AsYa OS: Desires in the Hurricane| updt pt 2/pg.13 - Page 4

Originally posted by: nupsie

Sadia I LOUVE YOU🤗

AWESOME AWESOME!!😛

This is somethin I was dying to read...OMG u exctly wrote wat I wanted to read for soo soo long...I used to think of somethin like this but m not a writer😆

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Zoya went back n Asad found out Tanveer's truth😲

n now they'll be staying in the same apartment for one whole day❤️ Kya kya hoga in this one night☺️

They hav so much to talk, share with each other...wat all happened in this one year, how much they missed each other every moment...❤️

Sadia u hav to complete this today itself, m dying to read the next part...plz plz aaj hi update chahiye😆

n girl either u were underestimating ur writing skills...u write soo soo well...no less than my other two favorites, u know who they are😆

I wanna read the next part asap...UPDATE!

<strong>n thank u for writing this🤗

Originally posted by: Zara_92

First of all a BIG THANKYOU to u Sadia for writing an OS and dedicating it to all of us 🤗
ure truly a sweeetheart ❤️

Secondly , this OS wasn't good at all... Like u said !!
Instead it was 'FREAKING AWESOME' like I said ...😆 afterall I'm a psychic 😛

Sabse pehle I noticed 'Mr Damon' 🤣

Next I loved every bit of Asad's emotions and Zoya's actions ... She was living all by herself and became independent .. That was really amazingly put by u !!

And thank GOD finally Asad learnt to say something more apart from 'wo actually and main' 😛

And OHMYGOD !!!!!! They both will b under the same roof for a night and it will be raining outside ... *faints*
How will they control their long standing desires now ???? I'll die waiting for next update ... Pleaseee update TONIGHT like u promised 😳

Sadia ur an Amazing Writer and U NEED to write more now coz ab mujhe pata chal gaya hai that u write really very very very well !!!!!! 👏

Love u Sadia ❤️



P.s - Ur sooo evil !!! Left at such a cliffhanger ...😡 raat mein hee update CHAIYE !! 😆

Originally posted by: DoNotDisturb

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Congratulations <3 Writing is a great habit :D Will read and get back to you ASAP!

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Hey 🤗 🤗

Sadia its was SO nice😃👏I loved the idea and the plot and the best part was Asad apologising. I think all of us have been dying to hear Asad say this.😆The idea was superb and the plot was great.😃Welcome to the writers group, ( though Im not a big one, but I do write😳) And it was lovely reading your first one.

Keep it going and I hope to receive a PM again soon😃⭐️Well done⭐️

The best part about the story was that Tanveer was exposed and everything was going to be okay! Good going😃

Keep it up :D

P.S. I forgot to mention, MR. DAMON😳😆😉

Originally posted by: Naughtynatty

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Oh freak Jaaneman you are so goood !!

I was in tears in the flask back sacchi !!

I can so imagine Taanu changing results and blaming Zoya 😡!

Yayyy Hurricane mein akele akele dontgive a saddie end please !!

And I hate you for the cliff hanger😆But I cant wait for the next update😳

Originally posted by: tnusredey

Mr Damon??🤣

</div><div>Newys I loved it! I dremt oneday dat Asad wud go 2 NY 2 manaofy Zoya.

Tans da reasn I loved it.😆

Plz continue.😆

Originally posted by: anushka2112

Wow Wowww Wowww ...I wish this hurricane wouldn't end and they remain under one roof ever ...Asad zoya ek kamare m band ho aur chabi kho jaayyee ,...hehr

Sadia darling tumne kamal kar diya Asad ko Wo Actually k aage bulwa diya ...couldn't matter its after one year or what ...but ya I really felt bad for zoya that without any deed she had to wait for one year now Asad has to repay each n every second that she missed ...then only he deserves her ...god aisa kisi k bhi sath na ho that person u love and u have to wait for him when you are not at guilty ...u pour emotions perfectly ...

Sadia pls its utmost request continue soon and pm me ...

Originally posted by: -ElmoFuj-

Aaahhh Sadiaaa! 🤗

Kya bandi ho yar. Itna acha likh sakti ho par likhti nahi ho. Jao yar. 😆

This was brilliaant! What Asad did was no joke. But then again every person does make a mistake. And he did come to ammend it.

It was lovely seeing Zoya as an independant girl. Lovely.

And i'm guessing a romanced filled update coming up? Sooo excited. 😳 JALD SE UPDATE KAROOO. ! ❤️

P.S im in total awe of your writing skills. <3