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Posted: 12 years ago
so guys here is the next part.. this time its little faster update i guess.. šŸ˜†
and thank u guys for the concern u showed to me and for wishing to get well soon.. im ok now and so here is the update..
there is a note at the bottom pls do reply...

PART-10:

Asad was shocked to see the reports.. he stood their shocked with his eyes wide opened and staring at the file and zoya alternatively.. his eyes asked for assurance and then zoya moves near him and nods yes.. he was totally confused...

A: but where did u??

Z: when I was entering the data of the hospital today in my friends office I got this Mr. Khan.. yes tanveer was pregnant by the time she came here..

A: what is all this zoya.. u say that she is pregnant by the time she came here.. tanveer says her husband is not a nice guy. And her passport says she is unmarried and whats all this confusion.. what is happening??

Asad was still in confusion.. zoya understood that he was shocked to know the truth about his best friend whom he trusted and believed so much. So she went near him and hold his hand and told him the whole truth from the day when she left him after their nikaah night and then how she found tanveer asking for a duplicate report in a hospital and her doubts about him being drugged and then how she confirmed her doubt that he was drugged when he said that he remembered nothing of that day..

She also said him about her plan as she had no other way to stop tanveer from using her pregnancy drama to marry him.. she said him how aapi jeeju phupi and najma helped her and even they managed the SI and doctor too.. she said him that they hired the person to act as tanveer's husband as she knew that he will try to find out about the man and he will come to know that tanveer is not married.

Asad was in a shock listening to all this.. all this was going around him and he did not find a clue about it also.. he did not even try to do that even after what happened on their nikaah night...

A: that means nothing happened on that day and she just staged everything to separate us and get married to me..but why did she do it?? did she really want to marry me???

Z: yes Mr. Khan nothing happened that night and she wanted to marry u but not because she loved u but just for ur money power and position.. she wants to live a rich and luxurious life so she did all this to eliminate me from ur life so that she can take it...

A: Im really dumb and mad zoya.. I trusted her blindly and never believed on what u tried to tell.. when u said me that she was the stone eyed person I should have figured out everything but I did not and more over I was sympathisizing with her.. I let her live in my house when she was trying to kill MY LOVE.. Im such an idiot.. I can never forgive my self..im sorry zoya im really sorry...

Z: please Mr. Khan u need not be sorry.. it was not just ur mistake even I was wrong...

Asad looked confused..

Z: yes Mr. Khan I was wrong and stupid.. since even I did not trust u even after knowing tanveer's intentions.. I believed in what I saw but could not realize what could have happened..

A: what do u know about her zoya and how did u know??

Z: Mr. Khan when I found that tanveer was the stone eyed person I could relate everything and I confronted her she said that she wanted to marry and will marry u at any cost and challenged me.. I thought she might do something to me but never expected that she would stoop so low to separate us and on nikaah day in a moment of anger I couldn't realize that it might be drama and left u... but when I came back with the help of ALLAH I could realize that she staged all that and u can never cheat me.. that is why I decided not to let u go.. and hence I had to come back with this plan.. and today what I found about her this was also like a blessing from ALLAH.. we need to thank him as all the problems are over and we are back together..

Listening to all this his eyes started filling with tears.. he was feeling happy that she is back in his life he did not cheat her but he was angry at tanveer and at himself for trusting her and was feeling guilt that he was the reason for all the mess and pain..zoya could sense his feelings and went near him and held his hands and said " pls Mr. Khan forget what ever happened now we are together and we will always be together.. the worst phase is over and pls never try to remember them.. let them go.. they are meant to be forgotten and u need to forget them.."

As soon as zoya finished these words asad felt his leart lightened and smiled appeared on his face.. zoya too smiled seeing him relaxed.. he stood seeing in her eyes and pulled her into his arms into a bone crushing hug which could explain her how much she meant to him and how much he missed her and would never let her go again.. it was an assuring hug to express his love and care and concern for her.. she could understand his gesture and responded the same.. they broke after some time..

