GHALATFAHMI ! ASYA FF UPDATED 1 /6 /13 FINAL PART

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SPECIAL THANKS TO ALL THE READERS WHO ENCOURAGED ME TO CONTINUE !!!!!!
Zoya goes back 2 NYC coz her visa expired.There she realises her feelings for Asad but she knows MR AKDU KHAN very well .She knows that even if he feels the same way he will never say a word so decides to move on ', par dil hai ke manta nahin . Zoya's ki bechaini,pareshani uske behavior se saaf zahir ho rahi hai . ZOYA'S All these EMOTIONS are noticed by her aapi and jeeju .They talk to Zoya about it . Aapi - jeeju want to talk about this to DILSHAD but ZOYA stops them saying that she herself is not sure about ASAD 's feelings .WHAT IF ? he refuses!!! .
1 year later
ZOYA is back in BHOPAL .SHE is very happy and content .Now she will get the answers of all her IF'S and BUT'S. ALL the way she was thinking of surprising the KHANS but gets the shock of her life .ASAD opens the door and is carrying a baby .😲 ASAD is glad to see ZOYA ,par janab toh emotions chupane mein Ph.d holder hai . A formal AS SALAM WALE KUM is what Zoya hears. DILSHAD ,NAJMA are happily surprised to see ZOYA but ZOYA is 😭 just unable to respond .Kya hua zoya ? asks NAJMA. Somehow ZOYA composes herself.
NAJMA says arre ! maine toh aapko ghar ke naye member se milaya hi nahi
ZOYA ,yeh hai AADIL AHMED KHAN the LATEST KHAN of the family.
Bade mushkil se Zoya ne ek phiki si smile di ,NAJMA aur AADIL ko .
ZOYA is thinking ,ALLAH MIYA ! Whats wrong with me ,mujhe pahle malum karlena chahiye tha sab kuch ,phir india aana chahiye tha. MR KHAN ne shaadi kar li!!! aur unka ek beta bhi hai !!!.😕😕 Aage Kya hua ? PATA chalega , BREAK KE BAAD !!!
PART 2 25/ 5 /13
IT was evening time, zoya had already eaten 2 full pizzas in tension .suddenly the door bell rang.
It was Rashid at the door , he was very happy to see ZOYA . he asked about ADEL and told NAJMA to bring ADEL . The moment ADEL arrived he started playing and talking to him .
RASHID " mera ADEL beta kaisa hai , abbu was missing you baby for the whole day. DILSHAD ADEL itna chup chup kyun hai ?
DILSHAD "LAGTA hai neend mein hai .main sula dey ti hun.
ZOYA is thinking ADEL phupa ko 'abbu' kahega? wah phupa !! kya idea hai umar chupane ka .grand child abbu bole ga.
ZOYA is in her room and as usual talking to herself :" pura din beet gaya par MRS AKDU KHAN nazar nahi aayi .zoroor MR KHAN ne ladai ki hogi aur woh naraz ho kar maike (parents house) chali gayi hogi bechari !!!
NAJMA along with ADEL come to her room . zoya was not comfortable with ADEL IN her room and was deliberately avoiding him .but ADEL was too sweet and cute to be ignored , he was gesturing ZOYA to take him🤗. DILSHAD called NAJMA and in a hurry she handed ADEL to ZOYA.
ZOYA says to ADEL 'AAP ke akdu abba ne mere saath thik nahi kiya lekin isme aap ka kya kasoor , main aap se kaise naraaz rah sakti hun mashallah aap kitne pyare hain .chaliye main aap ko aap ki ammi ke paas pahucha deti hoon
ZOYA takes ADEL to ASAD'S room .HE was working on his laptop . MR KHAN ADEL KI AMMI KAHA HAIN? ADEL ko dena tha.
Asad " ammi apne room mein hogi.
zoya 'matlab?
asad "matlab kya?
zoya - you mean to say phupi baby ko sulaegi?
asad -' nahi toh aur kaun ? ms farruki are you okay? you look confused.
suddenly DILSHAD enters and takes ADEL from zoya
Dilshad "zoya main ADEL ko suladeti hoon phir humlog dher sari gupshup karege .
