Asad Zoya Story **NEW PART 8 - Pg 14 **

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So here's what I think should happen now... (based on all the promos and future track so that my plot is not completely unrealistic!)

Part 1 Below, Part 2 - Pg 2, Part 3 - Pg 3, Part 4 - Pg 5, Part 5 - Pg 7, Part 6 - Pg 9, Part 7 - Pg 12, Part 8 - Pg 14,

Asad and Zoya are both torn, Zoya for seeing what she saw, the love her life in bed with someone else, and Asad for still not being able to come to terms with his infidelity... For Zoya it didn't matter who the girl was, how it happened or that there might have been a bigger issue at hand, a bigger conspiracy, a lifelong path of turmoil both her and Asad would have to tread through alone if the dirty truth was not uncovered. For Asad it felt beyond painful to cause grief to Zoya, and not just that, but also bearing the responsibility of having done something that he never thought he was capable of, he never in his wildest dreams had thought would become the curse of his life...

Even among his confused thoughts and pain, all he now wants is to speak to Zoya and explain the chaotic turn of events that lead to the dreaded mishap, in the slightest hope that Zoya will believe him and things can take a turn for the better, even at a gradual pace. But Zoya fears the very sight of Asad can bring those painful moments flashing right in front of her eyes, making her hate him all over again. She wants to run away, clear her mind and try to think rationally as to what is to happen next.

Asad musters the courage to go upstairs to Zoya's room, but is stopped by Dilshad on the stairs who makes it clear that Zoya doesn't want to see him, and she wants to be left alone for some time and that they all should respect that.

Its almost midnight as seeing that everyone is in their rooms, Asad manages to sneak out, with painful red eyes and walks towards Zoya's bedroom. He enters and sees her sleeping in her wedding outfit, with blackened eyes...

Asad: (holds her hand and says) Zoya... main... main aapko kaise... how do I explain? Mujhe to khud bhi nahi pata ki... ki yeh sab... yeh sab kaise ho gaya... Maine kya dekha, kya hua... Mujhe maaf kar do Zoya, par please, please mujhse baat karo! (his tear drops fall on her hand...)
Zoya: (slowly opens her eyes as she feels Asad's tears) Mr Khan... aap... aap yahan kya kar rahe hain? Chale jaiye yahan se! Mujhe aapse koi baat nahi karni hai...
Asad: Lekin Zoya...
Zoya: I don't want to hear anything Mr. Khan! Aap waise hi bahut kuch kar chuke hai, ab bolne sunne ke liye kuch baki nahi raha (she starts weeping away)

Asad tries to wipe her tears but she moves away... Asad feels more upset than ever and leaves... They both get romantic flashbacks of their times together... when they fought, they argued, they wiped each other's tears... but both realize that this time its going to take a lot more than simply wiping the tears away to make things better...

The next morning, Zoya packs a few of her clothes and makes up her mind to leave. Najma and Dilshad go to her room with breakfast and are surprised to see her ready with a small bag. She tells them that she needs to go out for some fresh air and clear her head out before taking any sort of decision. Dilshad agrees but says Najma will go with her, but Zoya says she wants to be alone right now. And they ask her about her bag and she says she might think about living with her Aapi for a few days.

Zoya leaves and lands up at a railway station, and decides to go to Ajmer, for finding mental peace. Meanwhile her Aapi comes to Dilshad's house and asks to see Zoya. Dilshad explains that she has gone out for a bit, and will come back soon. But that she should return home and Zoya might go there instead. So her Aapi gets worried and tries to call Zoya but Zoya doesn't answer. Dilshad asks her not to worry as she tries to reason that Zoya might need some time and space to think things over. Asad overhears their conversation and gets worried.

Few hours pass and Aapi leaves for her home, but still there is no news of Zoya. Everyone is starting to get worried. Soon enough, night approaches and a worried Dilshad is on the phone with Aapi who is equally worried. Asad calls Ayan to find out if Zoya is with them and not finding her there, he starts wondering where she could have gone.

Asad has a flashback...

Zoya: Aapko pata hai Mr. Khan, meri Aapi kehti hain ki meri Ammi ko Ajmer Sharif se bahut lagaav tha. Ammi aur Abbu ki pehli mulakat wahi par hui thi...
Asad: Hmm...
Zoya: Aur pata hai Mr. Khan, jab main is duniya main aane wali thi, tab bhi Ammi wahan gayi thi! Unko wahan jane se bahut sukun milta tha! Woh shayad ek baar mujhe bhi waha lekar gayi thi, lekin main bahut hi choti thi, isiliye mujhe kuch yaad nahi
Asad: Haan, it is one of the holiest places in India!
Zoya: Holy ho ya unholy, mujhe ek din waha zaroor jaana hai! Waha jaane se bahut hi sukun milta hoga... Aapke seriousness ke pagalpan se bahar aane ke liye shayad mujhe jald hi wahan jana pad jaye, you never know!

