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amri123

@amri123

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#441

hey

how are you??????

absolutely fabulous update

i so loved it

very entertaining

loved the whole jalebi making session

i'd have so loved to be there to see that

clearly everyone is floored by Khushi's jalebi making skills

she's like the super woman of jalebis...😆

and it seems to me that Aarti Aunty is quite impressed with her bahu to be

i know i was floored by Khushi's little rant

those words were definitely heartfelt

and if Di said her mom likes Khushi i totally believe her

end of story😆

movie part was awesome as well

and loved all the teasing

and arshi and asya are just so cute

i can never stop grinning while and after i've read your updates

you're making my family think i'm crazy

they all give me weird looks these days

if i'm deemed officially crazy i'm blaming you😆😆

anyways continue soon and thanks for the PM

see ya 😊

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Ayra Nuzhat

@-LazyLamhe-

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#442

Hey Anjali!

I am back again with another comment..After I read the last chapter I was thinking..Arnav n Zoya have realized their own feelings and Asad n Khushi seem confused (though they are already in love)...This was the last thought i had, before I took a nap and guess what?? I then had a crappiest dream..or should I call it a nightmare?? I dreamt that Asad and Khushi have finally admitted their own feelings to themselves and plan to express them..and the next scene in my dream...they struggled to express but finally when they did, they did it to each other...😕 .😕 .😕 .😕 .😕 .😕

I was like -

Allah Miyan - Whats wrong with these people!!!!..(or should I say whats wrong with me)

Hey Devi Maiyya!!!!!!!

Incredibly Foolish!!

and

What the????

All those emotions together...🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

ps: I am thinking of your FF all the time..because its growing on me like QH itself...and i thought I should share this with the author of my fav FF 😊...God help me!!

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rajnid68

@rajnid68

Rocker

Posted: 12 years ago

#443

another amazing update..

was missing khushi and her jelabis..

arthi too liked them..

so will arthis opinion change..

next update may patha chalayga kya..

thanks

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Linsie

@Linsie

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#444

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Mehvish Fatima

@MissSparkling

Dazzler

Posted: 12 years ago

#445

Awww y d Asad alwys telly tht I don't love her huh..bt d chapter ws yar

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Soumya

@Ceon

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#446

its a BANG! I love dis ff. Cnt soon

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Monica

@mochhug

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 12 years ago

#447

OK coming back to the loong individual comments on the chapters 😃

Chapter 3:

THIS WAS AN AMAZING CHAPTER! From Zoya waking up to Asad in her bed 😆 to the way she admired him and his bicep 😃, to KHUSHI as her inner voice! That was hilarious! I love how you have their individual inner thoughts written in italics. It's amazingly realistic and helps us understand what the character is actually thinking. I LOVED the quip about Asad's husky and sexy voice in the morning.. I can just picture KSG *swoons* and his quip about her being "so damn cute in the morning"

Aww and how she got excited over pancakes! So Zoya! OMG Khushi is just hilariously awesome. I loved her already in this chapter (more later as well, but without watching IPKKND I already fell in love with her character). The way she's so fearless beating up all theses guys, I can tell hers and Zoya's relationship is really special.

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG Arnav and Khushi's first meeting! Haha this girl certainly knows how to make an entrance and with a BANG! They're sooo flipping adorable!!! I LOVE how he's already gaga over her haha and she's feeling it too, but I can tell she's a little more guarded. I love her nervous talking. It's endearing and just so cute! Is she like this in the show? LOL. OMG Zoya and Kushi's conversation was hilarious. And I loved how he slowed the car down for her. Seems I just remembered about her family. Well incorporated :)

Overall your story is sooo well done. The way you incorporate little details and remind us of them and keep true to the characters they way you described them in the character sketch. I love it! And your dialogues are amazing! And I LOVE YOU for your LONG UPDATES! 😃

I'll do another chapter soon I promise!!! Until then I'll keep waiting for new updates

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Anjali

@AnjuRish

Sparkler

+ 6

Posted: 12 years ago

#448

nice :)

now alls ok i hope

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Dee

@Enchantress

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#449

It was just fabulous.. I guess Kushi proved she is a good choice for Arnav. And, now she is loved by everyone in the house... Asya.. I want to see more involvement of zoya with Dilshad and Najma,..Ayaan and zoya... The same as in the show.. like the way she gets along wiht everyone.. Rest I loved the update... :) Continue asap.

Dee