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Posted: 12 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: akap

Loved it..amazing..continue soon and pm me.



you made my day dear! t

thank you so much! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Ta33iiE

I've been stalking :P
Aww hope this actually happens in the show
yes continue - i want ahappy ending ;)


hahahaha lolol

u made my day!


awww thanks a lot for your lovely comment dear! 🤗

yap! keep reading and u'll find out what the ending is 😉😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: awesome

awesome part

plz cont soon
m pm me


Awww thanks so much

ya, i'll surely pm u😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: ricna

AWESOME DEAR...

WOULD LOVE TO READ MORE
PLS PM ME WHEN YOU UPDATE



i'll surely pm u buddy
thanks a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: kabhiasya4ever

it was osum...i hope the same happens in the show also... pm meif possible



awww really? thanks a lot! 🤗

i'm so glad u liked it😳

i'll surely pm u 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: princeegoyal

superb..loved it...pls continue & pm me...4 pm i hv sended u buddyreq pls accept


pari


buddy request accepted 😃😃😃

tanks a lot!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Mariam.2187

Continue Soon...
Thnx for PM...
Mariam...



awww thanks
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Posted: 12 years ago
#58
hello my lovely readers!😎 I can;t thank everyone who liked and commented for the previous chapters enough but THANKS A LOT FOR the TREMENDOUS LOVE FOR THE PREVIOUS CHAPTER.🤗 i have replied to most of your comments and will keep doing so.

sorry for the delay. and many of you have complained about the previous updates being short. i hope this shot is not short for you. it's definitely longer than the other ones 😉

hope you enjoy it as well... PLEASE COMMENT AND LIKE. these two things are the key to get my updates quicker. and your lovely commets and likes just makes me keep writing more and more.

here you go

IMPORTANT: I have made a new account and it's activated. you can send buddy request to Mushfika_PM, and i'll send PMs to ONLY THOSE who're in my buddy list

SHOT 3

After crying her heart out with Asad wrapping Zoya with his arms, and Asad consoling her , he took her to the bed and made her sit. She was sniffling with her swollen eyes lowered, not looking at him. Each time he saw her pale, red face, swollen teary red eyes, he felt like stabbing himself thousand times. What has he done to her? where did that bubbly Zoya go? Where's my Zoya's smile? He missed the old Zoya like hell. He missed her calling him "jahapana six packs". He missed the argument they used to have thousand times a day. He missed her annoying him. EVERYTHING.

He wiped Zoya's tears and held her chin to make her look at him' into his eyes.

Asad: Zoya?

Zoya just looked down at the ground although her chin is up due to asad holding it.

Asad: Zoya look at me, please?

Zoya: NO!

Asad: please?

And Zoya could never refuse HER Mr. khan when he talks in such a pleading voice. Yes she WAS furious at him, yes she Was hurt, NO she hasn't forgot anything that Asad did to her, but for some reason she couldn't just help looking at him''. Into his eyes.

She looked at him and Asad cupped her small, soft face.

Asad softly: Zoya, I know I have hurt you, I know I have broken your heart, made you cry like anything, broke your trust, and whatever has happened, you can't forgive me for that. But trust me I would NEVER, and I mean it, I would NEVER do ANYTHING to hurt you intentionally.

Zoya heard him quietly. She knew her Mr. khan could never do anything to hurt her INTENTIONALY. She just wanted to cup his face and say that. but then their wedding day came into her mind again. And her expression changed from a soft one to outraging.

Zoya furiously: really Mr. khan? THEN WHY DID I HAVE TO SEE YOU WITH YOUR TANNU IN THAT FACTORY? WHY?

Asad: Tanveer called me.

Hearing her name, her anger increased at such a level that it seemed like she would birst at any moment

Zoya: OH YES! TANVEER. Oh sorry! I mean "TANNU". YOUR Tannu. so how's your life going with TANNU? all okay right? You to must love each other beyond anything? I'M GLAD TPO HEAR THAT MR. ASAD AHMED KHAN!

That was unbearable for asad. He couldn't bear when asad took his name with tanveer. It should be ZOYA! ONLY ZOYA. Not anyone else.

Zoya was about to get up when asad pulled her aggressively on lap and held her hands. Zoya was shocked at his sudden move as such, but didn't protest and the next thing Asad said was much MORE important to listen than anything else.

Asad: Tanveer is NOT "MY" tannu anymore. And she is EQUALLY RESPONSIBLE for what happened that night. I don't have any proof at this moment with me, but I have tons of things to suspect her, alright? STOP connecting my name with hers. If anyone's name would be taken with mine, it'll me ZOYA. And to make my self MORE CLEAR, it will be YOURS. Ms. Zoya FARUKI's.

Zoya had a small smile in her face and blushed. She blushed at her position of sitting in the first place and then at Asad's words. It'll be MY NAME- she thought.

Asad twirled her and soothed moved the strands of hair behind her ear

Asad: and as far as MY LIFE is concerned, I'm sure you know by now that it's been terrible with horrible nightmares about your whereabouts till now. SERIOUSLY ZOYA? How could you do this to us? To ME? How could you LEAVE LIKE THAT? have you ever thought about your api? Ammi? Tamatar?

Zoya looked at her for sometime and then said

Zoya: and you?

Asad: OF COURSE! What about ME? Do youe even know how I passed my DAYS without seeing you? Without talking to you? Without arguing with you?

Zoya looked into his eyes adoringly. A person who didn't have a pinch of courage to say those 3 magical words infront of her is saying ALL THESE? Anyways she found it really.. uhh' CUTE, one could say!

Asad: Do you have any idea how I passed my time without hearing you calling "JAHAPANA SIX PACKS"

Zoya chuckled at that. seeing her smile after SUCH A LONG TIME, Asad sighed a breath of relief.

Asad: Zoya, do you trust me? May be your trust has lessened that before after that incident but I'm sure you still trust me, doesn't matter how much but you do. I know that.

Zoya: and how do you know that?

Asad: if you hadn't trusted me, you would have never sat on my lap, dear.

Zoya widened her eyes and then blushed.

Asad: Zoya, you know sometimes, what you see is not always true. Sometimes, our eyes betray us. Especially that time when someone MAKES you believe something.

Zoya looked at him questioning. Did he know about tanveer? Or is he talking about something else?

Asad: But I'll make everything right, I promise. anyways Zoya, I'll leave now. Got to do something really important.

Hearing that Zoya's face went all pale again. Mr. khan will leave me again? Zoya got up from his lap and asad looked at her standing.

Seeing that face of zoya again, Asad quickly smoothened her cheeks with his knuckles.

Asad: and I WILL COME BACK SOON to take you, ms, faruki

Her heart wanted to dance in joy. She let out a small smile at him and asad smiled back.

Asad: Bye Zoya!

He was heading towards the door when Zoya ran him and hugged he tightly from behind.

Zoya: Bye Mr. khan!


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Mushfika

Edited by Mushfika - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#59
RES
YAY! I'M FIRST!

AND YAY!!! He's gonna use his brain! 😆 I LOVED their conversation. Poor Zoya. Poor Asad. Aww I love that he admitted he liked her calling him Jahapana Six Packs 😃 And the lap scene was cute.

Continue soon! 😃
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#60
Guess what...
It was awesome
Loved that Asad and Zoe made up
Waiting for part 4
Continue :)

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