MORE LESSONS IN LOVE FOR ASAD MIYAH

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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is not an FF just a scenario

The writers should introduce the jealous factor…

We did see a minute part of Asad's unconcious jealousy during the cricket episode…But then Asad did not understand that it was jealousy at that time but felt it was because of his stance that women should not meet with men without a chaperone.

There is too much drama already with Ayaan's situation… So to let that sink in with the audience…they should lighten the mood at Asad's place… (You see they can't lighten the mood at Ayaan's place) and they do the same when the tension builds up in Asad's place.

The writers should introduce a new character… this time a male… maybe Asad's good friend from the "abroads" or it could be a very good childhood friend of Zoyas whom she had lost touch with for a long time but bumped into each other in Bhopal and Zoya invited him to her wedding

The new character being Asad's friend (Lets call him Aarib) would be a better option and more fun…

Now Aarib is quite the opposite of Asad (not like Ayaan… Ayaan is kiddish charming) but Aarib is very charming, witty, and also very observant.

Aarib notices that Tanveer and Asad's chummy, touching relationship. He also notices the look of hurt that flashes across Zoya's face everytime this happen and how she does or says something silly to anger Asad.

Aarib confronts Asad with this observation.

Aarib: "Asad, I thought you are engaged to Zoya and Aunty had mentioned that the decision was yours. Do you have more feelings for Tanveer than you have for Zoya? What is your relationship with her?"

Asad is shell-shocked. He snaps out of it and angrily:"Aarib, are you nuts? Tanveer is a very good childhood friend of mine. And currently she is going through a bad phase. So all I'm doing is supporting".

Aarib: "Are you sure that it is all that is. That's not how it looks for a person who's looking on from the outside."

Asad then recalls Zoya's statement (The dance master episode)

Aarib cuts into Asad's thoughts: "Is Zoya ok with this?"

Asad: "Zoya… Zoya acts childish all the time."

Aarib: "Is that so, my friend. Is that all that you have noticed? Have you noticed the look of hurt on Zoya's face whenever you are extra pally with Tanveer but you ignore Zoya, when you and Tanveer hold hands and not Zoyas, whenever you hug Tanveer and not Zoya. She does a good job of covering it before anyone notices it. She hides it behind what you call childish acts. I'm sorry for you, man. You are a lucky man. You have a woman who is beautiful not just from the outside but also from the inside and who loves you. Appreciate her before its too late, man… before its too late"

Aarib walks away. Asad is shocked…

Asad should be seen watching his friend on first name basis with Zoya and not liking it.

He should see Zoya always smiling when she's around Aarib and when Asad walk into the room, she stops smiling. Asad starts to get jealous. He should be seen trying to crack a joke which shocks all of them except Aarib. Aarib should just burst out laughing. Asad should walk away in embarrassment. Zoya should be seen running after him.

Zoya: "Mr Khan… the joke was very cute and funny. Mr. Khan… Just that you… joke… aadat nahi hai na" and she touches his hand to show she means it. Asad turns looks at her and smiles. (can throw in a mitwa moment here)

He should be seen constantly rushing to stand by Zoya's side whenever Aarib is around.

Asad should see Aarib being mesmerized by Zoya's smile and Asad should remember the bhang scene about Zoya's killer as stated by Zoya and this would upset Asad some more J,

Dilshad and Najma observes that Asad is getting jealous of Aarib and Zoya's comradeship. Dilshad to herself: "It's a good opportunity to get Asad to confess to Zoya. I must use this opportunity".

Dislhad: "Asad beta, Do you have some time to go the mall. I need you to…"

Asad: "Is it very urgent Ammi? A very important meeting has cropped up at the office and I need to rush."

Dilshad: "Koyi baath nayi, Asad"

Asad turns and leaves. She then turns to Aarib and loudly for Asad to hear "Aarib beta, can Zoya and you go to the mall and pick up something for me" and she winks at Aarib.

Aarib catches oo, winks back…

Aarib: "Sure Aunty, any ways I'm doing nothing else here. I was getting bored. Is it ok while we are there that Zoya and I have lunch together? Maybe I should ask Asad if its ok."

Zoya butts in. "Aarib, why should Mr. Khan give me permission. I can decide for myself and I say its ok"

Asad shouts "Ms. Farooqi". All turn. Then in softer tone "Zoya". Zoya's eyes almost pop out. The others smile.

Then Asad to Dilshad still looking at Zoya "Ammi, There is no need to trouble Aarib. I will take Ms.Fa…. Woh…woh… Zoya to the mall. What is it that you need Ammi"

Dilshad: "Asad, but you just said you have a very important meeting…you know Aarib…"

Aarib: "Asad, if its ok with you. I can take Zoya to the mall. You can go ahead to the office."

Asad in clipped tones: "I did say I would take Zoya to the mall. I will get to the office after that".

Zoya gives Asad a look of pure joy. Asad sees that smile and gives his famous small smirk. ( a small mitwa moment)

Tanveer walks in just then overhears Asad saying that he would take Zoya to the mall. Tanveer to herself: "Not if I can help it"

She walks upto Asad with a smile, places her hand on Asad's hand.

Tanveer: "Jammy, may I join Zoya and you to the mall. I need to pick up a few things myself and with the recent incidents that has happened, I am a nervous to go there myself". She turns to Dilshad. "kaala, is it ok?"

Dilshad turns to Aarib with a helpless look.

Aarib to Tanveer: "Tanveer, I need your help here. Let Asad go with Zoya and I will take you there later".

Asad: "Its ok, let Tanveer come with Ms Farooqi… I mean, woh… ahem… Zo..Zoya and me".

He turns to Zoya to ask her to get ready and he saw the smile on Zoya's face fade and a hurt look flash across Zoya's face before she could cover it. Asad remembers his conversation with Aarib. Asad looks at Aarib. Aarib rolls his eyes at Asad, slaps his forehead, shakes his head and turns to walk away.

Zoya stops him.

Zoya: "Aarib, wait. I'm not going to the mall. I'll stay back and help you with whatever you need to get done. Let Mr. Khan and Tanveer go to the mall together. Mr.Khan enjoys her company better than" (Zoya's voice breaks a little here but she takes a deep breath and continues. Asad hears that break and he shuts his eyes in pain…maybe another mitwa moment) "does mine after all Tanveer is Mr.Khan's childhood friend."

And Zoya looks at Tanveer. Tanveer gives her a triumphant smile which is noticed by Aarib and then Zoya walks off with Aarib following her.

Asad stares after Zoya, raises his hand halfway as-if to stop her…Then Asad continues to stare after Zoya with a look of frustration.

Tanveer: "Jammy…"

Asad stops her and curtly says: "Not now Tanveer" and walks to his room slamming the door shut…

Tanveer is left behind with a look of frustation…

Wouldn't you all love to see this….

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Posted: 12 years ago
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we would love to see it but gul does not pay attention to what we love😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I would love to see something like this. Asad being jealous and having a male friend would be a welcomed change. He is always surrounded by women, it would be nice to see him interact with some other guys.
Btw have you considered turning this into an os,ss or ff? Your ideas are very good and I think this scenario would make a nice story. I'm sorry if I said something wrong.
Edited by chibi_deea - 12 years ago

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