asYs os : love is pain updated part 2 page 5 - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg! its vy sad! cnt nd pm me
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This Is Amazing...Please Continue And PM Me When You Do! :)
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hey its quiet painful yr..continue & pm me too

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice
Feeling bad for Zoya. Give her justice 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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ya i know its very sad bt something good is waiting for the next part.in true thereare so many obstacles
Edited by angelnazira - 12 years ago
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Wenever u update plz pm me
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loved it 👍🏼
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hello all cute asya lovers thanks for ur love i've got so many compliments for my os

so i will update it now bt i have changed the precap...bcz i dnt think their story should go like this way

n so many ppl has told me to change anyway here it goes





love is pain part 2



the next day zoya had a dreamt of asad...
it was like asad & tanveer had a baby girl & zoya wanted to take the baby jst once from them to kiss her & ...bt asad didn't let her do saying that zoya can't touch their baby with her hand who commited such sins adding that she might cast an evil eye on their baby

zoya wake up suddenly & got that it was jst a dream & she had tears
bt she said that " i will never try to harm u & ur family even in my dream asad bcz i stil love u & i want u to hate me bcz i dnt deserve u...i'm a jinx so i lost my parents...i'm happy that u left me before anything wrong happens with u n ur family

then zoya left for office..she got a job bcz she was talented n worthy of it...
today was her first day so she should not be late

bt on her way she saw someone lying on the road actually he was beaten so without thinking she took him to the hospital & donate some blood though she was weak yet she helped
it was none other than her boss (sushant singh rajput)


he got to know that she was the one who got the job as zoya told him everything...he thanked zoya for saving his life & wanted to give her the most honourable job...bt b4 that he wanted to make a fun with her...

zoya got a call from office that the boss wanna meet her as she has to explain...
zoya was very afraid...boss was talking with a very angry voice & told her to resign & told her if she knows him
zoya felt very sad & turned to leave bt sushant faced her...earlier he didn't show her his face n zoya jst saw his back...zoya was surprised

her boss hold her hand & gave a sweet smile n said how can i do such a injustice with u,u saved my live & u thought abt me when u knew u would lose ur job i'm impressed zoya u can join when u want

sushant called her for dinner in a five star hottel...zoya could not refuse at all

unfortunately asad n tannu also went there as it was najma's birthday they had a party

asad saw zoya with sushant so he had misunderstood zoya again...

asad had an introduction with sushant so he never want sushant to get deceived so he had to tell abt zoya's evil deeds...so he called sushant & was explaining while zoya went to najma to wish her...no one talked to her...zoya had tears...najma could not help hugging zoya atlast...zoya asked how she was & wished happy birthday & gifted her the most precious gift of her life (her ear ring that belonged to her mother)

zoya asked how her bhaijan was ,what he does now a days if he was fine & ever talked nyything abt her

then tanveer came & accuse her of false deeds & asked her to go forever from their life..she also added that she was preg of asad's child so she can't do anything & at last tannu threw her so sad that she got hurt & sushant came for her rescue

though asad told everything about zoya bt he didn't belive...moreover he took zoya's side

the media reached there somehow & confronted them abt what happened over there as they knew abt zoya's being pregnant with illigitimate child & the reason why asad abandoned her

media ppl asked zoya whose child it was...seeing sushant they thought he would be the one who's responsible for the pregnancy...so they talked too dirty abt them...
zoya couldn't keep queit she had to say today to show the world that she can capable of it


she said that " in our world we had to suffer & bear all the pain who is helpless,bt who has none they have allah & allah will give them justice...& if allah exists then the evils will be punished as consequences,i curse they wnt be happy ever who hurt anyone...i never betrayed anyone & i'm not pregnant someone trapped me & forged the pregnancy report that i was preg..i dnt need to prove to someone who never deserved me,thank god allah showed me this way though its false bt i think my life is saved & i got someone even better than him who trusts me blindly & would be always with me. she hold sushants hand..she said "if u were in my place u would get through the pain how it would feel like & u jst make ur sob story adding more spice" thanks a lot...& if sushant want i will prove that i'm stil virgin,never did that & was never preg...medical reports,DNA what's for!!!

