Asya OS: Too late - Page 2

It's beautiful, sad and emotional but beautifully written. I really like it 😊

Originally posted by: chibi_deea

It's beautiful, sad and emotional but beautifully written. I really like it😊

Thx! I really wanted to write this, just to see how well I could express his emotions.

Love it! Sooo much emotion! Amazing! I hope this doesn't come true ...but unfortunately I have this feeling that in the next couple of weeks some sort of twist will come up!

Originally posted by: irock321

Love it! Sooo much emotion! Amazing! I hope this doesn't come true ...but unfortunately I have this feeling that in the next couple of weeks some sort of twist will come up!

Thank you! Even though I wrote this, I really would be upset if this happened in the show. I'd be the first one complaining about why they split up my babies! But yeah, I feel that something is going to happen soon in the show.

This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I was afraid somethign happened when I read the title. But I didn't expect it to be her marrying Ayaan. But the way you showed him practicing, and and his mental train of thought was just so sad, but so beautifully written. I especially loved how he looked at the card and said it again. I LOVED that he whispered the "you" the first time

Originally posted by: mochhug

This was heartbreakingly beautiful. I was afraid somethign happened when I read the title. But I didn't expect it to be her marrying Ayaan. But the way you showed him practicing, and and his mental train of thought was just so sad, but so beautifully written. I especially loved how he looked at the card and said it again. I LOVED that he whispered the "you" the first time

Loved it hun! And I loved the part in which he promises to make her his in the next lifetime. So easily said, but how he would live seeing her as Ayaan's wife is beyond me.

Thank you! Yeah, the title kind of gives it away and I wanted to be a different title, but 'too late' clearly shows the mistake bhe made. He waited and waited and then finally lost her. God, why do I write this kind of stuff? It makes me sad too! 😭

Originally posted by: mrsNiallHoran

Thank you! Yeah, the title kind of gives it away and I wanted to be a different title, but 'too late' clearly shows the mistake bhe made. He waited and waited and then finally lost her. God, why do I write this kind of stuff? It makes me sad too! 😭

Its very well written👏 Par happy ending de sakte the na😭 But its written beautifully!!

That was soo beautifully written!
awesome 👏