Asad comes out of the flashback and wonders if she may have gone there... He makes a few calls to the Airport and Railway authorities and finds out that Zoya indeed boarded a train to Ajmer. He rushes to tell Dilshad and Najma this, but they don't want to talk to him. Meanwhile Tanveer overhears his phone conversation and also knows that Zoya is headed to Ajmer.

Asad leaves on a mission to find Zoya and bring her back.



Hope you guys enjoyed this...
If you guys want me to continue, please let me know and I'll write more :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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please continue!!!! its sounds so good!!!!!!!!!!!
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should i update on this topic or create new one?
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update in this one please.
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Originally posted by: hirie

should i update on this topic or create new one?


Arreh wah - I felt as if I was watching an actual epi - please continue with this as I want to know what happens next - thanks yaar!!!😃
Edited by Sparklingcider - 12 years ago
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ok guys, will update on this topic itself, for ease of reading...

should the update go above??

or as a reply to the original post (in this case i can put up the page info on the top of this page, so that people reading in from the start can follow up! and title of this post will keep changing as new updates are up to say what page they're on!)
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Originally posted by: hirie

ok guys, will update on this topic itself, for ease of reading...

or as a reply to the original post (in this case i can put up the page info on the top of this page, so that people reading in from the start can follow up! and title of this post will keep changing as new updates are up to say what page they're on!)

do it like that. it well be very good.
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Story continued... Part 2...

Asad leaves for Ajmer, and on what seems like a long journey to him, his mind is filled with an overwhelming sense of loss, confusion, betrayal, hatred, pain and most of all, fear! A sense of losing not only the woman he's loved, something he never though he'd be capable of, but also losing the trust of his very own mother and sister, who were his life all these years... A sense of confusion for not being able to put the pieces of puzzle together of the treacherous evening that turned his life upside down... A sense of betrayal that he is responsible for, for not only betraying his fiancees trust, but also the trust of values so painstakingly instilled in him by his mother... A sense of hatred for his own self for having done the very exact same thing that he hates his father did... A sense of pain for causing everyone so much misery, not just to his own self... And most importantly, a sense of fear for losing the love of his love, a fear for her security, a fear for her safety, a fear for her acceptance...

Meanwhile Tanveer, who has cleverly decided to follow Asad, is smirking away thinking he will never let the growing distance between Asad and Zoya decrease...

Back at Bhopal, Najma is also upset, but worried for Dilshad's health as she has stopped eating and is severely depressed. She wonders what could have happened for her brother to go off track completely and commit such an act of offense? She then thinks of all the times Zoya tried uncover Tanveer's true intentions and how Asad always supported Tanveer... She starts to think maybe Asad always had a thing for Tanveer, but then rationalizes her wandering thoughts and thinks that wouldn't be possible as her brother wouldn't have agreed to marry Zoya, that his brother simply wasn't the kind to play silly pranks or games. She also remembered the times when she'd seen love for Zoya in his eyes, even though he never himself expressed it to her, or anyone else for that matter, not even to Zoya herself! She starts to wonder if what Zoya said was all true and this was all a part of Tanveer's plan? She starts to doubt Tanveer and goes to Dilshad and tries to focus her attention away from all the depressive thoughts. She tells her about her thoughts and Dilshad too starts to wonder what the reality is behind the whole matter. She wants to believe that her son is innocent and that he would never do such a thing, but being a mother of a daughter, she also cannot overlook the fact that Zoya saw with her very own eyes. But Najma tells her that looks can be deceiving and often what we see with our very own eyes is not the plain and simple truth. It can be a lot more complicated, and a lot more devious than what meets the eye. They both recollect that Zoya got a call from someone and left the wedding venue in a hurry. They call Asad to find out if there is any way to know who Zoya got the call from, and Asad informs them that he is en route to Ajmer, as that's where Zoya is headed.

Dilshad is relieved that Zoya will be fine once Asad finds him and gets a small ray of hope that things might get better. She calls Aapi who is fuming that Asad is the one going to get her back, but not knowing the city well herself, she cannot come up with a better solution. And she asks Dilshad to keep her updated.

Zoya wanders aimlessly once she reaches Ajmer... She doesn't know what to do! She sits on a bench and starts weeping away and can only feel being totally helpless and not in control of anything anymore... She wishes she could rewind time, be more careful and stop all the misdeeds from happening... If only that was possible...

