Falak||An Unusual Romance & The Mumbai Rain *updtd pg30* 13 AUG :P - Page 15

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kabhimitwaasya

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice...thnx for pm! continue soon

loved ur work😊

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Gourav

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Posted: 12 years ago

Nice update precap looks interesting waiting for nxt part so update asap and pm me when u update...😊

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Mehvish Fatima

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Posted: 12 years ago

hmmkk v undrstand bt it was sad update yar

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Mahima

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Posted: 12 years ago

That was short

Yet awesome

Truly enjoyed it

Amazing work

Waiting for more intense scenes

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jazsidhu

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Posted: 12 years ago

tis ia a great update even if it short...totally luv it...

wow wonder wat will asad do nw n hw will zoya react...

it beautifully written...

thx fr the pm n please pm me for the next part...

please continue soon n eagerly waiting for the next part n some wonderfull asya moment...

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rajnid68

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Posted: 12 years ago

rains..pouring

sadness..pouring

update...awesome and brilliant

looking to next..precap hit the nail..

thanks

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SANYA

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Posted: 12 years ago

nice one

wating fr yur 17+ eagerly😉

update

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SANYA

@cutiesanya

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Posted: 12 years ago

wating fr the next one

this was ex short but sweet

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Milli bakshi

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Posted: 12 years ago

may i kill u please...please..PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i was waiting...for*ahem ahem*.n u!!!!!!...mummyyy😭

n how did they reach there?????

m kanphusss...🤣

i love your writing...tell ur sister i love her too..but right now...all m thinking of giving her a tapli on head...pyaar se ...ofcourse🤣

kyu..mere armano ka katal kiya🤣

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princee

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Posted: 12 years ago

waoo..i jst love my sher...my lion..asad...pls asya ko hi unite krna..i don't want any triangle crap...so usual..but as ur title..it should be unusual...pls

thnks 4 d pm dear

pari

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