ASAD ' main NAJMA KE SAATH mil ke KHANA laga deta hoon . aap din bhar Adel ko SAMHALTE thak gaati hogi.
ZOYA IS thinking MR KHAN has changed so much . pata nahi inki biwi inhe kyun chod ke chali gayi?
PART - 3 27/ 5 /13
Zoya says to Dilshad - phupi main Najma ko help kar deti hoon .saying this she leavesfor the kitchen .Asad and Najma were already there.
Zoya -- MR khan aap rahne dijiye main Najma ko help kar deti hoon .
Asad -- its ok MS faruki . main kar loonga.
zoya --- MR khan maine notice kiya hai , aap bahut badal gaye hain .
Asad -- it is but ovious , aap ke jaane aur wapis aane me poore 1 saal ka gap hai aur 1 saal bahut lamba arsa (time) hota hai .guzre hue saal mey humlogo ki zindagi main itni tabdilian (changes ) aayi ki badalna waqt ki zaroorat ban gaya . TIME DEMANDS CHANGE , JO waqt ke saath nahi badalta woh peeche rah jaata hai.
Zoya - so true MR khan,, JO waqt ke saath nahi badalta woh peeche rah jaata hai.
Zoya thinking in her mind , Mr khan isi liye aapne mujhe itni aasani se bhula diya aur apni nayi zindagi shuru kar li .
Dilshad comes there with Adel
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Asad says to Adel -- babyjaan aap abhi tak nahi soay.chaliye main aapko garden le chalta hoon ,,fresh air main aapko achi neend aayegi.
Zoya ko Asad aur ADel ki bonding zahar se bhi zyaada jaanlewa lag raha tha .she was fuming in anger .
Next morning
Zoya got up very late .Asad had already left for office
Zoya thinks ,,,acha hua chale gaye , unhe dekh kar toh mera blood presure he high hojata hai !!😡
Dilshad was noticing zoya's uneasiness and also wanted to know the reason but something or the other was keeping her occupied.
Zoya was in her room talking to herself ,, i should leave Bhopal as soon as possible .There's no point in staying here . vaase bhi shaadi shuda (married) aadmi ke liye apna dil jalana kaun si aqalmandi hai . Biwi toh maike bhaag gayi aur janab akele bachcha paal rahe hain .!!! lekin jaane se pahle main MR khan ko ... ... ... ...😡.
Zoya was feeling very depressed so she went to the nearby lake for some change. when she came back Asad was also at home ... playing with Adel .!!! 🥺 Zoya ka toh jaise dil hi toot gaya .. lagta hai Bachcha palne ke alava inko kuch kaam hi nahi hai , Zoya said to herself.
Asad --- Ms faruki ,how are u feeling now , ammi kah rahi thi ki aap bahut pareshan thi !! kya hua ? what's the problem?
Zoya ne dil main kaha ' YOU"... R THE PROBLEM ... MR KHAN'
ASAD-- I WAS worried about u.
Zaya -- dont be . aap toh sirf bachcha samhaliye !!!
Asad - kya!!! Ms faruki u have no right to speak in such a way about Adel.
Zoya --haan haan !!! saare rights toh aap ke paas hai na .jiske saath jo chahe suluk kijiye !!!
Asad was shell shocked with Zoya's reply and behavior.
Dilshad came to Zoya's room
Dilshad said Zoya kya baat hai beta jab se aaayi ho bahut bechan (disturbed) lag rahi ho.
Zoya gives a half hearted smile to Dilshad ,,,nahi phupi aisi koi baat nahi
Dilshad ----- nahi ! koi baat toh hai !!
Zoya - phupi ,main jab se aayi hun ghar main aapsab may bahut changes dekh rahi hun ...toh...
Dilshad -haan !! tumhari yeh observation 100% correct hai.and i must say things have changed for good .
Dilshad -- Adel ki aamad (coming) se hum sabh ki zindagi badal gaayi.
