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Posted: 12 years ago

Ok... i am not alone here
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago

fav scenes first :-
Asad stood at the reception checking into the room while Zoya clung on to him feeling cold. Once the procedures were done, the bell boy led them to a suite where the balcony faced the snow capped mountains. It was a mesmerizing view.

He silently walked to her and when he got close, he shook his hair and water droplets flew onto her face. She opened her eyes.

Zoya shook her head and got out her clothes and went to the bathroom. She took a nice long hot shower and wiped herself. She turned to her clothes and noticed Asad's clothes. She picked up Asad's shirt and held it open. It smelled just like him and she felt butterflies in her tummy.

"Should I?", she wondered.

She smiled to herself and so instead of wearing her night suit, she wore Asad's shirt. She came out and saw Asad standing out at the balcony. She tip toed to Asad and slipped her arms around his waist, raised her mouth to his ear and whispered, "I'm back!"


"Aren't you feeling cold in this?", he asked.

"Not when you are there to hug me!", she replied genuinely and buried herself into his broad chest. He hugged her possessively. He then scooped her up in his arms and took her to the bed. He gently lay her down and closed the balcony doors to keep it warm.


Soon Asad's hand curved around Zoya's waist and circled her navel, suggestively. Zoya let out a giggle.

"What?", asked Asad.

"That tickles!", she whispered.

"Well, it's not my fault that you are ticklish!", he replied, rubbing her skin more. He brought her closer with his other hand.


"We could go for snow fighting, yak ride.. or umm.. river rafting, skiing!", Zoya suggested.

"Well.. I have a plan! We could do all this tomorrow and then, stay in this room the rest of the days!", replied Asad.

"Mr. Khan! Aap kitne besharm ho gaye hain!", complained Zoya as she hit him on his chest. Asad let out a laugh.


"Do you want to start a family?", she asked.

"Yes I do!", came an honest answer.

"If you do.. Then so do I!", she replied and dropped a kiss on his forehead.


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You know na its hard for me to comment on 18+ update


so just bear with a short one today


I totally loved it


I am going to Manali... AsYa honeymoon in Manali


Wow


it was awesome


Do give a sightseeing teaser before I go


I'll be able to connect


😉


or how about I enjoy and give you feedbacks (WA toh hoga hi)



NOW LISTENING TO "MITWA... ISHQ PE ZOR NAHI"


Edited by MjhtFan_Mahima - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Yeah I got an update

Coming to the update I totally loved it😊
It was sooo was so Hawwwt😳-
Asad and zoya Haye😳
I am not listing my favourite scenes because I loved whole update and I cannot copy ,paste it all and morevover mein choti bachi hoon and I fell shy😆
Cnt wait for next one and update soon👏
Luv Ya🤗
Edited by nuts_22 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Mine

Naughty asad...

PLUS

Sensous asad n zoya..

PLUS

Caring asad..

PLUS

Supporting n understanding zoya...

Z EQUAL TO...PERFECTO👏


He silently walked to her and when he got close, he shook his hair and water droplets flew onto her face. She opened her eyes.

"Asad, stop it!", she shrieked wiping the drops of f her face.


Asad grinned and shook his head again, the droplets landing on Zoya's face.

"Asad stop! I have to take a shower!", she shrieked again.


AWWW I CNT IMAGIGE EVEN IN MY DREAMS ...NAUGHTY ASAD...WELL DONE..TO MK ME C AN UNSEEN SIDE OF ASAD MIYAAN😊


. She picked up Asad's shirt and held it open. It smelled just like him and she felt butterflies in her tummy


BUTTERFLIES IN ZOYA TUMMY..OMG...BUTTERFLIES IN MY TUMMY...I ACTUALLY CNT EXPLAIN DA HW MUCH I LOVE DIS SCENE...FANTASTICO⭐️


He came and lay on her and without a word, they kissed. It started off slow and then intensified. Asad kept pulling her in, even though there wasn't any space left between them. Zoya fisted his hair, pulling on it every now and then.

"Zoya!", Asad whispered in a husky voice.

He kissed her again and then let go. He looked straight down at her. He kissed her and Zoya kissed him back. It was getting too intense and Asad was getting irritated by his clothing. He got up and took off his t-shirt and tracks and went back to kissing her. Zoya could feel his manhood, the only thing separating it from her were his boxers.


