.
Zoya: with smile main tumse baat nahi karna chahti tum India a kar muje bata rahe ho. She made face.
Farhan: bata to diya tumhari Tara nahi ke Nikah kar liya aur bataya bhi nahi.

Zoya felt a sharp pain in her heart and tears run out from her eyes.
With pain she said mere Nikah nahi hua.
Farhan was shocked.
Asad was listening it and he felt guilty nd left.

Farhan try to wipe her tears with tumb and said zoya you know I cannot bear your tears.
He try to make her happy by making faces and after sometime zoya smile a little.
( farhan is zoya's childhood friend. He loves zoya but know that it is one sided and he just want to see zoya happy. For this he could do anything.)

In cafeteria:
Farhan and zoya sitting and having coffe.
Zoya told him everything about tanveer and her dirty tricks.

Farhan made a fist in anger. But he control it and try to cheer up zoya.
Zoya: farhan main nahi janti main Kya kaur. Par mien asad se bhaut mohabbat karti hu. Mien unke bina ab Zinda nahi reh sakti. She was sobbing.

Farhan had tears in his eyes but also has a cute smile on face.
Farhan: zoya faruqui yo humesha kehte hai ke iss duniya mien koi aisa kaam nahi jo wo nahi kar sakti.
Ajj himmat haar gai. Kya sach mien pyar insan ko kamjoor kar deta hai.
Zoya: quickly stand up from chair and said in loud voice that she can do anything even now with confidence.
Farhan: that is my zoya. Now stop crying and we can make plan after all we did James Bond planing in New York.
Zoya smile and sit again.
They made a plan.

In khan house:

Zoya came home with a smile. Asad was sitting on couch. She ignore him and went past with a smile on her face. She straight went to dilshaad room.

Asad was very upset by looking at her but little bit happy as well by seeing her smiling again.

Tannu notice it and was happy to see that zoya is ignoring asad.


After an hour dilshaad came downstairs with zoya.
She announce that tomorrow will be ring ceremony of asad and tannu.
Asad completely shocked and broken. He look at zoya and was surprised by seeing her smiling.
Zoya: Hain puphi agar Nikah ho raha hai tu Hume sari rasme to karni chahiye.
Asad was looking at her confused.
Zoya phuphi main apki madad karogi sab decoration mien.


Asad left the place and shut the door with force. Tannu looking everything and was very happy.

Next day:

asad came. He was looking hot but lost and broken. Tanveer came in white sari. Her look was more cheap than wh**e.😡

Here zoya came in beautiful pink red and cute smile on her face. Asad mesmerised by her and remember their engagement. He has tears in eyes.
Asad stood lifeless and was about to put ring at same time door bell ring.

Zoya went to open the door and it was farhan.

Zoya start introduction.
She said meet my friend farhan . He is owner of mannat group of hotels.
Then she introduced asad as son of dilshaad and owner of dilshaad construction.
They shake hand.
Farhan to asad : I know you not by face but your company made a few hotels for my company in Bhopal.
Asad nod in yes.

Zoya with smile to dilshaad :thanks phophi apne mere liye itna kiya. App ne meri aur farhan ki engagement bhi aj Issi waqt Karne ke liye sab kiya. Thanks phophi and she hug her.

Asad was completely shocked ring fell from his hand and he manage to say: apki engagement with tears.

Zoya: ji mr. Khan. Farhan sab jantia hai humare Nikah ke bare mien . He has no problem.
Mien bhi apni zindgi mien age jana chahti hu sab Bool kar.
By looking at farhan she said she is very happy that finally she get married in coming days.
Asad complete broken was about fall, he said muje kuch kaam hai mien main ata hu.
He left the house.

Tanveer was angry but she stood their look the engagement of zoya and farhan.
Farhan took ring in his hand and zoya raise her hand.
Farhan was shocked because zoya has bandage on her ring finger. He asked zoya what happen.

Zoya with wink.
Kuch nahi aj decoration karte same knife se cut lag Gaya.
Dilshaad: koi baat nahi farhan tum dushri ungli mien ring pehna do.
Farhan did same and they complete the ceremony.
Tanveer was looking towards door for asad but he did came. It was almost night.

Night time:
Asad entered house lifelessly. Zoya was in kitchen.
He went near to her and said app asa kaise kar sakti Hain . App to mujse mohabaat karti Hain na. Phir app kissi aur se engagement kar kar kaise kush reh sakti hai.

Zoya was about to loose control on her emotions but she saw tannu behind pillar.
Zoya: mr. Khan mane Kya kiya. Ristha app ne tora tha mane nahi. Dokha app ne diya mane nahi.
Aur ab app muje kush bhi nahi dekna chahate.
App tanveer se Nikah kar rahe hai to mien kyun nahi kar sakti.
Farhan acha Ladka Hain. Mujse bhaut pyar karta Hain. Mien kush hon.
Asad was speechless now.

Zoya just left him there and went to her room and start crying.


I donot know what I write. Just was upset wit track so decided to make my own story with happy ending
. Please tell me shall I continue it





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i love it please continue
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U dn kmw wt u wrote? 😲 no worries il tell u ... 😳 u wrote an amazingly well superb story wch i loved to d core! 👏 it ws far bttr thn d creepy story of d show!👏 do u really think thr ws a need 2 ask ths question? 😲 😆 obviously yar continue... Go 4 it! Infact cntinue now only! thanx 4 d PM! 🤗
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Originally posted by: LuvUAsYa1

U dn kmw wt u wrote? 😲 no worries il tell u ... 😳 u wrote an amazingly well superb story wch i loved to d core! 👏 it ws far bttr thn d creepy story of d show!👏 do u really think thr ws a need 2 ask ths question? 😲 😆 obviously yar continue... Go 4 it! Infact cntinue now only! thanx 4 d PM! 🤗

Thanks. I will try to update and pm you ASAP.😊
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really nice.. Plz continue soon
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Hey! Its amazing...its useless to expect anything from the show except billi...its a delight to read...plz plz continue soon...
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