Asya SS: You Are My Life (chapter 9-pg30) - Page 17

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Posted: 12 years ago
oh no. cliffy. you cant stop it like this.
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Thanks for updating after so long... with a sad emo update..
zoya is in comma.. if only she listen to asad and stay in the room...


Percap : 6 months... plzz you dont go away for to long..





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Posted: 12 years ago
Sad😭...but nicely written😊...update soon😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 8

after 6 months

asya room
asad: zoyaa m back (placing his bag on table facing towards bed)
U know zoya it was an amazing day...we got the deal...and u know wat they were really very happy with us...
(Removing his coat n tie) main change krke ata hun...fir sath baith ke coffee piyege..ok sweetheart (he pecked her cheeks n went to chnge)

After sometime he went to kitchen n came wid coffee( wid milk n sugar)
asad : ( taking a sip) u know m gonna order pizza for dinner...wat say?
Zoya tumhe pta h maine apni life me bhot dard sahee hai par jab tum meri life me ayi...meri life khushiyo se bhar gyi
hum bhot khush the...fr kyu ye khaamoshi hai zoya...tum kyo kuch nhi bolti...tum mere sath rhte hue bhi mere sath kyo nhi ho...tum kyo pizza ka naam sunne par khushi se nhi chillati...kyu mje late aane par nhi daantti...kyo mere aane par mea welcome nhi krti...kyu zoya kyu ( n he breakdown in front of her first time after 6 months)
U know m in 6 mhino me tumhare saamne nhi roya hmesha khush rha ye sochkr ki tum jldi hi thik ho jaogi...m apne aap ko strong bnane ki koshish krta rha par zoyAa nhi hu mai strong ...i want u back zoya i want my naughty zoya back...i want my chatterbox back plz wake up zzoya plz (crying bitterly in front of her)

Here zoya lie motionless on their bed attached by wires and machines

dilshad standing on the door crying seeing his son's condition

dilshad : (coming inside) beta vo jaldi thk ho jaegi
Asad : ( hugged his ammi) par kab ammi kab ab to 6 mhine ho gye...
dilshad: (slightly pushed him n wipe his tears) allah pe bharosa rakho asad...vo sab thk krenge
asad: hmm

at dinning table
all were eating silently n that is wat happening since last 6 months
after asad was gone into room

najma: ammi 2 din baad bhaijaan ka birthday hai...apko yaa hai bhaijaan ka last birthday

dilshad: haan kitna khush tha mera bacha zoya ke sath par iss saal ( n she became sad)

Asya room

asad sitting beside zoya staring at her

asad: zoya tumhe yaad hai na 2 din baad kyA hai?...offo ab ye bhi mje yaad dilaana pdega?...tumhaare shauhar ka janamdin hai 2 din baad...bhulakkad (n gave a slight tap on her forehead)
To kya taufa de rhi ho apne shauhar ko? Pichli baar vala gift yaad hai? Arey haan tumhe kaha se yaad hoga tum to drunk thi...oops i was not supposed to tell dat stupid me...bta du? Chlo bta hi deta hu...tumhari drink me kisi ne alcohol mila di thi ye to tum jaanti hi ho...par tumne kya kiyaa tha ye tumhe pta hai...hahaha ok let me tell u

flashback
asad was talking to a girl in the party...( zoya has arranged party for asad at a club)

Zoya: MR KHAAN ( shouting)
Asad: (shocked n comes closer to her n realised she is drunk) han zoya kya hua?
Zoya: KYA HUA...YOU ARE SAYING KYA HUA...HOW DARE U TALK TO THAT GIRL...U ARE NOT SUPPOSED TO TALK TO ANY GIRL WHEN M HERE OK
Asad: (still shocked) b.b.but why
zoya: COZ COZ i dont like it
asad: but why dont you like it miss farukki?
Zoya: its just i dont like it dats it
Asad: but shy miss farukki (getting the point )
Zoya : coz I LOVE YOU U STUPID (holding his collars n she faintd leaving a shockd asad

Present
asad: haha dat was the best proposal for me...you shocked na? U know wat after knowing ur feeling i as coming to u to propose u the very next dat but dat tanveer came in between...but ab vo ja chuki hai...hmaari life ki saari problems jaa chuki hai...bs ab sirf tumhaari kammi h zoya...ab to vapas aa jao




standing on the sand she is looking at the vast ocean...when someons called her " vapas aa jao zoya" she is attracted to the ocean but she wants to go back...she dont wanna leave him...she is fighting n may be she will win


ok ok dont give me dat glares...me sorry na...i will not repeat dis mistake...pinky promise
i will give one update in a week or may be 2 may be more :p
but still dont expect m very lazy :p
ab iss bache pe thodi sivdua krke likes thokk do aur allah ke naam pe comment bhi de do :p
i have been writing dis chapter since one hour from my mobile ab to thoda sa taras kha lo :(
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Linsie

Thanks for updating after so long... with a sad emo update..
zoya is in comma.. if only she listen to asad and stay in the room...


Percap : 6 months... plzz you dont go away for to long..







awiee m sorty i was busy wid college but now i will update regularly :)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ap3h7u

Sad😭...but nicely written😊...update soon😊


thnkew n updated :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update..poor asya..hope zoya wake up on asad's birthday
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Posted: 11 years ago
finally updated
awesome update
thanx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
love it.
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