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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#121

Originally posted by: asyakiideewani
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Yahoo!!!!!!!!!!!me first.Issi baat pe party.🥳 Congo
Why did you stop there? will cont soon
Girl where did you get this idea.i am totally in love with this. oh thnx
I just can't wait for the next update. u have too
This was just simply amazing. thnx
Please please please update soon.{puppy eyes} yeah update is on d way

Shaura😛

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#122

Originally posted by: Surish

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#123

Originally posted by: Linsie
That was big slap for Rashid... hmmm, he need it
but so sad for asad... he dont deserve this.. i knw😭
and also for zoya... it is so bad...

thnx

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#124

Originally posted by: Aneezarp27
awww..i feel so bad fo asad..i knw 😭.bechharraa...i guess zoya was compelled to say yes fo yaseen since she's indebted to her uncle..hmm for ths wait for nxt updates

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#125

Originally posted by: shahala123
When will u update ???

today after sometime

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#126

hey friends...a very big thankyou for ur lovely comments...i hd replied many of it...so here is d nxt part

recap:-meeting was of 2 hours...rashid was shocked and confused all th time...after meeting zoya came to knw about yaseen presence so she left...asad followed her and was shocked to see yaseen and zoya together in eachothers arms...he came to knw tht zoya is married...zoya invited everyone for dinner as yaseen insisted...asad don't wnt to go but ayaan told him tht zoya had called him specially

Part 6:-

they all had reached to zoya's house...asad and najma in 1 car and ayaan,nikhat and imraan in other one.they went in...the whole house was decorated like a heaven...1 of the servant took them inside and made them setteled

servant:-ap log bethen...mam or sir bus a rhe hain

ayaan(wispered):-mam to zoya hai but ye sir kn hai

asad(sadly):-wo tumhe thori dair mai pata chal jayega

ayaan:-kiya?

asad:-kuch nahe

they all nodded and sat down, just then zoya came downstairs with yaseen, they joined them

zoya:-hi kaisa ho tum sab? she said hugging najma and then tanveer

najma:-hum sab to theek hai zoya but ye kn hai?

zoya:-oh i m sorry mai introduce karana bhol gaye...ye yaseen hai mera fianc...

she tried hard to smile making other in shock except asad who was paining like hell

nikhat:-zo...zoya tumhare sagai kab? kaisa?

zoya:-yaseen mere mamo ilyas uncle ka bara beta hai...humare sagai ko 2 saal ho chuke hai

yaseen:-zoe tumne mjhe to introduce karwadiya ab inhe bhe karwahido...

zoya:-oh han...ye nikhat hai (pointing nikhat), ye najma(pointing najma),ayaan(pointing ayaan), imraan(pointing imraan) or asad (pointing asad).

yaseen:-hi eveyone...he shaked hand with everyone or asad se to mai mil he chuka hun

najma:-bhaijan se? kab?

yaseen:-aj office mai...zoya or asad ek he project par kam kar raha hai

they look at asad with a shocking face but also realized about his previous behaiviour

imraan to nikhat:-shayad isiliye asad nahe ana chahta tha...

they did some convo and then moved to dinner...it was not much entertaining during dinner bcz the 4 were still very confused and sad for asad after dinner they again sat on the couch when yaseen got a call...he answered it

yaseen after disconnecting the call:-zoya mere kuch college k frndx bhopal mai hain or aj sab na ek get together rakha hai to mjhe jana hoga

zoya:-par?

yaseen:-plz understnd na dear? mai apne frndnx k sath enjoy karta hun or tum apne

he left leaving a kiss on zoya's forhead which bothered everyone there even zoya did'nt like it but she ignored it

zoya:-so guyz tumne bataya nahe k ajkal tum sab kiya kar raha ho?

najma:-hmm nice question...waisa mai last 3 years se dance sekhte hn

zoya:-srf dance???

