FF- This Love Could Never Be? Pt4.- Pg.12 (24/Jul) - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thankyou! 😊
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Hey everyone!

I've been so busy with summer school and all, but no need to worry! There will be an update tonight!
Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi again! :) 😊 I know, I know, I'm late. 😔 I'm SO sorry! 😭 I was busy with Ramadan stuff and all. Anyways, awesome update! 👍🏼 Nicely written, too. 😃 Ur an amazing writer! 👏 And I liked the outfit u picked for Zoe! 😳 Can't wait for u to update! 😛 I'll be waiting! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Update update update update update update update update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oops I am late..
read the 2 parts at a stretch. .
amazing and wonderfully written..
different concept with the age factor thrown in. .
so will they understand each other better..
love to have a pm...buddy request sent
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was lovely...Cant wait for the next part..up-date soon...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello darlings! I'm so sorry. How long has it been since I told you I'd update?! Ugh. Ramadan has kept me so busy. My mom feels the need to throw many large scale Iftaar parties, so things are starting to get out of hand. Here's another update... but the next one will be a perfect AsYa filled Chapter, that I shall update either tomorrow or the day after.
Thank you to everyone for the lovely comments, they mean a lot, and I shall surely reply to them in a while! Love you all, and now onto the update! xoxo



Part 3:

As Asad passed Dilshad the bowl of mashed potatoes, Zoya exclaimed "Allah Miyan, Phophi! Honestly, I would have been glad with just Pizza and coke, leikin aapne toh itna kuch bana diya!" while looking around at the table taking in that Dilshad had gone all out. Along with the pizza, there was pasta, fries, mashed potatoes, and a cold macaroni salad, she was really doubting the fact that she would be able to try everything. "Well of course I had to! You've come back after so long, ab jaanay ka mauka nahi dena chahti thi!" Dilshad beamed as Asad and Zoya stared on at her.

"Woh… umm… actually Phophi, I won't be staying here, I'm not even staying with Ammi. I'd like to live on my own, and I'm perfectly comfortable at the hotel" Said Zoya. Asad had just started to say the very regular "Leikin… Ms. Farooqui…", when Zoya shot him a look that shut him up. There would be no more of this conversation. She could not live in the same house as Mr. Khan, especially after everything that had happened. She really doubted the fact that she was the same girl, let alone the girl that Mr. Khan had once adored. But it wasn't enough, was it? No. He had announced his marriage to Tanveer, making sure his mother's vow to his stepmom to get him married within 10 days was still valid. She had to applaud him for the courage, but had always wondered what she was short of. Coming back to the present, Zoya realized everyone had finished up, and had started to clear up the table.

"Najma… tum jaa kar movie laga lo… Zoya beta! Please don't worry about that for now. Tum jaa kar living room main betho, spend time with Asad and Najma" Said Dilshad as she saw that Zoya had started to clear up the table, helping the elder lady clean up the mess after dinner. She nodded towards the living room asking Zoya to go with Asad, and join Najma for the movie. "Zoya! Chaliyay! I've put on Aashiqui 2! It's the most amazing movie ever!!" shouted Najma loudly as Asad stared on in horror. "What crap. That is the stupidest movie in the world. The boy and the girl don't even love each other, it's a total waste of time" replied Asad, as Zoya stared on in shock. "Uffoo! Bhaijaan, you're such a pessimist. You're always hating every love story you see, and you're not romantic at all. I don't even know how we'll find a partner for you!" Zoya was astounded by hearing all of this. This was definitely not how she had remembered Asad. Yes, he had been this way when she had first met him, but as they had gotten to know each other better, she had realized he was a softie at heart. Now he was back to the cold man she had once known, but did not recognize. She had to do something. She wondered what had gone wrong for him, but secretly, inside she knew the same thing had happened to her.

"I'm leaving. Aap dono dekh lijiyay. I have a huge presentation tomorrow, and I haven't even started" said Asad's retreating figure. Then Asad turned around to give Zoya one last look. Zoya knew this look very well; it made her tummy churn and the butterflies in her stomach rise up to her throat. "Actually Tamatar, how about you watch it alone, I've watched it about 8 times already, and Allah Miyaan! I can't watch it again. Even though it is the best movie ever!" Zoya said. "Anyways, I think I'll help Mr. Khan with the presentation. It'll get me familiar to what I'll be having to work with starting tomorrow, and I think he really needs the help. I don't remember when he became such a procrastinator!" "Theek hai Zoya, you go. Anyways, I think Najma and I will go to bed now anyways, we have to go to someone's house for brunch tomorrow, and we'll have to wake up early to get ready. Have a good night!" Dilshad spoke as she walked into the living room to usher her daughter out, and up to her room. "Goodnight Zoya!" said the chirpy and bubbly Najma, as she walked out with her mom.


