AsYa OS ~To My Beautiful Zoya, Love Asad ~ - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Simply awesome. ...lovely piece of fiction..
A piece which really moved me...god bless
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This is AMAZING 👏
I lovvveeeddd it 😳
It was such an emotional OS 😭
I wish it had a happy ending
But all stories don't have a happy ending

It was GREAT 😃🤗

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Posted: 12 years ago
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that was wonderful!!!!!!!!!!! I loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I cried reading it!!!
It was I don't know..I don't have words..It was sooo soulful!!
Brilliantly written Sadie👏

Specially this line,

"We couldn't be together in this life but in some other place, some other time, some other life if we meet then I promise the first thing I'll tell you is I love you until then Good-bye Zoya!"

Cant explain what I was feeling reading it😊

And also this line,



"I'll pray to Allah every day that you find your Asad and I hope you get your 'happily ever after'!"

👍🏼 👏


P.s: The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the name Zayn was our discussion about names..remember??😳
P.p.s: And yeah I do remember about your demand for the sad song to write it..Ultimately that went in vain cause some lol thingy happened..😆😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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just one word...BEAUTIFUL..😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rithika2012

hey it was superb.. i just loved it and specially the last lines they made me cry.. loved the way u wrote and asya story through other characters.. it was simply superb...😊


thank you so much! i cant believe this OS was loved by so many!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: rajnid68

Simply awesome. ...lovely piece of fiction..

A piece which really moved me...god bless


thanks😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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waoo..i feel like crying after reading ur os...so heart touching...so good...i wish every asad get his love zoya..

pari
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: sohu_ksgian

I cried reading it!!! i had cried while writing it!😭
It was I don't know..I don't have words..It was sooo soulful!!
Brilliantly written Sadie👏 awww thankyouso much sohu

Specially this line,

"We couldn't be together in this life but in some other place, some other time, some other life if we meet then I promise the first thing I'll tell you is I love you until then Good-bye Zoya!"

Cant explain what I was feeling reading it😊 it's my favorite line i had used the same line in one of my essay in my english exam and my sir had circled it saying 'this was the highlight, the best climax ive ever read' and so i thought about using it here! ive used this line in many other fictions of mine!

And also this line,



"I'll pray to Allah every day that you find your Asad and I hope you get your 'happily ever after'!"

👍🏼 👏


P.s: The first thing that came to my mind when I saw the name Zayn was our discussion about names..remember??😳 yeppp! next time ill use the name zubair! ur favorite name😆
P.p.s: And yeah I do remember about your demand for the sad song to write it..Ultimately that went in vain cause some lol thingy happened..😆😆 some lol thingy happened? everything that happened that day made me laugh! either ankie's texts or ur texts! plus i realized that reading ankie's gutter while simultaneously watching big bang theory aint a good recipe for depression!😆


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh! So touching...😭 I would love to read more from you. Please do write more and please do pm me for all your works.😊

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