FF: Through The Monsoon #1 - Link to #2 on pg 1 - Page 16

Originally posted by: webuser7

Ha! Ha! Ha! LOVED IT! SIMPLY AWESOME!!!! Who needs a tainted apple? AsYa can manage on their own for hot scenes!

Wonder what his password is? He's gonna have to tell her!! 😆 Am I on the right track?!

More, more, more!! 👏

Originally posted by: KapaliniDas

Your fanfics are my absolute favourites! I was so devastated when Mangalpur Madness finished but this fanfic is so amazing and I can't get enough of it!

Originally posted by: braich_gal

UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!

You can't leave me hanging after a scene like that!!! Oh God!!! I can hear the mitwa song when the light from the phone came up and they realize they were very close...UPDATE soon!!!! VERY VERY VERY SOON!!!

Originally posted by: rutu83

incredibly hot ☺️
i do believe you've gained an expertise in writing cliffhangers, much to the despair of your readers 😉

Originally posted by: Rarepearl

ok just great I missed two updates in a row.

well I read dem in one go now. dey were superb. So Asad teasing Zoya about being tech savvy, dat is is don't u think Mr. Khan? I loved his reaction on her getting her finger injured, its just involuntary, he can't stand the sight of her in pain. then the part in the hut was so nice. so atleast Mr.
Perfect Ahmed Khan admits at last of not knowing how something is supposed to be done. well den u have ur Miss Hoity Toity New York to save you. dere moment is finished is starting dere?

cont soon.

Originally posted by: Prem4everRamsha

Love it! The way you explain Asad and Zoya's closeness! gahhh fdhfldlfdfjlfjlsd. Love it ! Can't wait for the next part. The whole time in my head, I was screaming "Kisss herrr!"

Great job <3

Originally posted by: goingreen

Yes you are on the right track hahaha. Bina apple bhi itna romance, so don't worry about the apple for now :p