AsYa fun-fic:From slap to kiss || Part-6 pg-40 ||

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Mahima

@Mahima_13

Stunner

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#201

part 5 was really interesting

i enjoyed the game a lot

i love all 5 of them

please do update soon

waiting for the flashback

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Zara

@ilovebieber

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#202

teddy! 🤗

y did u leave us cliff hanging again??? i totally was enjoying it!!!

plz yaar jaldi continue karna i love IMMY!❤️ gosh n immy n asad kiss was tooo good!!! 😆

PLZ UPDATE JALDI!!😳

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princessradhika

@princessradhika

Inactive

Posted: 12 years ago

#203

oh god!!..i was definately wrong, u r giving us the updates that is even better than the previous one,amazing update👏👏 dear.. i said the previous one was the funniest part but i have to change my opinion...while reading, i really was laughing like a maniac that my mom came to see me if i was okay and to be honest u made the weekend so special..thank u.😃.i was in grumpy mood the whole day that i have nothing interesting to do and now u made it perfect for me...i am missing my friends so much now..

every secret was hilarious..but the secrets of maddy specially the fair & lovely one🤣 was the best and not to forget the smooching one about asad and immy😆😆..i am loving their bond more & more now...now the shocking one, did they really kiss😲..u better write the flashbacks in the next update itself..eager to know what actually happened..one thing is sure that whatever happened zoya don't regret it but what about asad?.😕.aww, maddy is cute, sab ko emotional kar diya, par immy hai to koi fikar nahi, nautanki kahika, sab ka band bajata rehta hai😉

do update soon..and why do u always say that if u disturbed us..no way dear, its my pleasure to read ur stories, it makes me feel better🤗..infact i should say sorry i commented so late last time...but i didn't do it intentionally...thanx for the pm..will wait

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ALISHA ZEN

@LuvUAsYa

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#204

res 🤣

TADAAA IM BACK...

TEDYYY MY JAAAN i jst jst jst love ur ths story to d coree...

n ye waali update to ws likeee wooowww

ahaaa double dacker update...

inniii cute update...

apni schoool mastiii yaad aaa gayi yaaar...

it ws sooo beautifullly written...

sooo real...

i dint felt like im reading evn 4 a second...

u described ool d fun, d craziness , d love , affection evrrrything evrryyy emotion sooo beautifulllyyy...

awww asad n immy kissed each othr...

n lemme d idea of tht game ws suuuperb...

it ws fun reading d update

i srsly enjoyed it to d core...

A SUUUPER SWEEET UPDATE...

thaaanx 4 ritng ths yaaar...

sorry im verry bad at xpresing myself ur updt ws faaar bttr thn wt iv told u...

tnxxx 4 d PM sweeet heart 🤗

n 4 ths cutieee updt iv got smthn 4 my cutie pie hope u like it... 😳

Edited by LuvUAsYa - 12 years ago

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madhvi4gurti

@madhvi4gurti

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#205

its gr8!!!!

update soon!

plz PM me if possible!

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princee

@princeegoyal

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#206

hey superb yr...loved it...& this game too...😆..kiss it means they kissed...wanna read more..hw when ??...pls update soon...& thnks 4 d pm

pari

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Afsha

@iLuvYellow

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#207

Awesome update!

Loved both part a and b!

So no one but asya know about their kiss!

Thanks for the pm!

Update soon!!!

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Rupali

@HamariAduriKahn

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#208

loved these two parts! please continue soon
"Galti tumhari nehi hai, Zoya. Agar yeh banda 28 saal ki umar tak kissi ko smooch nehi kar paya, toh tum kya kar sakti ho!" Immy patted Asad's shoulder "Koi baat nehi Asad beta, koshish karna manushya ka kartavya hota hai, 40 tak koi na koi zaroor pat jayegi."
"Yeh galat baat hai, Immy. Kam se kam tujhe to kiss kiya tha na."
🤣 🤣 🤣
great updates! 👍🏼
and thanks for the pm

Edited by jazzmyn - 12 years ago