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Girl ' she a very complex, confused, difficult person to understand just like Mystery, puzzle, &maze that you won't be able to solve and understand or crack through.

Wrong Complex, Confused, difficult to understand is this world, the society that paints different images that give us expectations of our desires n dreams , or even burdens us with the do's and don'ts of our culture, religion ,the typical Indian society how we are told to behave to fit in .

We girls our labeled as stubborn confused females who our clingy, and pampered, and have too many expectations. Reason we our life this is because

As we our little every little girl wishes to have a fairytale life and a love story. It's not our fault the stories we were told and read to about the prince coming on his horse and whisking his princess away on his horse and have happily ever after. But the harsh reality is life isn't a storybook where fairy tale happens and you find your prince ' it's a game where there our only players to break your heart and dreams. that's is what Zoya had thought till once again life let her believe in fairy tales and made her meet her prince Asad Ahmad khan everything was perfect 'she got her prince and was happy in her castle with her family. Until like in every story fairy tale a twist comes in and her castle her prince her whole world is affected by it making her realize that coincidences happen but to make use of the circumstances, manipulate and ruin only a player that knows the game of life can do so 'what is this twist how will it affect Zoya and Asad and their life will she still have her fairy tale or will it become a living nightmare she can't wake up from?


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He, His Ami and sister Najma entered the big House wearing a white sherwani

They were greeted with Flowers and Itar sprinkled (perfume) on them with the brides side greeting each and every guest with undivided attention

"Wow Ami I so want my shaadi like this" squeaked Najma

"Tamatar in order to have this kind of wedding first shed a few pounds dulha milega then only you will be a dulhan right" says Asad

"Bhaijaan please miljayga dulha but I want mine just like this" says Najma

"Haan Najam really lovely arrangements I must say zeena and Amir t did a wonderful job in her sister's shaadi" says dilshaad

If anyone saw this

It looked like a Yash chopra Wedding full on bollwood glamour , seemed like YRF was the wedding planner.

It was a typical big fat Indian wedding. The alter was beautifully decorated, roses, lily's orchids and pink, yellow flowers and the brides favorites roses especially red and white was a must .

The Lighting was perfect the fairy lights everywhere along with the huge chandelier and the soft candles that were scattered around really made the room glow and take it to an extra leave.

It seemed as if itw as a wedding of a princess truly this would be the wedding of the year he loved weddings 'despite seeing his parents' marriage the way it was he hadn't lost faith in this paak, (pure) relationship of a man and wife he vowed the day he ever married he won't do the mistakes his father did.

"Bhaijaan my battery is dead please give me your cell phone I want take snaps so I can use the same things in my wedding and in fact ami is talking to wedding planner so I want save her number" she said

Sure yeh lo tamatar he hands it

He was walking around the waiter bumped in to him and spilled the water on him

"I'm sorry sir galti se" said the nervous waiter

"It's ok thank god its only water ill dry up" he went searching for a bathroom

He went into a room

And went into washroom

Only to be shocked

He saw a beautiful girl dressed in her wedding dress looking like an angel sent from heaven

But she was crying and trying fix her smudge eye liner

She looked at him through the mirror and turned he was just staring at her she turned back toward mirror

And fixed he makeup and went into the room

He cleaned himself

And came out he saw her sitting and putting her remaining churiyaan on

She was having a difficult time pushing it in her hand

He didn't say a word he went toward her and took her hand and gently pushed the churiyan in little by little

Suddenly one slightly poked her

She hissed and closed her eyes a little

"Are you ok dard hua" and he bent down and with his teeth took out small piece that had pierced her and took his hanky out and dabbed the small cut

"Sorry its hurts na" he said

She slowly raised her eyes

"Nope this is a small cut it will be fine with time for some pain time doesn't even help, anyway thanks you should go down if anyone see's you here people will misunderstand" she said

He left the room

"Bride is not supposed to be like this she seemed very down and her tears girls wait for this day there day 'their fairytale then why is she"

"Asad don't over think yaar girls sensitive emotional she is leaving her house and family I'm just stupid she is happy just her emotions and nerves might be getting to" her he thought.

