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Champa2012

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Posted: 12 years ago

#101

Originally posted by: Laila2009
You really need to continue with this - the ending was so rushed. I feel this happens with all these stories - you could have done a final chapter on the confession alone. I am glad I read it at once otherwise I would be bursting to wait for the end. Really, really enjoyed it.

Thanks Laila.
I started it as a two shot, it went on to the fourth part. Trust me, I had more stuff in between that I cut off just because I didn't want it to go too long. Plus, I had to finish it today or it would get neglected because of work from tomorrow. I had lot of fun writing this though.

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SaHillover101

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Posted: 12 years ago

#102

Awwee that was really cutee! I really enjoyed reading this :)

Lool at the ending... "So Zoya, will you sleep with me tonight?" That was sooo adorablee :')

Oo and thanks sooo much for the pm :))

Edited by AKlover101 - 12 years ago

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braich_gal

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Posted: 12 years ago

#103

Just read both the 2nd and 3rd part...awesome...pls update soon!!!

Edit: just realized final part has already been posted!!! I loved it!!! I hope you plan on writing more OS/FF...you are really good at it

Edited by braich_gal - 12 years ago

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Amy

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Posted: 12 years ago

#104

Will be so nice if Asad in QH can get as much courage as this Asad... And not only stick to "woh actually" 👍🏼

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life4me

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Posted: 12 years ago

#105

It was a beautiful story.

Please do write more.

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Jassieg

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Posted: 12 years ago

#106

Awesome! Loved the ending. AsYa forever!

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shreya mehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#107

its really nice...cn b a future track...hehhehee...

cvs sur gt a hint frm ur story...

nice wrk frm ur side .

thnx fr pm...m waiting fr ur nxt wrk nw...dnt frgt to pm me...