a beautiful sunset asya ff (imp note on page 9)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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A beautiful sunset (promo)

a story of ambition, passion and love. story of a star who meets someone and his veiws his ideals change. story of a girl who falls for a star.

(asad and zoya(in a masquerade mask) is sitting at the edge of the wooden dock looking out at the setting sun.)

Asad: "is dance really so beautiful?"

(kabir sir is sitting next to zoya on the bench in the academy garden)

Kabir sir: "dance comes from heart zoya. And I know your heart is not corrupt but your reason to dance is. Why?"

(zoya sitting on the floor leaning against the wall tear-stricken.)

Zoya: "I hate you asad. I hate you."

(asad and ayaan are in the dressing room.)

Ayaan: "bhai jaan, what is your problem with her?"

Asad: "I don't like zoya."

A BEAUTIFUL SUNSET

PS: pictures are edited by me but the original are not mine.

PSS: i know the editing is sloppy but still...

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Already in

Interesting

You have me glued

Pics make things clear

Story sounds awesome

Btw congrats on your new work

P.s. don't name the teacher as Karan... It'll get comfussing at a point cause of KSG and Asad thing

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Already in

Interesting

You have me glued

Pics make things clear

Story sounds awesome

Btw congrats on your new work

P.s. don't name the teacher as Karan... It'll get comfussing at a point cause of KSG and Asad thing

right i was about to change it and forgot. thanks for reminding me.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wowww
luved yur pic edits
sound like it is unique
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey it so gud yaaar
very intesrting concept
lovely editing
do pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ayuzawa


right i was about to change it and forgot. thanks for reminding me.



Keep it as Hiten sir or something else

P.s. since this story sounds exciting i won't be so upset on the ending of ur current ff
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wooow👏
super aesome wrk
pics are vry nice
that make them mr intresting
i love dance and ur stry also😃😃
pm meee plzzz
Edited by QWEERRTTYYUUIIO - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima



Keep it as Hiten sir or something else

P.s. since this story sounds exciting i won't be so upset on the ending of ur current ff


i changed it to kabir..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting like it
Please pm me
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oooh interesting, please update soon and pm me

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