AsYa SS:Has your heart ever loved?Updtd Prt3 Pg15 - ON HIATUS - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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U stop at main point pls pls pls cont soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hellooo 😛
Okay I know you all wanna throw eggs, stones, tomatoes, shoes and all sorts of things at me for making you wait for over a month just to update the next part of this story.. I was kinda busy that's why the delay 😳

this isn't a long part and I do apologize for that as well..

Happy reading ...

Chapter 3

"Driver, chaabi mujhe dedo" Zoya held out her hand and took the keys from the driver as soon as they reached outside the Khan Villa. She got into the car and drove off to nowhere, leaving behind a flabbergasted driver standing by the gate.

A few minutes later, Asad pulled up in the driveway in his car. "Sahab, Zoya madam just drove off in a hurry! Please jaldi jaao. Khuda naa kare agar kuch hogaya toh?" The driver was frightened as he explained the situation. Asad hurriedly followed Zoya in the direction that the driver told him.

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"Madam, please stop! Otherwise you will have to pay for all this damage!" A waiter was standing at a distance to avoid any contact with a furious Tanveer who was throwing and ruining everything that Asad had planned. Things were scattered everywhere by the sea side. "Zoya.. I'll kill you! Tumhara himmat kaise huyi meri aur Asad ke beech mein aane ki! Chodungi nahi tumhe!" She started running towards the exit of the hotel in search of Zoya.

The waiter stood there scared and unable to register what had just happened in front of him. As soon as he composed himself, he ran to the reception desk and looked for Asad's number in the VIP members log book and dialed it.

Hello Sir! Please save your wife. She is in danger. Woh laal sari wali aurat unki jaan ki peeche padi hai. Please save her!" He hung up after warning Asad.

"Tanveer" Asad was in shock but still kept driving. He had been driving for almost half an hour now and there was still no sign of Zoya in the dark, lonely road. He got to a T-Junction and stopped. A small, silent prayer was sent from him as he closed his eyes and asked Allah the Almighty to show him a sign so he can take the right decision. Slow and steady, he opened his eyes and took a left turn.

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"Zoya think over what happened"driving in the middle of nowhere, she was still debating between whether to listen to her mind or heart. Her heart told her that Asad could never do anything like that but her mind was telling her to believe what she witnessed. "Nahi Zoya, dil ki baat suno.. Tumhara dil kabhi ghalat nahi ho sakta" After deciding on what to do, she took a U-Turn and quickly drove back home

A few minutes later, the screeching of tires shook the driver out of his senses. He noticed that it was Zoya and rushed to her. "Zoya Madam, sab theek to hai?" He inquired. "Haan Atif, sab theek hai. Mr. Khan andar hai kya?" She was getting impatient because she wanted to sort out everything with him before it's too late.

"Nahi, woh toh tumhara peeche aaya tha. As soon as you left he got here and I told him that you left so he came after you" He explained, leaving behind a baffled Zoya as he went back to the servant's quarters. "Mr. Khan left to look for me?" Mumbled a puzzled Zoya. "But I didn't see him even on my way back."

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He drove through the lonely road and once again laughed at his own ill fate. He had chosen the wrong path, resulting in him losing his Zoya again. He sopped the car in the middle of the road and rested his head on the steering wheel. He spent a few minutes in that position but was startled with the vibration and ringtone of his phone. His eyes widened in shock as he stared at the name that flashed on his screen.

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In a warehouse somewhere in Bhopal..

Tanveer frantically paced back and forth. "What am I going to do now? Woh kambakhat Zoya ne sab kuch bigad diya." She spat at the thought of being defeated by Zoya. "I need to find out where Zoya is first" She rushed out of the warehouse and got into her car.

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"Zoya" He smiled as he saw the phone flashing with her name. He immediately answered it, but all he could manage was a mild hello, while wiping away the tears that were streaming down his face.

"Mr. Khan" In between sobs, she tried to compose herself and carry on. "I'm sorry Mr. Khan.. I shouldn't have erupted like that" She spoke in an apologetic tone. "I really need to talk to you Mr. Khan" Without delay, she told him she wants to meet him to sort out the misunderstanding that was caused between them.

"Kahan ho aap Zoya?" Excited he was waiting for a reply as he couldn't wait to go and talk to her, to hold her in his arms, never to let her go ever again. "I'm at home waiting for you, Mr. Khan" She told him. He was ecstatic when Zoya stated that she was at home waiting fir him. Without wasting a single second, he disconnected the call, started the engine and rushed back home.



So here it is guys.. I know its now what you expected but I promise something exciting in the next update 😳 and this time I promise not to take long to update 😃

Love,

~ Annie ~


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Posted: 12 years ago
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Resss!

And there you go again stopping at the WORST POSSIBLE TIME!!!!

AAAHHH!

OK I'm calm now. But seriously. Next update has to be FAST!!!! Zoya fighting with her heart and mind was refreshing, since it's usually Asad's job to do that. But Asad's frantic chase for her had me so sad. I was worried they'd never even talk.

BUT THEN YOU ENDED IT THERE. I have a sinking feeling something very dramatic and dangerous is gonna happen. It is, isn't it? Isn't it? 😭

Loved it hun! Short, but sweet. BUT PLEASE. UPDATE SOOON! 😃😆

P.S. YAY I'm first 😆
Edited by mochhug - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That was quick!!😆

But I'm happy you reserved first spot 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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OMG..!! i just read this part.. it was fab...
i loved the way zoya listened to her heart, came back home n called asad... i hope they confess soon..
cant wait to read more..
plz continue soon...
n thanx for the pm..
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hopefully not to wait to long... thanks..

Thanks for the update
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Oh...u stopd here...

Plz update soon. ...
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LOVED the update, annie!!! but please make asad reach home safely, without that cat interrupting!!!!! just make him go home and make them talk. and throw that billi out! 😆 awesome chapter, dear!!! update soon!!!

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