. He smiled and told himself looking back at the room he came from . His smile made many girls drool he was eye candy for all the single ladies and mother were interview and impressing dilshaad with their daughters every girl wanted to was dying to be Mrs. Asad Ahmad Khan

Qazi saab came in it was time for nika

"Dulhan ko alke aayiye" said qazi saab

The groom akram was setting waiting for his bride

Zoya came down with her aapi, jiju and best friend tanu and her friend noor around her

All eyes were on her the was the star today but Asad was the one who couldn't take his eyes off her he didn't blink even once. Allah Knows what would have happened if anyone would notice his eyes gazing at her with this intensity and sparkle in his eyes.

As Zoya was slowly walking down the stairs looking completely gorgeous in her Today was her wedding day the day that every girl waits and dreams for, but instead of being thrilled she was terrified. The reason being that she was emotional blackmailed and forced in to marring a guy she didn't love for get love someone she barely even knew this was only because of that horrible incident that happened in college and that heartless Casanova she agreed to marry because of her aapi and jiju

Zoya's mind: Come on Zoya i get a hold of yourself be strong, today your life will change forever you're getting married ,you have to do this for your family. Just thing about aapi and jiju, you can't back out now.

Zoya's heart: Main aisa kaise kar sakthi hoon , how can I . I don't know why but I can't get myself to trust Akram, even though he Promised me he will always keep me happy, but I have this gut feeling that keeps telling me he is not the right guy for me. I just want to scream and run away from this situation(closing her eyes) Allah miya what's wrong with me 'please let me be wrong about Akram and let this new chapter in life be the beginning of the most beautiful journey of my life please help me please.(zoya looks up at the guest ) she passes by Asad to go sit at the alter when he duppata get stuck in his watch

She stops and asad trys to get it ut and succeds her aapi and tanu sit her down next to him but there is a sheer parada seprateing them which she never wanted but groom side insisted.

She looked so sad

Asad knew this didn't seem right

By now seeing her dulha she should be glowing smiling kuch theek nahi hai

Tanbeer (putting her hand on zoya's shoulder trying to make her feel relax) : zoya you look Stunning don't worry it will all work out just give yourself a chance to try and understand him then time will make everything fall into place forget about everything that happened . Now please smile. says Tanu

Oh wow tanu when did you become a guru and give gyaan to every one teased noor zoya its your day enjoy it don't worry.

The qazi started Akram Mahir Syed son of mahir abudllah syed zoya Fatima Faroouqi se nika ki liye haan hai meher of 40 lacks (money that is given to bride in islam to secure her future incase divorced or she is left ) qubool hai asks the qazi

Ek minute Amir zeenat 1stly 40 lacs naho 4 lac samhje and haan abhi thak car nahi aaya hai and the property papers akram ki naam abhi bhi nahi hua hai Akram tum qubool hai nahi bole gaye ja thak we don't get what we asked said hassena bhi.

Zoya was shocked so was mostly all the guest

Zoya looked at akram but he was quite how can he not say a thing she thought and jiju and appi yeh sab

"Allah miya what's wrong with you'wow just are you a mother or a business woman ?" questioned zoya

"Tauba tauba what is this zeenat and amir huh kaise larki hai yeh bina ma ki larki aisa hi hoti hai learn to be a lady" says hassina bhi.

Zoya chup ho jao says zeenat

"No Aapi . You don't need to fulfill these greedy people each and every demand. Why? Why didn't you tell me all this before? I have a right to know and aapi jiju aap how could you guys are basically selling me to these greedy hseap people yelled zoya "

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"bas zoya enough stop it You are bride. Dulhan doesn't behave this way Please sit down, this is between hassina bhi and us chup raho said zeenat

-"why huh kyunn it concers me right chup naho honge main ,,I cant see these greedy valtures take advantage of my sweet aapi and jiju she told them , "If this Moti pointing to akram's mother, "says that the wedding will not take place if she doesn't getthe bloddy papers and cars and she cuts my riht my haq the meher that insures my wellbeing "Why do you want your dZoya to marry off in a house such horrible cheap dwon market people? Have I become such a burden on you you don't want me any more kya ??"

suna sab ne badtameez larkiii what she is saying!!" hassina bhi akrams mother raised her voice, "we are dwon market cheap !! Such an insult! Haye allah tauba tuaba This girl is a shame to womanhood" aura bolni ki laiki hi nahi hai yeh says hassina

-"chup not another worls im am only sayingwtaht is right and I not afraid if don't open my mouth then more people like you will take advantage of the girls family why should we say haan ji to every deman huh you aren't buying me , im not a toy and waise bi im pricessless got that and haan don't you ever talk about womanhood and being a lady.

