A Najma SS: Imperfection Is Beauty---ON HOLD - Page 12

Finally i loved this part can't wait for the next

this was truly awesome devanshi!! u write vry well i must say .. looking forward for more beautiful updates from u dear!! plz do pm me wen ever u update pls pls ! 😊 i luved barun as assem kabir!!! 😉 thanku dear!

Originally posted by: Ayuzawa

AMAZINGGG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

love it. my darling barun as aseem. i am dead. i wish this could happen in the serial too. love him as aseem. must say a brilliant choice.

i love every part of your story. and i love zoya's dialogues. oh aseem...i am flat over him. my darling barun as aseem. if i could i would jump into your story and replace najima😉😆😆

Originally posted by: Meself

OH EM GEE!!!! Firstly Aseem getting hell scared that Devi Ganga would bless him any moment and when that wasn't enough you made Zoya want to tear a lump through Asad's head!!! All the while I was rofl-ing and my mum thought I was going nuts...Beautiful update and love its not only you but even we aren't over Barun yet!!!!!

OH NO...I missed the first spot by a wee bit..

res
you forgot to pm me !😭
will unres soon !

unres :)

sorry ! i was so stupid to think that you forgot to pm me when you never sent any pms to anyone !😆🤪

coming back to the update ; it was such a sweet update !
so so cute !
i like akshay dogra & barun sobti as brothers !
i love their offscreen bromance !
by the way talking about bromance ; how did aakash singhania & aseem kabhir became brothers ?it's pretty confusing !
anyway i'll leave that to you to clear my confusion !


He shot up from his seat and sat on the seat next to her and said repeatedly, "Please don't cry. Please don't cry. I didn't do anything." He looked around frantically as if someone was going to come and arrest him.

these lines cracked me up !🤣 OMG ! aakash is just awesome !
both brothers are afraid of najma's tears !😆
you know i thought aseem was going to be her mentor ! but i was surprised when you introduced akshay as aakaash ! nice !!!

when someone stares into the computer screen ; smiling like a stupid & then suddenly begins to laugh ; others will think of them as complete psycos .
and that's what my mom thought when i was reading your ff !
yes ! you made me smile too in this chapter :)
update soon ! and btw soon doesn't mean ten decades !😆
and thanks for a sweet and cute update !
love you alot ! ❤️
kiki

LOL aww i love IPKKND too! :)
I'm loving Aakash's character; oooh Aseem was a tad jealous wasn't he :P
Update soon - I need another dose of ur story asap :)

unresed my comment :)
and i love the pics of barun with green eyes !

awww both brothers are tooo cuteee