Zoya - matlab ? kaise ?
dilshad --- tumhare jaane ke kuch din baad ki baat hai... meri tabiyat bahut kharab rahne lagi. maine socha ki shhyad harmonal changes ki wajah se aisa ho raha hai.Rashid mujhe force kar ke dr ke paas le gaye .test se pata chala ke "i was pregnant " .
Najma also comes there
Najma said Zoya aap ko pata hai Adel ke aane se abbu bahut badal gaye hain .ab woh daily ghar aate hain .bhaijan aur abbu ki dooriyaan bhi bahut kam ho gayi hai.
Dilshad - main ALLAH ka jitna bhi shukr karoo kam hai ..Almighty ALLAH ne Adel ko Rashid ki Himmat bana ke bheja .ab woh kisi se nahi darte . mera aur bachon ka bahut khayal karte hain .
Najma --- sabse positive change toh bhaijaan may aaya hai.he has been cured of OCD .ADEL ke toys idhar udhar pade rahte hain Bhaijaan kuch nahi bolte 😆
Zoya ne jo baaten abhi suni thi uspe yakeen karna bahut mushkil tha ... par yahi sach 100% sach
Zoya -- ALLAH MIYA !!! THIs is unbelievebal !!!! iska matlab yeh hua ke baby ADEL phupy aur phupa ka beta hai !!! isi liye phupa ADEL ko ... abbu was missing u ...aisa kuch kah rahe the.
aur main pagal kya kya ulta pulta soch rahi thi .
ALLAH MIYA !!!! thank u thank u thank u so so so ssooo much!!!!
OH MY GOD !!
ALLAH MIYA !!! Whats wrong with me ? maine Mr khan ko kitna bura bhala kah diya!!
ALLAH MIYA !!! Please please help me !!!
Ab Main MR KHAN se kya kahoon ? unhe kaise manaoo ?
FINAL PART -- 1 / 6 /13
Asad was in the lawn with Adel (sleeping in his pram ) when Najma and Zoya came there.
Najma -- Bhaijaan ammi has told to bring Adel inside.
Asad --- (says softly) take babyjaan carefully ,he should not wake up.Then he realises Zoya is also there . Zoya ko dhekhte hi Asad ko sari baaten yaad aagati hain and he gets back into his angry mode.
When Najma goes inside Zoya says ( hesitantly )Mr khan , I want to say something.
Asad --- and I dont want to listen a single word from u.
Zoya -- sorry Mr khan ,i am extremely sorry.
Asad - sorry ? Sorry kahne se kya hoga ? aaj aapne mera bahut dil dhukhaya hai ..aapne Adel ko jo kaha uske liye main aapko kabhi nahi maaf karuga . aap ko andaza bhi hai Adel hum sab ke liye kitni ahmiyat ( importance ) rakhta hai ..
Zoya - Mr khan aap ko zaroor koi ghalatfahmi hui hai. ALLAH janta hai!! maine baby Adel ko kuch nahi kaha .
. main aap se naraz thi . maine jo bhi kaha aap ko kaha . woh tana aap ke liye tha .
mujhe bahut badi ghalatfahmi ho gayi thi . mujhe please maaf kar dijiye .
Asad could somehow sense the truth in her voice and apology .He felt that her that her sorry was direct " DIL SE ".
Asad -- Ghalatfahmi ? kis baat ki ghalatfahmi ?
Zoya -- Mr khan main aap ko sab baten batati hun kyun ki main chahti hun ke yeh ghalatfahmi aaj aur hamesha ke liye dur hogaye .
Asad was looking at Zoya with astonishment .
Zoya turns to the other side , she knew that wont be able to tell the truth ,, looking into Asad eyes.
Zoya takes a deep breathe and says in a jet speed ,Mr khan mujhe laga tha ki aap ki shaadi ho gayi hai ,,,,adel aap ka beta hai,,,,, aur aap ki biwi aap ko chod ke chali gayi hai... aaahh... ALLAH MIYA !!Thank u !!! maine kah diya !! saying this She turns to Asad .
ASad was looking at her in shock and awe .He suddenly burst into laughter .😆
This was the first time Zoya was seeing Asad laughing so hard . Mr khan haste hue bilkul alag lagte hain ... handsomly cute , thought Zoya 😳 .