I ALWYS READ DAT THR Z A VERY THN LAYER BTWN VULGARITY N LOVE MKING SCENE ...WHR ONE HS TO EXPLAIN IT...


BUT U R JST WAO...AWESOME WRDS FR DIS SCENE. .DAT I NVR THOUGHT THRU OUT DIS SCENE DAT DIS Z GOING TO A INTIMACY. .. 👏

"Zoya. I. Need. You!", he said in between kisses.

Zoya nodded and sat up. Asad helped her unbutton the shirt and got her out of it, revealing milky-skinned body to him. Without delay, Asad kissed her again and roamed all over her body. He had her sit on his lap as he roamed all over her body. The wind blew in from a tiny gap of the balcony door, giving Zoya the shivers and she held onto Asad close.

"Asad..", she whispered.

Asad laid her back and positioned himself. All the while, they were looking right at each other. Zoya knew what was about to happen and she kissed Asad. Asad entered her warm core. She didn't yell out this time, but it took her a while to calm down.

"Asad..", she whispered.


DAMN IT M BLUSHING LYK HELL...DEE KYA KR DALA RE..😳

ALWYS SAID..ITS A TREAT TO READ UR UPDATE..SPECIALLY WEN THR Z A SITUATION OF INTIMACY N LOVE MAKING..NO ONE CN BEAT U...⭐️


Ummm... You don't mind that we make love without protection do you?", he asked nervously.

"Why would I mind that?", she asked sweetly.

"I dunno.. Probably with the fright of getting pregnant!", he replied.

"Asad! Why would I be afraid of getting pregnant with your baby! Why do you think so?", she asked genuinely.

"Zoya! We just got married a few days back and may be you're not ready to start a family!", he replied.

"Do you want to start a family?", she asked.

"Yes I do!", came an honest answer.

"If you do.. Then so do I!", she replied and dropped a kiss on his forehead.

"But you are just 23!", he said in concern.

"And you are 28 Asad! I don't think so we should wait longer for this. If we wish to have 2 kids then we would have to start soon, so why not now?", she asked sweetly.


DONO KNW BT I M SOOO MUCH IN LOVE WID DIS PART..EACH N EVERY LINE Z JST MK ME FL AS IF ALLAH MIYAAN..Y EVERY MAN IN DIS WORLD Z NOT LYK ASAD...N ZOYA ..SHE WANT JST HR HUBBY HAPPINESS..N A FAMILY DA BELONG TO THEIR LOVE...


GOSH...M SPEECHLESS AFTR READONG DIS PARTICULAR SECTION...WANA EXPLAIN IT MORE..BT FLING LACK OF WRDS...


WANA SAY HATS OFF TO U ..👏

Edited by shreya11mehra - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
very hot update dii😳😳
hmm manali😛😛

thanks for update


waiting for next


Edited by 11sinal - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
mine 😆


For suchhh a LoveLLy UpDAte Mrina deee...

i"m right now in AsYa LalALLALALA land

Imagining THe THinGSs!!! DIRTY MIND LOL 😆 😆 😆



ur update are alwayyysss cho cho cuteee!!!!!!

So Coming tO the update!!!!

Asad when did you turn so battamizzz huh?? 😆 😆 😆

Planning to staYY in bed the whole day 😉 😉 😉

HoneyMoon 😳 😳 😳 😳 in Manali...Such A perFect location!!!!!

A hot Couple in a cold location

They are gonna make baby!!!! 2 2 ...Awww..

Asad Was so concerned...

I so so so so so love themmm!!!!!

That shirt wala part was so...

Gals who are gonna marry soon...pick up such HOT ideas 😉 😉 😉 😆😆

sooo...

Update soon BabyyY!!!!!!

Spam KArne ke liye aabhi hum jinda hai 😉 😉 😆

Love Anee 😳 😳





Edited by Aneezarp27 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

nice update
plz don't end this so soon ...
I know u may have already finished this story from ur end but plz try to extend naa ...
Pretty plz...
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Suppi_4_u


nice update
plz don't end this so soon ...
I know u may have already finished this story from ur end but plz try to extend naa ...
Pretty plz...


I'm sorry hun! I really can't!
I plan my stories! And since this is an SS... I can't do anything!
But I promise to start a New story by the end of October! 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
Lovely update😊...continue soon😳

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