Having taken a flight to Ajmer to give him the much need advantage of time, Asad is already at the train station and waiting to see Zoya's face... He waits outside and keeps looking at everyone who comes out, almost as if it were an airport where people wait for their loved one's arrival! He waits and waits, but there is no sight of Zoya. When the density of people coming out becomes extremely low, he thinks of searching inside, and frantically tries to look for her. He just misses seeing her sitting on the bench due to people passing by. He then starts yelling her name and Zoya happens to hear him and for a second stops crying and gets up...

Zoya: Mr Khan?

Just the Asad turns around and sees Zoya standing far away, and runs towards her with a faint smile on his face...

Asad: Zoya...

Zoya picks up her bag and tried to walk away but Asad holds her hand.

Zoya: Mera haath chodiye Mr Khan!
Asad: Zoya... Zoya ek baar... ek baar meri baat sun lo... Zoya please...
Zoya: Mr Khan!
Asad: Try to understand Ms Farooqi...
Zoya: Try to understand? Try to understand what Mr Khan? Bataiye...
Asad: Main jaanta hu... mujhe pata hai ki... ki... woh...
Zoya: Main bhi sab kuch jaanti hu Mr Khan, aur please aap mujhe jaane dijiye! Aap waise hi mujhe bahut rula chuke hai... I don't want to waste more tears on you...

Asad is hurt by what Zoya says, but he lets go of her hand and tries to tell her to return home and not run away... But Zoya doesn't listen and gets inside a taxi... Asad follows her...

Asad loses track of Zoya but manages to find the taxi she boarded parked on the side... He quickly gets down and asks the driver where he dropped Zoya and starts to run back as he says just a few meters away on the hill as she wanted to walk along the path and clear her head out, he continues to say she looked very upset... But Asad runs away...

He stumbles upon a bag on the hilly trail and while looking at it, notices someone lady running away ahead. He then realizes that the bag is Zoya's and she couldn't have just thrown her bag here, so wonders if something's happened to her and is worried for her safety... He starts to look around and starts shouting her name, while Zoya lays on the floor right under the small hill... He cannot find her, but keeps going deeper into the trail and before he knows it, he's at the bottom of the hill... and he's sees someone lying on the ground... He runs towards the person and is shocked and relieved to find a badly bruised Zoya. He takes her in his arms and hugs her tight to his chest and cries out loud.

Asad: (he looks at her face while still holding her in his arms) Zoya... I'm sorry Zoya... please forgive me... wake up Zoya...

He tries really hard to get her back to her senses, but in vain. He picks her up and starts walking towards a stream flowing closeby. He puts her on the ground and sprints some water on her face. Zoya slowly opens her eyes and is shocked to see Asad.

Zoya: (in a feeble voice...) Mr. Khan... aap?
Asad: Zoya.. are you okay?
Zoya: How can I... (voice starts to fade...)
Asad: Kuch mat bolo Zoya... you're badly hurt...
Zoya: Lekin...
Asad: Lekin vekin kuch nahi...
Zoya: I don't need your help, just... just leave me alone

Asad thinks she doesn't know what she's talking about... and knows she won't be able to go anywhere by herself in this wilderness in her current injured state, so he picks her up and starts to walk again...

Zoya: Mujhe niche utariye... aaw...

Then she realizes her left leg is badly hurt and that she won't be able to walk, but is still adamant on not being in his arms...

Zoya: Mujhe niche utariye Mr Khan!
Asad: Aap chal nahi payengi...
Zoya: Mujhe chalna ho, ya baithna ho, jo bhi karna ho, main khud kar loongi...
Asad: Dekhiye Ms Farooqi...
Zoya: Dekhiye Mr Khan, main aapse pehle bhi keh chuki hoon, mujhe aapki koi help nahi chahiye, okay? So please let go of me!

Asad doesn't see a point of arguing with her so lets her go and she is unable to stand by herself, while Asad watches her trying to sit down slowly. Zoya wonders how she is going to gather courage to get up and get out of this messy place, and Asad comes close to her.

Asad: Aap yahan par aise hi baithe rahiye... Agar aap ziddi hai, to main bhi yahi par baith kar intezaar karunga
Zoya: You can do whatever you want, just leave me alone!
Asad: To theek hai...

Zoya tries to move her face away but it pains her to move...

Zoya: Ouch... aaah...
Asad: That enough Ms Farooqi... (he picks her up in his arms again and starts walking..)
Zoya: Mr Khan!
Asad: Aap ko jo kehna hai, bol dijiye, main kuch bhi nahi kahunga, lekin main aapko akela yaha aise chod kar kahi nahi jaaunga! Aapko first aid ki zaroorat hai...

Zoya is speechless. She feels the pain from her wounds but thinks its nothing compared to the pain that the doomed evening has given her!


Edited by hirie - 12 years ago
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Absolutely love ittt! Please update sooonnn!! :)))))
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will update soon, thanks for all the appreciation!

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