SS:Asad Ahmed Khan's Bachelor Party - Chap 5 pg 42 - Page 10

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Posted: 12 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Grenade

OMG OMG OMG! *fangirling*

This-Was-So-Epic! And-There-Are-So-Many-Things-I-Want-To-Say! *fangirling some more*

Wait, I think you just overloaded my brain with Asad!
*takes a minute and forces herself to calm down*
Okay, as it is, the very concept of Asad makes me go all !
And as if that wasn't enough, you chose to write action, Ranjana?! *narrows eyes*
Holy sh*t! That was the best decision you've made so far!😳
Okay, not really. That was one of your best ideas because your writing isalways so full of brilliant ideas!

I cant even begin to explain what effect this chapter had on me when Asad went all Alpha-male on Zoya!☺️ I mean- Ohmigosh-I lost my head again! 😡
I loved- I just friggin loved the protective, possessive Asad who'd beat the sh*t out of any A-hole that messes with his Zoya!😳

But you know what I loved more?😉

"Ms. Farooqui... woh umm... dimples-wala smile!" Asad blurted out.

Aww..just Awww!😳😳😳
That was SO sweet! And the fact that it came from Asad makes it even more Aww-worthy because he always does this unknowingly and has no idea of just how cute he looks while doing so! 😳

Thank god, you didn't leave this chapter mid-scene! I would have had to hunt you down otherwise! And the teaser is urgh torturous..but I think I'll survive because a drunk Zoya will definitely make up for the wait. But don't you get any ideas! You better update this ASAP if you know whats good for you!😈(hmm, that came out more threatening than I intended it to)

P.S. you know, I was feeling kinda low since yesterday because of some things that were bothering me. But as you can see, you just shooed that bad mood away by this one chapter! Though unknowingly, but thanks man!😊


Yay my friend your back!! 🤗
I read your first comment took...thanks sooo much man..first I was a little doubtful about how the whole things going but your comments have let me take a sigh of relief! No but seriously, thanks so much! <3
About the SS, I am sooo happy you are liking it..I know, the bachelor party idea just hit me on the head and like the most difficult part of the entire thing was how the hell do you get AAK to say yes to THAT! And hence entered Ayaan who I feel like Im constantly using to solve any problems I get - he's a very useful character, you see! ;)
Glad you enjoyed the action - not like my forte or anything but well, Akram deserved to learn a lesson and this is THE LION we are talking about! 😉
And YAYAAY, I was waitign fro someone to mention the dimples line! 😆 Just like Asad, I couldn't help adding it in!
Like I said, Im feeling little head-achy so I might take a couple days to update this but I will not make you what too long. :)
And yeah I better be getting that PM explaining whats wrong soon enough!
Edited by xxDaydreameRxx - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: _Aaniya_

Hey... This was superrbbb !!
You write amazingly beautiful ! And moreover the story is too good !

Loved that you stayed true to their characters...:)

Plz cont soon... Cant wait after the precap ! :D


Awww! Thank you so much! 🤗
You write amazing too 😉
Will try to continue as soon as I can :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: _Oishi_

Love this SS... and so excited for the next update..precap is exciting


Thank you!! 😃
Oishi I know you! Okay Im gona sound like an idiot if this is wrong, but if I am correct, you once wrote a FF on ManVeer right??
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Posted: 12 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: malini1996

its gonna be fun seeing a drunken zoya

do continue soon

waiting eaerly for the next updte

plz plz lz send me a pm


Thank you! And lool I can't wait to write it 😉
Will try to update soon and sure I will :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Manpreet23

Precap 🤣 🤣


Ahaha...loving your reaction ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#97

Originally posted by: ABBY92

Loved how Asad held Zoya's hand as they came face to face with Akram and how he beat the hell out of Akram after that. The last part where Asad cheers Zoya up was super sweet. Precap was too good and I can't wait for the next update !!


Awww thank you so much!! Im happy you liked it, Abby...that's your name right? 😊
Will try to update sooon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#98

Originally posted by: Maaneet4life

Omg can't wait for drunk zoya!!!


HAHA and I can't wait to write it ;)
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Posted: 12 years ago
#99

Thank you! :) you used to be in DEK forum too and I still don't know your name..do tell :)
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow..i lovd it..asad always protect and fi8 4 zoya bt doesnt speak much..bt nw a changd man..i cant wait aftr precap..zoya intoxicated...

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