Zoya could feel her heartbeat fasten as she approached Mr. Khan's room. She knocked. "Hmm? Come in" came the reply from the other side. Zoya walked in to a sight that took her breath away. Asad was sitting there in track pants and a t-shirt, leaning against his headboard, typing vigorously onto his laptop, his eyes squinting through his glasses. She knew he only switched from his clear contacts to his specs when he needed to work long and hard. Zoya cleared her throat and said "I thought I'd help you, you seem like you need it anyways". Asad stared at her for a while then with a sigh said, "Sure, can you please search up these facts for me, and give me a direct quotation and a reliable source for each? That would take off a lot of the work load from me, and I can focus on the making part of the presentation", as he passed pages to her with all the information, and went back to working on his laptop.

Zoya beamed. Had he actually let her help him? He must be really worried then, Mr. Khan wanted to look the last thing from vulnerable, and at this point he had opened up to her. She loved it! "Leikin, can you do me a favor? And find me a comfortable pair of clothes? In kapdon main, I can't breathe after 4-5 hours!" Asad smiled at the way she spoke, back to the Zoya he had remembered in an instant. He nodded at her, put down his laptop, and got up to go to his bathroom. In about a minute, he returned and headed towards his closet. Upon his return, he gave Zoya 2 articles of clothing. The first a salwar, and the second, a nike t-shirt. "Umm… actually woh, Tamatar had changed in my washroom this morning, and so this is her sleeping salwar, I can't seem to find the top that she wore with this, so here's a clean t-shirt of mine" said Asad with a hint of color on his cheeks. Zoya smiled at his behavior and how shy he was. This is why she er… liked him, he could be so cute sometimes! She loved how he had felt the need to say "clean t-shirt" when if he had just said t-shirt, it would have been fine.

As Asad had finished up the next slide, he saw Zoya stride out of the washroom, and like always he felt his breath catch in his chest. He would have to get used to this. She looked as flawless as ever, her makeup was gone, and so was her jewelry. It was just his plain and simple, gorgeous Zoya now. Wait what?! His?! Shut up Asad. She wasn't his, and never would be. He needed to stop acting that way, like she was his wife, or his girlfriend. She was just a helpful friend. That's it. And even that was taking it too far. He had to be careful now. He couldn't slip up. She walked over to his desk, and took out an elastic band from the drawer so she could tie her hair up. All set to work, Zoya turned to Mr. Khan, "Kaam kare ab?".

Precap: Kaam hoga? Yah nahi😳… and finally the AsYa heart to heart. I felt like I needed to add this chapter before we got to the heart to heart, to set things up a bit!


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That's it for now! Hope everyone liked it! 😃 Please don't hesitate to leave comments (positive ya negative, sab chalta hai!). I'd love to hear how people are liking the way things are shaping up for this FF. Love you all, and until next time!


Ramsha xoxo.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: ButterflyKisses

Hi again! :) 😊 I know, I know, I'm late. 😔 I'm SO sorry! 😭 I was busy with Ramadan stuff and all. Anyways, awesome update! 👍🏼 Nicely written, too. 😃 Ur an amazing writer! 👏 And I liked the outfit u picked for Zoe! 😳 Can't wait for u to update! 😛 I'll be waiting! 😉
-Fari 😳 ❤️



Heyhey!

Lol, that's alright, I've been quite busy myself. Ramadan should give you a break from every other thing in life because it makes you so busy!😆
Thankyou thankyou, and yeah, I'm in love with that outfit as well :P
Updated now!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: mochhug

Update update update update update update update update



Awww😆

You shall be happy now! I've updated 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

oops I am late..

read the 2 parts at a stretch. .
amazing and wonderfully written..
different concept with the age factor thrown in. .
so will they understand each other better..
love to have a pm...buddy request sent



haha! That's okay, welcome to this FF!

Thankyouu so much!
You'll have to wait and see 😉
I sent you a pm!

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