Short OS : Pyaar ka Panchnaama

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Posted: 12 years ago
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OS : Pyaar ka Panchnaama

Zoya sat on her bed exhausted from the sangeet's event and specially the jhumar fiasco. She let out a gasp and went on the terrace to feel fresh breeze. Tanveer saw her going upside on the terrace and a plan automatically struck her mind. She quietly followed her up unknown to her that except Zoya, someone else was there. Just as she was to enter the terrace she saw Asad sitting on the bench and having his cup of coffee. She cursed him under her breathe and left the place. Just as Asad noticed Zoya he left from the place. He knew she won't listen to him as she had already clarified so he thought of a different way to clear it up to her.

He went to his room, wrote something on a piece of paper and kept it on Zoya's side table. He smiled to himself and left.

Just when Zoya came to her room, she saw a piece of paper which she clearly remembered was not there before. She picked it up and started to read it.

Main jaanta hun aap meri baat nahi sunna cahti but please, it's quite important and if not listen then read it up.

Zoya made a confused face and started to read further..

Maine hamesha se socha tha ki mera jisse nikaah hoga wo bahut hi tehzeeb aur tameez waali hogi.

She made a disgusted face.

And moreover, I thought she would come in my life like a hawa ka jhoka. But phir aap aayi, tufaan ki tarah. Jab maine aapko pehli baar dekha tha, I was surely mesmerized by your beauty, but it didn't took much time for my opinions to change when I saw you in jeans and tops. I know I am very judgmental and that what made me change my opinions. But since I started to knew about you, my thoughts automatically started to change about you. You made me learn that Tameez and Tehzeeb of a person is judged by one's heart and not their clothes. You made me smile and sometime laugh my heart out.

Zoya smiled a little, no actually that was a 64 inch smile.

Us din, jab maine aapko mangalpur mein almost dead dekha tha, my heart stopped beating the same instance. I didn't knew this feeling then, but I do now. I love you Miss Zoya Faarukhi. Kya aapko apne Mr. Akdu Ahmed Khan se nikaah qubool hai?

Zoya's face beamed reading his confession. "And here I thought he was going to tell her that all this is fake and it should end soon!" she thought to herself and smacked her head.

She looked up to see him standing near the door, leaning on to it. She ran to his arms went close to his ear and whispered "Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai, Qubool Hai!"

This was Asad's Pyaar ka Panchnama.



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Konpal

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Chooo cute! 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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kash asad aisa kuch kare...loved it.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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aww...sho sweet...acha hua tanveer wahan se chali gayi...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I loved it. That was so sweet.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Short and sweet
and extremely cute
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very nice dear..
y i am having a feeling that asad will end up doing something like this... i am not sure he will speak up.. :P
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was such a cute read (: I wish Asad would do something like that, but it's quite unlikely given the circumstances in the show right now ): But anyway it's still an awesome OS (:
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Posted: 12 years ago
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This story seriously consoled me after the thoda disappointing Mahasangam epi.. 😊 Thank u for that 😊

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