AsYa/KaBhi SS: Tied for Eternity EPILOGUE pg 27!

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snehasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

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even if this updates end your story will be there with me for eternity I love this and thanks for pm

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Posted: 12 years ago

#122

Woww😊...that was just amazing ...loved it to the core🤗...I don't have words to describe how beautifully u've written this chapter...post the epilogue soon😃😃

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akaswan

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Awesome part waiting fror the epilogue 😊😊

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princess101

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Loved it chapter sad it was the last one but excited to read the epilogue though thanx for the PM and update soon :D

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Rupali

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Posted: 12 years ago

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awesome update! it was do bittersweet and I loved it!

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Imran

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Posted: 12 years ago

#126

very nice SS, would love to read the epilogue. Plz write it

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aish-au

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Posted: 12 years ago

#127

read it all in one go. completly loved u r ss. post u r epilogue soon really excited 2 read it.

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sheilasandhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#128

It was fantastic and cant wait to read the epilogue and see Dilshads reaction when she sees Zoya. Fantastic writing and don't ever stop .👏

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Lakshmi

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Posted: 12 years ago

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Sorry for unresing so late :)
Amazing ending. She truly made Zoya believe that Asad loves her. Initially she was at denial but then she agreed to give him a chance.
He believes he can still hurt her. And is ready to leave her. But she made him see her point.
Update epilouge soon :)

Edited by Chipmunks. - 12 years ago

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Revelio

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Posted: 12 years ago

#130

Originally posted by: mysticlover
Well, it couldn't have any better ending then this, could it?
I loved the way Sakina put forward her friendship with Asad more than her own love for him... at least Asad has one friend who thinks about him before her happiness unlike Tanveer... I love this character... she embodies what friendship means to me... n what I loved most when I look back now was that she did have her weak moment when sheiinstigated Asad but then her goodness won the battle n she reunited the estranged lovers...
Illeana... her concern is legitimate... n she doesn't know Asad that well... but she did understand the situation n tried to see Zoya's happiness...
Dilshad n Najma will be pleasantly surprised seeing Zoya with Asad...
N the wallpaper scene was cute n sweet...
You know while reading the last part of them sitting in the plane I thought of a... plane crash... it's one of my fears... a personal fear... so don't mind it...

Thank u! Yeah, when I thought abt Sakina I decided I should pull something like a jealousy track off to get u guys wondering if she's just another Tanveer or if she's someone cares abt others. I'm glad u liked this character! Ileana was just concerned abt her best friend getting hurt, so it was pretty natural for her to react that way, but I'd depicted her as a good character from the beginning, so she'll end as a good character. Even I'm a lil excited to write the dilshad najma zoya scene, I haven't planned out their reaction so that's something I myself have to look forward to. I wanted add a nicer scene amidst all the drama so I used that wallpaper scene. LOLz, I'm pretty sure I ain't gonna kill asya anytime soon😆. Thank u so much for ur lovely long comment!😊