AsYa OS: Daddy's Little Princess

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Fari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: Npdeepa
Excellent... No actually more than excellence..oh no.. I am in lack of words for appreciation ... Superb specially Zoya smiled through her tears as Asad's voice from the past resounded in her ears, "Zoya, the day I will go down on my knees for another girl, will be the day I will tie a shoe lace for our daughter!" 👏

Thnak youuu 😳

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Fari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: niki_12
Brilliant once again! This is so amazing! I loved the last line! I want to see this in the show so badly!

I want this to happen in the show tooo 😃 We can only pray that the CVs show us AsYa with kids😊

Thanks 😛

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Surish

@Surish

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Posted: 12 years ago

#23

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Fari

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Posted: 12 years ago

#24

Originally posted by: Surish

Aww thanksss 😆

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princess101

@princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#25

One of the best OS I have read in a while AMAZING :):):):)

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#26

Originally posted by: princess101
One of the best OS I have read in a while AMAZING :):):):)

Aww really?? That's so flattering to hear. Thanks 😃

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Fari

@SmileyStar

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Posted: 12 years ago

#27

Originally posted by: arhi_rules
made me cry in the end

I hope they were tears of happiness 😉

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Farhana

@risingsea101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#28

This was soo cute

Adorable, just adorable

I just loved this

Love your stories :)

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Barayah

@irock321

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Posted: 12 years ago

#29

The last bit was just beautiful! I literally felt touched! I can't wait for my own xD LOL 😆 But first gotta get married!! ☺️ I really loved this OS! I think you should write one where Ahsan is in it too and show the mother-son bond and instead in Asad's point of view. That'd be adorable too!

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aashiqua

@aashiqua

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Posted: 12 years ago

#30

"Sure Sweetie!" Asad replied,
shoving his cell phone and car
keys in his pocket and going
down on one knee to tie his
daughter's shoe lace. Zoya smiled
through her tears as Asad's voice
from the past resounded in her
ears, "Zoya, the day I will go
down on my knees for another
girl, will be the day I will tie a
shoe lace for our daughter!"
yaar..i am smiling bt ma eyes teary..i love al ur works bt dis wil b very close to ma heart...d little zoha and asad...cute and lovely...dis made ma weekend..thnks 4 dis