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Posted: 12 years ago
#71

planning to make it even more awesomee 😛😉
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Originally posted by: mysticlover

I really loved this story by you... n to be truthful the main reason is you used Neruda's lines...
Please pm me when you update...
P.S. I love your signature lines... Frost... my another favorite!!!


aww thank you! frost is one of my fav too! and neruda's poetry moves me ...both of them are a ⭐️.

glad you like the story...will surely pm you when i update. 😃🤗
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kaya13


Babes you should no that we would never say no to the WILD ahem...ur wish bt I would not mind them hot and heavy..😳


hahaha well then be ready to get some hot hot update :D
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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

i m sure..people here on If won't mind if u go ahead wd erotic idea...😉😉😉..u knw all r on same boat...so go ahead...love to read tht too😉😳


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i sure will! thank you so much :D 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I dont mind reading a hot hot 😉update...
waiting 4 ch-2😊
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Originally posted by: zoas91

NOTE:

HELLO! THIS NOTE IS FOR SUGGESTIONS THAT I NEED REGARDING THE STORY. I MEAN I

HAVE THE PLOT READY, BUT WANTED TO ASK YOU'ALL WHETHER I SHOULD PUT UP A CHAPTER THAT IS A BIT MORE ON THE EROTIC SIDE ? (YOU KNOW WHAT I MEAN 😛)

OR WANT A NORMAL STORY? I NEED TO KNOW WHETHER YOU WOULD WANT IT OR NOT!

THANKS FOR READING...WILL BE POSTING SOON :)

URJA


Well you are a fabulous writer, so I am sure you will write in a way that will make us ☺️ but also appreciate your plot 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey thanx for the pm...great update...continue soon...😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Always ready for a little erotica😉
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chapter 2...

collisions and jealousy splashes.

*bamm* and there goes the collision of Mr. and Mrs. Asad Ahmed khan!

"Argghhh Asad!! Watch where you're going!!" zoya yelled and proceeded to wash of her hands which got a minor cut from Asad's shaving blade'

"uhhh 'zoya , sorry I wasn't looking"

"What were you thinking!!? Now look what you have done here!" she replied, washing away the blood oozing out of the cut.

Asad went and quickly got the first- aid, "here let me help you with that'"

He took her hand and applied the cream on the cut and bandaged it with the gauze.

"Kiss it better?" Zoya said smiling at him'

Asad grinning and taking her hand, placed feather soft kisses around the cut' "Better?"

"much"

A thought struck Asad and he asked, "Zoya, I was thinking lets pay your appi and jeeju a visit! It's been long, we haven't seen them' I mean you talk to them over the phone, but we haven't really gone to see them, have we? Today is Sunday, and well I am free 'we can go and meet them!"

Though he thought he wouldn't mind spending his entire Sunday on the bed with his beautiful wife'not doing anything but make love to her till she could barely walk!!

A mental alarm went off in his brain: Asad'Focus... Don't go there. No! Not now

Damn you Zoya' why does she have to lure me into a distant world always! 'dreaming about her curves, how her finger caressed his face and entwine themselves with their own accord into his hair. Her soft petal like lips that can make him go into a tizzy just by looking at them'Asad ! NO! Allah! I need a cold shower, right now!

To say Zoya was shocked was an understatement, Mr. Akdu making plans all by himself? Meeting appi and jeeju? 'Allah miya is this true or was she dreaming? And she pinched herself. "owww!"

"Yes Zoya, I said it, and I am Mr. Asad khan, and have not been kidnapped by anyone. Stop pinching yourself." A bemused Asad spoke knowing that his wife was shocked at his suggestion of visiting her appi and jeeju'.smirking at this'he raised his brows, his gaze fixed upon her , questioning her with his eyes. "So, shall we?"

She grinned, and broke into her dimpled smile "yes! Ohhh thank you Asad1 I have been missing appi and jeeju'but this is perfect!" she tip toed to asad and gave him a kiss on the cheek. "You never fail to surprise me mister"

"Well I don't believe in living a dull life, at least not when Zoya Farooqui Khan is around!"

"uhhh 'are you serious you are The Asad Ahmed Khan, and have not kidnapped my jahanpanna six pack on seeing his beautiful kaneez zoya?" she asked asad, battling her eyelids'

"Well you never know, his kaneez is so hot... Anyone would want to trade places with him, and keep her to themselves! "

"Yeah well, they can try their luck, but Asad can blow them down to ashes. He is possessive that way'others don't stand a chance!

With that he pulled her into a bear hug and nuzzled her neck' " Zoya you're mine, no one can ever lay a finger on you, at least not without my consent. Because what's mine is mine, I don't like sharing"

"And you, mine" she spoke as the blush crept on to her cheeks.

Uhhh there she goes again looking so desirable! Shaking himself to the present, he kisses her on her wrist and let goes of her hand which he held near his chest "Hmm, let's go have our shower first and then we can get ready and go visit you appi and jeeju, yes?"

"Yes, okay"

Zoya was happy she would meet her appi and jeeju after long'now that they have shifted to Bhopal'zoya got her entire family to her' all her loved one's stayed near to her and came to her rescue whenever she needed them'ahhh life is a bliss with all of them around'she sighed happily and went for her shower..

I want her to be happy, just the way she is right now'always smiling'her infectious dimples making his knees turn to jelly every time he saw them flash onto her cheeks'I am going to keep her that way'I know, I can...He smiled.

And soon he will find out what she had said. He had to dig into this. Thinking her appi and jeeju might be able to help him with this little puzzle, with a final look to see his beautiful wife rummaging in the shower cabinet for her shampoo, he too went onto getting ready for the day ahead.

~~~' On their way to appi and jeeju's house ~~~

Asad was driving and thought that going empty handed did not look good'he thought they should go and get something from the mall'

"zoya , we should take something for your appi and jeeju , it not good going empty handed , is it?

"okay I don't mind. Appi would love if we take a few sweets..."

Reaching the mall they quickly went to the sweet shop'while Zoya went ahead with selecting sweets , Asad went to the store were men's ties were sold. He was grazing through the racks on ties when fairly young women in a skirt and fitted top came near asad and asked him

"Do you need help with the ties sir?" she asked , giving asad a smile and literally drooling over him'

"umm no, its okay I will find what I need myself, thank you for the help."

"it's not a problem sir, here let me help you" with that she took a tie from the rack , she came near asad and placed the tie around his neck, just when she was about to tie the knot , he heard a loud yelp'and froze'there stood the girl 'her shirt entirely wet from a juice that had splashed on her'seeing the reason of the mess, he quickly muttered an apology for the juice that had splashed on the lady by his wife , caught hold of zoya's hand and walked out of the mall'

"zoya! What was that for? "

"Find it out for yourself!" she huffed snatching the car keys from Asad's hand, walked towards the car , seating herself in it she banged the door.

chapter 3: https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/qubool-hai/3651316/new-ss-open-kisses-last-part-5-updated-pg-29?pn=20�

Edited by zoas91 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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haha zoe 2 cute she spilled juce on sales girl 😆
too possesive😃 nice update luved hw zoe
asad intensity and passion 2 gud😛
waiting fr nxt update
Edited by cutiesanya - 12 years ago

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