Asad-Zoya FF: Somewhere in Time - Last Chapter Pg 129 - Page 82

Originally posted by: mandarin26

have I mentioned what a fabulous writer you are??? I avoid logging into the forum these days. but your PM made me smile automatically... yay!!! zoya has finally realized how much asad loves her... they're back together(atleast in your story)...
you have no idea how happy you made me today 🤗 👏
I hope now you can proceed further with 'Heartbeat warfare' too

Originally posted by: notagain

Update aane wala hai?

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Loved it. finally she forgave him. I am happy and content. Now some romance time please, pretty please with a cherry on top.. 😆

Originally posted by: snehalparab

this was awesome part loved it so much and thanks she realised that he is bad at telling stories loved the was she said in past I have forgave you that means I was right and I was right to fall for you twice loved it

Thank you. Yes, Zoya realized depth of his love aur uske samne uski galtiyan feeki pad gayi.
badnaseeb samjhate the ke jindagi mein tum the hamare par pyaar itna ho gaya ke tum jindagi ban gaye

ab naseeb se bhi gila nahi kyunki jise badnaseeb samjha tha wo khushnaseebi ho gayi hai

pyaar ki inteha tum kar gaye aur bataya nahi

humare pyaar mein bemaut mar gaye par jataya bhi nahi

loved it please update soon and keep writing

Wah...wah...Bahot khoob 😃

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

👏 Fabulous. You are an awesome writer and one can see how much work you put in every chapter. I am glad that no one tried to force things or pressure Zoya. It's good she figured out everything on her own. The secenes in Asad's room made my day! I'm so happy that she is finally sleeping in Asad's room!

Thanks a lot for the pm!

Originally posted by: notagain

The talk with Aapi, I realize that you did not do a convo about it, I just assumed she wanted to talk. You know sometimes when one is feeling bummed and wants to talk to friend or family, but not about the issue, but everything else, it's more of the reassurance that some parts of life is still the same, despite the problems.

It is sad when a story or a book ends, and even more when it is one of your favorite. 😳

Such a beautiful journey, such lovely memories, old and new. And so it ends.

A new dawn, a new morning, and them together in a frame. Beautiful. I loved how you wrote the whole sequence, the tie, the almost kiss. 😳

The move into his room, that's AsYa for you. 😆

The phone call, I got the hint from previous note of yours, however I did not guess it would be this. Perfect. It, ties up this part completely. And he was preparing himself to go through another round of pain. Zoe's acceptance and that visit to her abbu is so heart felt.

And finally the broken pieces of her memory all come together, and the blanks will be filled by new ones and Asad will keep them glued and bonded together.

I enjoyed every word of this story, it is one of the best on QH. The simplicity, the genuine emotions, the extra in the ordinariness of it all, makes it so perfect Noe.👏👏👏

It was a pleasure to read this. In this world of high speed internet, fleeting emotions, faster is better, instant noodles (which I do enjoy sometimes) a constant and steady story is such a grounding read. Like a perfect cup of coffee on a lazy Sunday morning with blue skies. Your story is like that. One that wants to be read again and again. A comfort story one wants to come back to and knows it will be alright. 🤗

Now looking forward to your next one.