najma:-nahe aese bat nahe...dance bhe krte hn, ami ki madad bhe or apne diet bhe to manage krne hai to sara concentration ise par hai

najma giggled making other laughed except asad

nikhat:-mai to wo sara kam sekh rhe hn jo haseena khala ko pasand hai...mai nahe chahte k wo mjhse zara se bhe khafa ho

imraan look at nikhat lovingly making her blush and giving chance to others for teasing her...they all enjoyed alot even asad had also joined them for hiding his pain infront of others... it was almost 12 when nikhat got a call from razia

nikhat:-ji ammi

razia:-beta apne time dekha hai kahan hai ap log...apka abu bht gussa mai han

nikhat:-ya ALLAH hase mazak mai wqt ka pata he nahe chala...hum thori dair mai ate hain

razia:-theek hai

after disconnectng d call

nikhat:-bhaijan bht dair hogaye ghar chala

ayaan:-ara han 12 bajna wala hain...chalo chalta hain

they all stood up ready to go when najma says

najma:-bhaijan mai nikhat k ghr jaonge

asad:-par kyun?

najma:-wo razia aunty na kaha tha

asad:-theek hai

they all moved towards the main door whn asad's hand hitted badly by the nearest table...he got hurt making zoya shocked...everyone ran to him

zoya:-asad tum theek to ho? she said holding his hand

asad:-han, bus halka se kharoch hai

zoya:-kharoch...really? khon nikal raha hai

imraan:-asad ab tum driving kaisa karoge bht khoon beh raha hai

asad:-nahe itne gehre chot nahe, mai theek hn hume chalna chahi

zoya(angirily):-nahe tum abhe kahen nahe ja rha ho. tumhe kahan se ye ghao theek lag raha hai...ruku mjhe first aid karne do she then looked to the others guyz tum sab chala jao. jab khoon band hogaega na to driver ise chod ayega...tum jao

ayaan:-are u sure

zoya:-yeah

najma:-theek hai hum chalta hai... bhaijan ap apna dehan rakheaga

they all left, one of the servant bought first aid and zoya bandaged him carefully

asad:-thankyou ab mai chalta hun

zoya:-ruko zakham abhe taaza hai, tum thori dair bad chala jana

asad:-par

zoya:-maine keh diya na bus

and he nodded

zoya:-coffee?

asad:-sure

zoya:-theek tum betho mai late hn

she left and was back in 10-15 mins, giving him his cup she sat on couch too, they were silent for a while but then she spoke

zoya:-kaise bane hai

asad:-hamesha ki tarah bht ache...5 saal bad pe raha hun lakin taste aj tak nahe bhola

zoya:-zaiqa badalta waqt nahe lagta...maine bhe 5 saal bad apne hathon se coffee banae hai to kuch to fark hoga he

asad:-5 saal bad matlab?

zoya:-mamo k ghar mai itne log the kam karna k liye k in 5 saalon mai maine aesa koi kam nahe kiya jo mai pehle karne mai khushi mehsos karte the

asad(himself):-shayad hi sahe wqt hai zoya se pochne ka

asad:-zoya ek sawal pochn?

zoya:-mai jante hn kaisa sawal...yahe na k mai kahan chale gaye the or kyun?

asad:-tumhe kaisa pata?

zoya:-kyun k mai jabse tum sab se mile hn mjhe tum logon ki nazron mai ek he sawal milts hai kahan chale gaye the mai 5 saal pehle or kyun...

asad:-to mjhe batao mjhe janna hai

zoya:-theek hai

~finish~

so how was it???...i guess i did'nt dissapointed u😕...pllz share ur views by liking and commenting

P.S:-pm's r on the way

P.P.S:-plz read the note below

Edited by asyaarshilover - 11 years ago

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asyaarshilover

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Posted: 11 years ago

#127

Note For Pm's

hey frndx it's a note for pm...i want to tell u tht whenever i update any part i send 180+ pm's but the readers are only 40-50...so i had decided tht i will make a pm list before the next update...so those who want pm have to leave a comment...sorry but liking this post only will not work at all...so plz mention in the comment "add me in pm list" like ths so thn i will send u pm for the next update otherwise i'll not bcz it's very difficult and it take alot of time

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snehasya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#128

I am now really waiting what was his reactions going to be I really hope asad and zoya come to gether and it was really nice please pm me when you update next and thanks a ton for this pm