asya FF another world chapter 2 updated

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi About myself Iam Akhila I am doing My CA . This is my first attemt at writting an FF please read and give me ur valueable feedbacks and ideas..
Another world.. Charater intro Asad Ahemad Khan a.k.a Hunter
He is an Interpol office . age 27 .He is considered to be the best. He specialises in undrcover works and to his enemys only know as Hunter. It is said that one he make u his mark it is impossible to escape. His current target is Guffur Siddeque
Guffur Siddeque
He is one of the most dangerous underworld Don .Ruthless and powerful .He is currently married to Razia but still in love with his late wife Zainab .His only weakness is his daughter with his late wife Zoya who hates him and lives with her aunt in New York
Zoya Siddeque/Farruqui
daughter of Guffur and Zainab. Happy go lucky girl but hide alot of secrets .A designer by profession but at her father insistance trained in weapons and technology.extremly tallented mordern girl.Blames her father for her mothers death. Lives with her maternal aunt and uncle Zeenat and Anwar.
Zainab Farruqui/Siddeque
Deceased in a fire under mysterious circumstances.Fell in love and married Guffur against family wishes. Mother of ZOYA.more about her death and zoya hatred will be revealed as story continues..
THIS IS THE FIRST INTRO MORE CHARATERS AND THE FIRST CHAPTER WILL BE POSTED LATER ...
PLEASE TELL ME WHEATHER I SHOULD CONTINUE THIS FF...
INDEX
CHAPTER 1 Pg 1
CHAPTER 2a Pg 3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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wow!!! a different concept😃 count me in😳 would love to read how the love blossoms between AsYa..

if possible please pm me😃 and continue soonish😳
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very nice plzz do continue soon!!
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plz cont soon
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Humera siddique

Zoya half sister only person who zoya loves in the family.She is in love with Ayaan a honest businessman ,but her father wants her to marry someone else ( surprise)Razia Mallik/Siddique Previously married to Jaffar Mallik after his death married his right hand man Guffur Siddeque Hates Zoya and tries everything to get guffurs attension.Mother of Humera and Tanveer.Tranveer Mallik /Siddique Daughter of RAZIA and Jaffar Mallik Step daughter of Guffur . selfish and cunning hates Zoya and wishes to kill her . Married to Imran .
CHAPTER 1
Zoya POV
Fire all around where am i " ammi ammmi kaha he aap bacchoo mujeee ammmi" suddenly a pice of burning wood falls . " aaahah"" screems zoya as she wake up . "just a nightmare " she tells herself A nightmare about the past.. LOOKING at the clock " Shit it only 1 am what am i going to do the rest of night " she says mumblling to herself . getting up from her queensize bed she walks over to the balcony of her penthouse appartment. sighing she looks down at the busy streets. "Newyork a city that does not sleep" she thinks to herself..
Lost in her thoughts she does not realize that her phone has been ringing .. ring ring the third time it rang Zoya quickly goes to see who it is
Humera ... Why is she calling me at this time .. She thaught to herself Humera was the only person she called Her own , her younger sister the only person who she loved and would do anything for.
The phone rang again knocking Zoya to her senses . She turned and answered the phone . 'HELLO HUMERA" she barely said when she heard her sister sobbing in the other end of the phone.. Her mind panicing " Humera what wrong tell me why r u crying ???" she asked
"paji ...Abbu wants me to ... get ...married ... but ...u know that ... i love Ayaan ..paji I fell ...like... killing myself ...If i cant be with Ayaan might as well die " humera said in a barely audiable voice.
Hearing her sisters sobbing Zoya coulld not take it anymore her hatred for her father increasing tenfolds
"Humera listen to me ur paji is here right i wont allow the marriage to happen Trust me i will get u Ayaaan together no matter what don't do anything stupid .. listen to me right" she screemed trying to reassure her sister
" humera i am coming to u i will take the first available flight and i promise nothing bad will happen u trust ur paji right" zoya said
"Paji ...please hurry Abbu want to get me married in 2weeks " cried humera from the other end ..
"it all right i am going to book my flight now Quuda afisss" said zoya
'alla haffiss" Humera said cutting the phone..
Zoya stood ther staring at the phone " how could a man force his own daughter into a marrige she didn't want" zoya thought her anger and hatered increasing.
She called a travel agent and booked the first available flight to Delhi from there to Bhopal
Bhopal she thought a city that took away her ammmi her happiness..
She remembered how she swore she wold never set foot on that soil ever again... How 17 years ago she had left forever to live with her mother reatives after her death...
how inspite of being an international don daughter she swore never to have any contact with him ,but she knew all to well that her father constantly monitered her every move his men all around her hiding and watching her .. she knew her father would know of her arrival before she landed .. the thought replused her...
"but ...This is for Humera ...i have too" she thaught to herself and went to pack her bags
She was going to BHOPAL... she sighed thinking to herself..
Asad POV
Guffur Siddique a man wanted by all law enforcement agencies a man feared by all.. He had spent The last 3 years infiltrating his organisation he had become one of his trusted close men but still he knew that Guffur trusted no one ...He was cunning and sly even the smallest mistake would be noticed by him.
Flashback
2 Week ago Gufur had put a proposition to him to get married to his younger daughter Humera a shy and meek girl.. though he did not want to he knew that if he said no Guffur would suspect him so he agreed..
Inwardly he felt sorry for the girl since he was nothing but an undercover agent trying to bring down her father and she was to become a pawn for this..
Current
IT was almost non Guffur had called him to his house he did not know what to expect .. He was him siting on His chair holding an envelop seeing the envelop he got curious but did not show it.
"sit down khan' Guffur said
i sat down instintively " why did u call me sir" i asked him
After a silence for a minute he said " i have a very important task for u ''handing the file over to me " Her name is Zoya she is from Newyork I want u to pick her up from the airport and bring her safely here .. she will be arriving by tomorrow"
"yes sir " i said and left ..
Once out I opened the File i was a picture of a beauty doe like eyes , face like an angle dimple smile .. seeing her picture a smile found it way to my face without me knowing
" asad if she is involved with Guffur she must be dangerous don't fall for her preety face" he said to himself but kept wondering wh she was if she was a criminal he would have recognised her maybe a lover ... he thaught to himself but for some reson the idea disgusted aand replused him.
Next day
I woke up early i did not know why but she kept appearing in my dreams not allowing me to sleep... I woke up wore my normal 3piece armanni suit got in to my BMW and left for the airport ..
Precap
Asya meet first fight
Sorry for the delay i am an exam student and have been busy promise to update soon give me ur feedback
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Edited by akicat - 12 years ago
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OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Why did you stop there plzz plzz continue and Pm me too plzzz
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sounds interesting. plz continue soon
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ohh my god!! this is interesting plz pm me when you update next!!!
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WOW!!! totally new... nice ... continue soon
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hey tis is great...very interesting...please continue soon n do pm...
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