Qubool hai(mahasangam) AsYa Reunion Finale#3~P8 - Page 6

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nice story. plz continue soon.

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Originally posted by: ZFAAK

nice story. plz continue soon.

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wow! I'm so glad I came across such an amazing story! I just read both parts and they were just awesome. loved how u put ur own twist to it. please continue soon and I sent u a buddy request so please pm me when u do continue
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wow! I'm so glad I came across such an amazing story! I just read both parts and they were just awesome. loved how u put ur own twist to it. please continue soon and I sent u a buddy request so please pm me when u do continue

OMG ..and I'm glad to got such a cute comment...it just boast me up to write more...I accepted your request...i'll pm you thanks 😃
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Thanks you all for such great response to my story so far.. here final part of it...I read and replied every comment. and I'm very glad all your kind words..I hope you enjoy this part too...please comment and hit like button. have a great time reading.😊
Qubool hai
Mahasangam - Part 3
"Tanveer hum baat karte '.ye sab ki koi jarurat nahi'We'll find some way out of it" she said in concern.
"Tum ko marna padega zoya'" Tanveer growled. "Tanveer NO 'Please" Asad yelled. Tanveer tighten her hold on trigger and Zoya stood still closed her eyes. All those moments she enjoyed after coming to India flashed in her brain. Dilshad's motherly care, Najma's friendliness and most importantly Asad's love. How they fought, then they come close. He saved her life so many time and they fell in love. Lastly, his confession she rather prepared to leave this world with no regret.

'BANG' placed filled with that gunshot sound, she stiffened her body for moments. Zoya opened her eyed in flash of second if she is ok who was shot?. She saw Asad holding tanveer's hand up in the air with blood oozing from his arm.

When Asad saw tanveer pulled the trigger, he clutched her wrist turning direction gun upward. However, he was late and bullet passed near his arm. He pain was nothing compare to keeping zoya safe. He pushed Tanveer backwards while Wrenching gun from her hand.

"MR Khan" he heard zoya screaming his name.

She ran towards him blood oozing from his wound dripping on ground.. She holds the arm carefully without hurting it Tears flow down from her eyes. Asad wipes away tears with his unwounded hand. She look into his eyes he was smiling, how could he smile in pain she thought.

"Mr kahan 'aap thik toh hai na" she asked.

"Iss se jyada thik toh meh ho bhi nahi sakta zoya.." he said softly.

"Aap ko kuch ho jaata toh'"

"Aaj Allah chahte hai ki hum ek ho jaye toh 'koi hum meh kya alag karega"

She nodded in agreement and he kissed her on forehead. She looked at Tanveer deadly.

Tanveer was shocked, as Zoya was safe again and she was in big problem, running away from there is best way for her. She gathered herself and got up from ground. Zoya watched her running away from slight and she marched towards her. Zoya grabbed her by arm and tightly slapped her on cheek. Tanveer hissed in pain and while zoya stood unaffectedly.

"How dare you hurt Mr khan tanveer" she roared.

"Maine tumse kaha tha tanveer kit tum mujh pe kitne bhi vaar karo mujhe farak nahi padgta 'but jab bhi tum meri family ki hurt parogi , you will for it" she said pointing finger at her face.

"haan haan karungi 'jab bhi mujhe mauka milaga main tum logo ka jeen haram kar dungi" she replied hollowly.

"I know that tanveer iss liye tumhe ab koi mauka hi nahi milega tanveer' Mr khan police ko phone lagaye"

Asad nodded gazing at tanveer in disgust. He called police and tanveer watch all this with frighten eyes.

THREE DAY LATER

"Najma jaldi karo Asad our zoya ate hi honge" dilshad said to najma who was guiding workers about flower decoration.

"Haan ammi ho gaya' bus akhri wall hi bachi hai" she replied chirpily.