Z: enough Mr. Khan.. now we will throw tanveer out of the house we know everything na..

A: no zoya I don't want her to leave without any punishment.. she tried to kill u zoya and so I want to see her behind bars..

Z: but Mr. Khan she is pregnant..

A: yes she is pregnant but we cant leave her on that excuse.. today she did it with us and tomorrow with someone else she might do the same.. whatever I cant leave her after knowing that she tried to kill these many times...

Z: but we cant prove that na Mr. Khan we have no proofs about her.. so how??

A: we may not have proofs but we can make her confess na..

Z: so u think she will confess in front of police that she tried to kill me.. come one Mr. Khan use some sense..

A: (with a smile) looks like u have used ur brain a lot and it had nothing more left in it.. she will not confess but we will plan something so that she will confess herself without knowing..

Z: stop it Mr. Khan.. how can u talk about me like that.. if I have not planned all this by now tanveer would have claimed that the baby is yours and u would have married her blindly without any doubt..

A: u are right zoya.. u saved me and our love.. I don't know what I would have been without u and how I would have lived without u.. thank u so much.. and sorry too..

Z: oh.. im sorry Mr. Khan I made u upset again.. forget now lets plan to what to do..

Zoya left the office excusing that she had an urgent work and then asad and zoya started to home.. they have planned and then reached home and started executing their plan..

When they reached the house they came to know that tanveer was not at house and so they told about their plan to dilshad and najma.. all the four started fixing cc cameras in the hall and in the kitchen.. they connected these to asad's laptop in dilshad's room... asad called inspector who was asad's friend and also helped zoya in her plan and all the four asad, najma, SI and dilshad were in dilshad's room quietly.. they connected the laptop to cameras so that they can see it and even record it... (like zoya did for ayaan's engagement)

The trap:

It was around 7 in the evening tanveer entered the house and saw the house empty..she went to her room and got freshup.. by the time she was coming down she saw zoya coming in and throwing file on the table and going into her room.. tanveer was not interested in her and then suddenly the phone bell rang.. tanveer lifted the call and it was asad..

A: tannu I najma and ammi are going to attend a nikaah so we will come by early morning so pls take care of zoya and her dinner and medicines..

T: (with a fake sweet voice) ofcourse jammy u need not tell me that..

A: ha one more thing tannu I need to talk something about ur husband too.. I will talk once I come back and here the nikaah is gonna start so I will talk later...

Tanveer was shocked to listen what asad said.. my husband where did he come from?? When she was in thoughts she saw the file on the table.. it was her report.. it is her original pregnancy report.. she took in her hands fastly and was about to move... then zoya suddenly comes in..

Z: why are u hiding it tanveer.. i think u forgot that I was the one who brought it and kept it there.. u may hide this but I can get one more also...

T: zoya where did u get this from??and this Is wrong I can also get any such reports I want...

Z: oh really.. but u know this report, I got from the hospital where u are consulting every month and u know that its not fake.. and I know this baby is not because of Mr. Khan and it is because of ur husband..

T: husband?? What are u saying???

Z: come on tannu.. didn't u hear what Mr. Khan said on phone he said that he wants to talk u about ur husband after he comes..

T: how do u know that???

Z: come on tanveer where did ur brilliance gone?? Cant u guess how will I know about what Mr. Khan was speaking about???

T: it means u are the one who said something about my husband na..

Z: not bad tannu u are back.. yes I was the one who said Mr. Khan that I met ur husband and he wants to be with u and he is a changed man now.. I also told him that u are pregnant too that too with ur husband's baby...

T: what??? (in a shock) u know that im not..

Z: yes tannu I know u r not married but I even I know what u are up to.. I once made a mistake by under estimating u now I cant do the same again.. I cant allow u to stay in asad's life any more.. u already surpassed the time limit.. u need to get out of his life and this house too..and for this I used the same weapon u used to get close to Mr. Khan.. u tried to gain sympathy from Mr. Khan by saying some stories about ur husband so I used the same fictional husband of urs to throw u out of his life.. as soon as Mr. Khan comes I will say him everything and throw u out..