I have much more respect and class and morals and values my jiju and aapi gave me. She went to akram pulled him up by his collar. Infact your son is a shame to manhood..yeh an hai hi nahi bacha hai a boy ' who sat like a spineless jerk when his mother demanded lakhs of rupees with expensive gifts" she said referring to the situation when she looked at akram with pleading eyes to support her real man take a stand understood stand by their woman but you 'if he didn't do a thing today then shaadiki baad what support will he give me huh? That it I cant take this drama anymore or these dwonmarket people a second longer

Zoya turned to the guest "I, want let you all know that I Zoya Faroouqi , am breaking this marriage, right now and right here." Yahan koi shaadi nahi hoge yeh cheap greedy family ki saath.

-" himat kaise hui teri ..kya kya baatein 'Enough of the insult. Akram chalo We are leaving. Let's go "Hassina bhi said.

-"Wait a minute my ex-would-be-mother-in-law" zoya stopped.

You think ill let you go so easily after doing all this huh noo hassina bhi I'll not let you ruin another girl and her family's life" understood what you did to me and my family I will make you pay . and haan akram yeh lo she took a 4 bangles and gave it in his hand wear them because you are only this worthy .

Aapi give your cell

Jiju aap please give he was going to but zeenat stopped him

Fine ill find one said zoya

"Anyone has a cell phone here?" zoya asked.

-"here you go" Asad stepped forward, "you can use mine" he handed over his iphone to Zoya

-She dialed a three-digit number, "Hello, police'.."

The police came and arrested them

After sthe police left

Zeenat drop to floor and was crying

-"Why are you crying, aapi ?" zoya said, "It was all their mistake"

-" chup ek dum chup she goes to slap her but her jiju stops her But it was your mistake too. Is this the way to handle a situation" she wiped her tears, "you don't understand bachi ho tum your marriage broke on the alter now who will marry you koi nahi shaadi kart ha aisa larki se crys zeenat?"

-"I' Will "

A voice came from the crowd.

Zoya realized it was the same guy who was in her room and also gave her his mobile.

-"Asad Ahmad Khan said ?" amir zoya's jiju

-"amir I'm architect by profession but I know how difficult it is it is not to care about the society and raise voice against things that are just wrong I have seen it growing up my mother stood up just same way zoya has it and lived her life with dignity and I know zoya will do to and she zoya stood up against dowry and that too on the wedding day, at the alter That takes lots of guts. For me what your sister did was amazing. And I'd be honoured to marry such an amazing woman"

Zeenat was thrilled but yeh pagal larki maangi ya nahi

-"I'll marry him, aapi . I don't know why, but I trust him and I have a feeling that I'll be happy with him" zoya said looking at Asad , as if she has met her match.

Asad im very proud of you beta and zoya you are perfect just the type of beti iwant not bahu but beti nazar na lage and she puts kala tika behind ear and takes her gold kangan and makes zoya wear it

The rituals started. The wedding ceremony took place qazi saab asks Asad Ahmad Khan aap zoya farrooqui se shaadi kar na hi mehr itna daloon he asked 1 core he said

Zoya was should

Asad Ahmad Khan zoya farqooui ki saat nikha karna hai qubool hai

Qubhool hai Qubhool hai he signs papers amiris witiness

Zoya farooqui kya tum Asad Ahmad Khan se nikha kar na hia Qubhool hai

Qubhool hai Qubhool hai she signs so do zeenat and dilshaad as witness

They brougha huge mirror and duppat and cover them the couple looked in mirror and smiled at same time. She was blushing

Pata hai zoya whoever looks in mirror 1st rules the other but you both saw same time meaning dono are equal

The ring and sets they bought as a gift for her asad put on zoya

Her dupatta fell n covered asad face dilshaaad smiled and said

This is signz oya that asad will love you very much she blushed hard e whispered in her ear i love this

pink tone on you he said while winking


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Edited by Fiza28 - 12 years ago
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woww...amazing plzz conitnue..nd pm me
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lovely ff
such a gr8 concept
plz pm me
and please buddy me
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An amazing chapter...lovely concept...so please continue soon...keep up the good work...
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This is interesting , do continue asap and pm me when you do so.


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Beautiful part! Amazing!
Cont soon 😊
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Nice!!
Sounds interesting and the concept is awesome
so plz do pm me
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Its Ayaan na. I swear i wanna kill this Bast**** .
Its all coz of Him . How dare he . 😡
Plz don't harass Asad 😕

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