Part 3- pg 15 UPDATED!!!!:FF||The Dark Night|| - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

pehle ethe aa..jhappi de mujhe...tune meri baat suni..i so love u jaan...

now come back to story...👏👏taliya taliya..!!!
kya baat hai..umeed se dugna ise kehte hai MS FAROOKI!!😆
i love it...seriously , genuinely , actually...😳
ab update karo jaldi😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Hey ...
The plot is really intriguing !!! :)

I'm so looking forward to read the next updates ...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hello QHians!

I'm updating this FF after a long time and I'm terribly sorry for this.
I was not really getting an idea to move the story forward.
But, I tried and came up with this.

Dedicated to MILII_BAKSHI😊

Part 7:- The moments of betrayal...

He needed her. His body could no longer take rejection. Her mysterious moves troubled him.

Why was she doing this?Did she really love Akram?

He clenched his fingers forming a fist and followed her.

She was bursting- emotionally and physically. She could no longer reject him. He weakened her, loved her and she loved him more.

But, loving him today would be a risk. And, she did not have a nerve in her body so brave that she could bear his loss especially after she had seen death play foul games with her.

The loss of a life was cruel. That f**king man had killed her aapi. He had tortured Najma to death. Now, she cannot let him play mean games with Asad.
She had to stay away from Asad.

She walked away, almost ran to keep him away from her. It was raining heavily as if it would never stop.

It was dark. She could sense evil lurking around. Her eyes searched for a vehicle which could sweep her away from that place.

And, indeed she was swept away but not by wheels instead by a pair of strong arms enveloping her tiny frame within their own.Firm and tight.
She felt warm.

A cheerful tear touched her cheeks. She felt touched by his gesture. Inspite, of being rude and arrogant, he was actually trying to make it up. She had never seen a more adorable and lovable Asad Ahmed Khan than this one.She could not resist.
She gave up and with her all her fears drained as tiny droplets of water flowed through her face cleansing every ounce of guilt, pain and sorrow embedded in her soul.

She pulled him close, very close, put her arms completely around his gorgeous body and squeezed him tight.

Asad was not surprised. He knew she will sooner or later surrender herself. To hell with Akram, she was a bad liar. Her retina could only retain his image and her heart beat fast only for him.

He hugged back giving her butt a passionate squeeze.

It was overtly sexy and sensuous. She hid her head within his form and her nails dug deeper into his skin making it more intense.

He massaged her back, held her body tight assuring that he was there with her now and forever.

She lifted her head to look into his eyes. The tinge of victory in his eyes stared down deeply into mine.

I felt like screaming and shouting to declare I LOVED HIM.

My lips parted to initiate the process.

"I...Love..Y" and even before I could complete his face lowered into mine and his lips soft and smooth came in contact with my own.

It was a smooch and he was waiting for a reply.
I ran my fingers through his silky hair and slowly, kissed him know that our feelings were mutual.
The moment unleashed all the passion filled in their hearts.
They were about to make it hotter when bodies drifted apart. None realized what happened.

They were being dragged by men into a vehicle.
Even before Asad could fight back they drugged him. Zoya cried in pain, shouted for help but none came.
Alas, she surrendered for she became aware. She knew the masked men and their owner.

He had found her. Her eyes became red with rage. She spoke to herself.
"It was time for face-off! Mr Gaffur Siddiqui."




Edited by kabhimitwaasya - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow...awesum..dat was amazng..d cinfessn in rain...waitng for d face wid a evil..thnjs 4 pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow wow!!! That was something!!!
Loved the scene in rain but I'm waiting for the face off!!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Amazing update...asad zoya love each other madly...there is a mystery awaiting for us. ..plz continue soon. ...thanks for pm. ...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: tvpremi

Amazing update...asad zoya love each other madly...there is a mystery awaiting for us. ..plz continue soon. ...thanks for pm. ...



thnku...😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow awesome part
plz plz plz plz cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: awesome

wow awesome part

plz plz plz plz cont soon



thnku..sure, will continue soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ohh my so intense and hot yet so forlorn and sad... loved the entire capter . right from the start till the very end ...fab job 👏

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