T: (laughs hysteriacally) woow zoya what a plan.. u just made a great plan.. but im sorry u can never do that.. ur Mr. Khan will come to home by tomorrow and till then anything can happen to u.. do u really think Im a fool.. u will use my husband whom I created and try to end my plot but now u see what I will do with ur plan..

Zoya stands quietly and smiles inwardly thinking that tanveer had completely fallen into their trap.. she stood calm without any reply...

T: now u are confused as what I can do right.. so I will tell u as I know that u don't have such a huge brain to understand it.. now I will kill u and I will throw this on my fictious husband whom u brought into picture again.. u will die and my husband wil run away and then I can marry asad happily.. now u made it more clear for me that I need not blame asad for my pregnancy he will sympathise with me and marry me knowing that the baby is not his also.. as I know he is a fool at relations and know only to give but not to take.. police will keep searching for the culprit and they will never get him.. and even asad cant get me.. otherwise he should have realized whats happening around him but he never and will never understand also.. I tried to separate u by informing that visa officer and tried to kill many times by throwing line wire in your bath tub. Using the chandelier and even on jash e bahaar also but some or the other were saving u and today there is no one to save u..

Asad and all were listening to this and were shocked except asad as he knew them already..

Saying this she goes near the kitchen and takes out the kerosene can and opens the lid when she was about to throw it on zoya she hears a someone coming from the stairs and when she sees its none other than asad, dilshad, najma and SI... she will be shocked to see them...

IMPORTANT NOTE:

So that's this part... next part will be tanveer's exit and thappad mela as according to the demands of some of the readers...

If u want me to end it by this I will or if u want me to continue and turn it into an ff with asya married life and then with gaffur truth and Rashid truth I mean zoya's mom truth and then how it wil effect their life along with ayaan and humeira and others too I will.. it all depends on ur wish and comments so pls do reply...

Are u happy with this SS or want me to turn it into FF with more twists and turns??? I wanna say that I have a properly knitted plot in my head and I will post it if I get enough comments only.. u know supply will only be according to demand...

guys pls do comment.. i send so many pm's but get very few replies it really hurts and ur comments are the only support for me.. so pls do like and comment more. thats all i expect from u just some love and appreciation...

With love

Rithz...😊

Edited by rithika2012 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes you should definitly continue into a FF and nice udapte 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
Rithz, ur ss is going great... Dont worry... Continue writing... Just one thing. Wen u show Asya married, atleast show one chapter of their happy prosporous life with d family as well as personal space... Then u can put as many twists n turns u feel like...
I hope, I've not demanded much to ur inconvinience...
Tc..
Keep writing...
Aazeen...
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Posted: 12 years ago
yes yes😃...continue n make it to FF...
you r an amazing writer i must say...brilliant work yar
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes Please Turn it Into FF.. Love To Read More From You..😃
Awesome Update... šŸ‘ Waiting For Tannu Exit šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 12 years ago
Beautiful! Tanu going to jail Yes Yes Yes! Please don't let her escape from jail.
And you should definitely turn this into a FF! I would love to see how Asya's married life would be.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Very nice update. Love it. Please continue it as ff. But one request pls dont seperate asya like gul khan. Whatever twist u want make just dont seperate asya please
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Posted: 12 years ago
pplzzz plzzz plzzz update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
ahh.. thats reallyy good.. i want u to continue with the ghaffoors truth and stuff...! reallyy wanna read asyas married life.. and asad will hit tannu.. ohh..plzz update the next part sooon then.. :p anyway this part was awesome.. asya teaming up and of course wen they team up how can they loose.. they reach somewhere.. and this time they reached at the rite place.. soo continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
plzzz Make it an FF... plz .. plz... plz...makenit an ff that would be wonderful to read plzz...plzzz...
really its an awesome part...
contiue fast...šŸ‘ PM me plzzz... as soon as u update :) :)

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