"Hum aaj bohut khush hai ' Asad our zoya wapas aa rahe 'Allah ka shukr hai "

Nazma walk towards her and hug her back. "ammi aap bhi na ye sab rona chodo' Asad bhai zoya ko nahi ..meri bhabhi ka wapas laa rahe hai" Dilshad smiled and nodded in agreement.

"AB huyi na meri ammi wali baat '" she kissed her on cheek. "chul hat najma 'kaam karne de' kitne kaam padhe hai 'ye kambukt nokar bhi" she said while hiding her watery eyes.

They heard car's sound from porch and Najma jumped in excitement. "lagta hai bhaijaan aa gaye.." they bother walk towards entrance.

Asad walked out from driver's seat looking dashing as ever, he was wearing black velvet kurta with white pathani pants. He opened door for zoya and help her to get up from car seat. She was glowing, she was wearing pink and light blue lehenga with her hair let loose forming soft curls. She first gazed at the house, which was highly decorated with flowers, and lights, it was looking heavenly in that starry night. She glance at Asad who passed her charming grin, she smiled in return. They walked towards the front door and where Dilshad , Najma was waiting for her. They both bend down to take blessing from dilshad, she loving placed her hands on their head. "khuda kare tum dono ki Jodi aise hi bani rahe" she said lovingly. She kissed zoya on her forehead "bhaut khubsurat hag rahi ho'" Zoya blushed. "Bhaijaan '.aap bhi bade dashing lag rahe hai" Najma commented. She hugged Asad tightly; he smiled and hugged her back. "Missed you bhai" she said. "Missed you too tamatar" he replied. "Najma ab unhe bahar hi khada rakhogi kya '.Undar chalo asad" Dilshad said tenderly.

They enter in house in house it was equally decorated like outside. "Zoya mera matlab hai bhabhi 'aap toh badi hoshiyaar nikli' mere bhai pe kya jaadu kar diya jo ' wahi Ajmer main nikah kar diya." She said playfully.

"chup Najma ..hum toh khush hai ki in dono nikah akhir ho hi gaya'"

"Wah bhai wah'bahu kya agayi 'ammi ke tewar hi badal gaye 'ab kon Najma kaisi NAJMA" she said while pressing her hand on forehead.

"tujhe koi nahi bhula hai samzi" Asad twisted her ear playfully.

"Ahhh chodo bhai'ouch" Dilshad smiled seeing them happy like before. She noticed who was smiling but very quite."kya huwa Zoya?" she asked. "pata nahi phuffi ' main aap ke iss pyaar ke layak hu ya nahi'job hi maine uss ke baad.." she replied. Dilshad smiled and placed her hand zoya's shoulder "Zoya mere bacche tumhari iss maine koi galti nahi 'ye jo kuch bhi huwa uss tanveer ki waje se huya'par ab woh hamari jindgi se dur jaa chuki hai'our uss ko iss kiye ki saza bhi milegi'raha sawal pyaar ka toh ..,ye pyaar hamesha se tera hi toh tha.."

Asad smiled seeing zoya loosening up from all her uneasiness. "shaadi mubarak zoya" Zoya's Aapi and jiju entered in house. Zoya ran and hugged them "Aapi, jiju Aap ko kaise pata chaala ?" she asked. She broke the hug and stared at them. "Aap ko pata nahi Sali sahiba aap ki shadi ki new '.BBC pe telecast ho rahi hai" her jiju said. "Very funny jiju'" zoya replied. "aap isse tang na kijiye' kaisi hai Zoya?" her aapi asked. "meh thik hu aapi.." she said with smile.

"salam walecum 'aap logo ki flight kaisi rahi" dilshad greeted them.

"aapa jab aap ka phone aya 'ki ye dono Nikah kar ke laut rahe hai'hum se toh raha hi nahi gaya..jo flight mili woh leli 'our isse toh itni jaldi thi zoya ko dekhne ki ..iss ka bas chalta toh plane bhi khud hi udati" he said point at his wife.

"aap bhi na kuch bhi bolte hai' "She said irritatingly.