Asad (trying to control his laughter ) -- aisi weird ghalatfahmi sirf aap ko hi ho sakti hai... Ms faruki .
Zoya feels very embarrassed and shyly smiles back at him .
Asad -- aap ki ghalatfahmi toh dur ho gayi ,, ab aap mere sawalon ka jawab dijiye .Ammi ne aap ki aapi aur jeeju ko teen khat (letter ) likhe .aap logon ne kyun jawab nahi diya?
Zoya -- teen khat (letter ) likhe ? par usme likha kya tha ?
Dilshad along with Adel comes there and overhears their conversation .
Dilshad to Zoya " rishta manga tha maine tumhara , apne Asad ke liye , tumhari aapi ,,,jeeju se .
ALLAH MIYA !! whats wrong today ,, ek aur ghalatfahmi .. Aay kya " GHALATFAHMI DAY " hai, thinks Zoya .
Dilshad to Zoya . meri baat ka zawab do ?
Zoya - pHupi main bilkul sach kah rahi hoon , hume koi khat nahi mila .
Asad aND Dilshad together Kya ?
Zoya 🥱 was confused -- phupi address toh thik tha na ?
Dilshad --tumhi ne toh diary main likha tha .
Najma comes with phone and gives to Dilshad and says Zoya ki aapi ka phone hai.
Dilshad to Najma -- toh zoya ko do na !
Najma - nahi ,, unhe aap se baat karni hai .
Zeenat (on phone) -- Dilshad aapa as salam alai kum. kaise hain aap sab?
Dilshad -- wale kum as salam ..sab khairiyat hai .. tum sunao ?
Zeenat -- aap ka teeno khat mil gaya . usme address ghalat tha is liye milne main itna der hua . bhala ho post office walo ka ke unho ne Anwar kA sahi address malum kiya aur hum tak letters pahucha diye .
aap ka bahut shukriya ke aap ne meri Zoya ko Pasand kiya aur bahu banana chahti hain ..hume bhi Asad bahut pasand hai . humlogo ko yeh risha Qubool hai.
Dilshad -- bahut - bahut mubarak baad !! ALLAH kare ki Asad aur Zoya ki shadi shuda zindagi khushiyon sse bhari ho (Ameen). ALLAH HAFIZ. saying this .DIlshad hangs up the phone..
THEN DILshad announces !
chalo bhai sari narazgi aur ghalatfahmi dur hui .ALLAH ka shukr hai!!
ASAD --ZOYA -- mubara k ho !!! tum dono ka rishta pakka ho gaya ! agar ab bhi tum dono ke dil main koi shak shuba ya sawaal hai toh tum dono phuch sakte ho .
Zoya - phupi agar aap ko khat ka zawab nahi mil raha tha to aapne phone kyun nahi kiya?
Asad - kyunki maine Ammi ko mana kiya tha . mujhe laga ke tum logo ko yeh rishta manzoor nahi . main naraaz tha ! par ab nahi 😊
Zoya is convinced with ASad's reply and smilingly says to Asad "aisi weird ghalatfahmi sirf aap ko hi ho sakti hai... Mr khan"
Asad to Zoya - Very smart !! meri hi line mujhko ... ... !!!
Najma - Bhaijaan ,,ZOya bahut- bahut mubarak ho !
Zoya -- (very shyly ) shukriya .
Najma - thoda sharmana shaadi ke din ke liye bhi bacha ke rakho 😉
They all start laughing .
ZOyA takes Adel from DILshad and says " PHUPi main Adel ko khana khila de ti hoon . " Now on Zoya wanted to share all the responsibilities of ASad ... like a good wife .
Asad looks at Zoya with utmost love and pride . 😃
Aur is tarah ASAd aur Zoya ne ek dusre ko QUBOOL kar liya .
This in not THE END but " THE BEGINING "
ASAD -ZOYA ki kahani toh ab shuru ho rahi hai !!!
ALLAH HAFIZ !
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.Note - Please reply .Eagerly waiting for your feedback. This is my first FF ever and I thank all the readers for the support .
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