sushant was shocked to hear bt he was happy that she atleast answered n had feeling for him as he also liked zoya bt as friend

he said that i dnt need any explanation/proof..ihav trust & she's innocent for me..i'm lucky to have zoya in my life...they left

zoya apologised to sushant as she had to...sushant assured her that no matter what happens he will always support her & says that he'll get her justice

asad was very tensed as he felt guilty for not believing her..when he saw his zoya with someone he can't sleep,eat anymore...he wanted to meet zoya and apologise..he remembered how helpful zoya was,how good she was at heart & she can never do any harm to other...

that night tanveer was talking to razia that what she did with zoya n asad gonna b her forever & was telling how many times she tried to kill zoya bt she survived bt the fake pregnancy helped a lot to get it vanished...razia was listening bt she wanted to get tannu exposed as she came to know she tried to kill humeira with poison n she might create more prbs so she recorded all n sent it in asad's mobile/email everywhere as once zoya saved humeira;s life so she repented for what she did with zoya & wanted to rectify...

& razia also made them confess showing that evidance that if they didn't confess they would be in poolice custody...collecting enough proof she sent it to asad n suggest him to get zoya back n get tannu punished harshly ever...n also revealed tannu's pregnancy & said that tannu wanted to blackmail him

asad was very furious so he goes to tannu n slapped her so hard 10 times that she has red marks on cheek...asad called the poolice bt tannu got a plan she took a knfe n place it on najma's neck that she will kill her unless he didn't let her go & sign on the property on tannu's name..asad didnt want at first so tannu was hurting najma & started to cut..najma was bleeding

bt luck didn't favour tannu this time
poolice came & shoot her so the knife was on ground

asad hugged najma,dilshad too come...they all knew abt how evil she was

poolice took her with them

asad was so happy that tannu gets revealed n his zoya was innocent & was crying that how wrong he was towards zoya & wanna get her back

asad called sushant n let him know everything...sushant wanted to help him as he always treated zoya as his best friend as ankita was in his life already n she was in abroad for shooting

bt he told asad that for this asad will have to do something very special to convince her

asad had a plan...

he decorated a place with lights,flowers candle evrything ..it was a big party

inside it was a theatere (like cinema hall)

there a play/drama was displayed that portrayed asad & zoya;s love story abt what happened with them...zoya was surprised she was crying...she cant forgive asad so easily she wante dto leave bt asad holds her hand n says i love u infront of all n sang the song hum tere bin ab reh nahi sakte tere bina kya wajood mera...eveyone clapped zoya had tears bt she was thing abt sushant that he always took her side how can she leave him when she found her love back...sushnat came n explain it to zoya that he wanted this to happen it was his wish n even he has ankita...ankita too come n join...sushant n ankita start dancing for asya...asya have mitwa moment...zoya wanted to leave bt asad stops her n places a kiss on her forhead saying no...dilshad najma too come n ask her to forgive asad...


bt tannu sent a gunda there to kill zoya...the gunda was going to shoot zoya bt asad came before her n got shot ...razia knew this so she called poolice to go n save khan's family...before he shoots again poolice shoots the gunda...asad was bleeding profusely...zoya was crying like hell...she says i love u asad i wnt let anything happen ...they took him hospital n opperation was successfull...zoya entered there n hugge dasad saying why u love me so much if anything happened to u then??/ why u saved my life ..asad stops her n says that bcz i love u baby n nothing can happen to me if u r with me

they got caught infront of all n asad placed a ring on zoya's hand n the next friday they will have their nikaah ...n they r happy married evr..


how was it...so bad??? thanks for bear me..wrote it in jst 30 minutes

any kind of criticism is welcomed here...plz tell me atleast how was it

-nazira






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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was going too fast i think
But beautifull after all
I loved sushant entry and i love the choice because he is also handsome with a smile to Die for
Loved how zoya stand up for her right finaly and break her silence
Very nice update keep on 😊
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