Everyone laughed and Asad walked touched her legs for blessing. "Asad miya khush raho 'our hamari Zoya ko bhi khush rakna.." "ji" he replied. Zoya's jiju hugged him and said "Shaadi Mubarak Asad miya" he was glad seeing everyone happy especially Zoya who now back at her old cheerful streak.

"AAJ mere bhaijaan ki shaadi 'aaj mere bhai jaan ki shadi hai" Ayan enters with flowers in his hand. Everyone looked at him with grim asad was so happy to see him, as he was only family member missing. Later he noticed Nikkhat and nusrat also with him, he smile seeing them. He looked at his mother he remembers her saying about staying away from them, but surprising she too was happy. "Hum ne hi bulaya ayan ko Asad ' iss khushi ke mauke pe duriya bhulna hi accha hai" she said. Ayan hugged and he too takes him in embrace. "Shaadi mubarak bhai" ayan said with smirk. "aap ko phir khush dekh kar bada sukoon mila bhai'" he continue. Now even Asad's eyes watered a bit. "chul hat filmy kahi kaa'" he said and they broke the hug. "Shaadi Mubarak bhaijaan" Nikhat said lovingly. Ayan walk near zoya "toh MONA matlab bhabhi aap ko bhi shadi Mubarak," "Shukriya rabert I mean ayan" and everyone laugh.

"CHalo chalo sab khana nahi khana'kitne saree dishes banaye hai humne " dilshad said

"Ammi aap ne akele thodi banaye 'maine madat ki naa" Nijma said.

"THIK hai najma ne bhi madat ki'ab toh chalo" everyone follows them

SAME NIGHT

Zoya was sitting on asad's bed waiting for him'whole day was full of happiness. She herself was feeling bit tired but still very excited to see him. Now she was MRS ZOYA ASAD AHEMAD KHAN. Who could have thought that among all men in the world he stole her heart? She heard sound of door she clutched her hand. He enters in room with light feet found her seating on bed. She was looking beautiful as ever in faint light of moon.

"Miss faru no I mean zoya'aap soyi nahi" he said.

"Allah miya whats wrong with you MR KHAN? Its our first night after marriage I expect you to say something romantic. Par aap toh" she said sarcastically. She gets up from bed and walk towards him but she tripped over her heavy lehenga. But he caught her within time and they both stared in each other night. Light breezes of air coming from window were making her hair strands flow. He tucked her hairs behind ears delicately and straightens her.

"zoya kab sudhrengi aap 'dekh ke chal kigiye" he said.

"shayad main iss liye girti hu taaki aap mujhe sambhal sake" she said while crossing her arm over chest.

"our agar 'maine aap ko sambhala nahi toh" he said with grin.

"aap khadoos hai'par itne bure bhi nahi hai ..i trust you"

He pulled her in embraced she accepted it warmly. Buried her in his chest, he take his mouth near and said "I love you'zoya meh chahta hu ki aap hamesha mere sath mere pass rahe.."

She raised her head from his chest kissed him on cheek. "I love you too Mr khan'.mujhe bhi aap ke sath apki baho main iss hi tarha 'zindgi guzarni hai'"

He smiled hearing words. He lift her up in his arms carrying her to bed, she through her arms around his neck. She placed her on bed and lay beside her.

"zindgi bhi ajib hai na 'kisi ko kab ab apne pyaar milwati hai 'pata hi nahi chalta.."

"issi baat pe ek sher arz hai'" she said but he cut her pressing his palm over her lips.

"zoya please don't ruin this romantic moments" he said and removed his palm from her lips.

She laughed, he shook his head seeing something's never changes and she rest her head on his stretched arm. Both stayed awake whole night enjoying the pleasure they found in love.

The End

Edited by Charli_ - 12 years ago
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So sweet... wow nice story...

thanks for the awesome ending..
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Its amazing!! Very well written👍🏼
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Originally posted by: AsyaManic

simply awesome. Vry beautiful

thanks dear 😊
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Aww that was the perfect ending! loved it!:)

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