CBLI- Central Bureau of Love Investigation..Asya SS

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Hellooo people...
Me jasmine (reyansh23) hv started writing a SS..dis z our first attempt on writng so plz overlook d mistakes
plz Leave ur valuable comments

Presenting...
CBLI - Central Bureau of Love Investigation

Plz open dis link fr sure
U l lyk it
"http://t.co/XZHs8XWTuP"

CHARACTER SKETCH-

Asad Ahmed khan aka mamu= Karan singh grover
Chief of CBLI
He z cool n leads d team

Zoya Ahmed khan = surbhi Jyoti
Investigator
Wife of asad n a gr8 shayer...u knw it

Samrat shergill aka Chachu = mohit sehgal
Investigator
Supr flirt n in relation wid Sharon

Sharon rai Prakash = sneha kapoor
Investigator
Bubbly n in love wid samrat

Vikramjeet kalsi aka vicky = prateek kalsi
Investigator
Flirt n raps vry well

N d persons in dere first case l b mentioned in d first ch

Hwz it...????
Do open d link fr d pics of d team

Case1 TAAREY
Part1 : pg1
Part2: pg2
Part3: pg4
Part4: pg7
Part5: pg10

Case2- ayra
Part1: pg 15
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Posted: 12 years ago
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hey guys plz open the link for the photograph of the team
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CASE -1: TAAREY

It ws Jst anthr day at CBLI
Vicky n samrat wr sitting in d office canteen...coffee in front n almost shouting
V: 31
S: hehe mine r 33
V: u r joking Chachu...I dnt believe dat u hv dated 33 gals. Wait I l ask Sharon...
N he tries to move frm dere
S: abey ruk yr... use Kyun beech mein Lata hai...!!! Tujhe apne chuddy buddy pr bharosa Nahin hai kya...

Dey wr busy in dere talks wn suddenly dey saw a beautiful gal enter dere office
Dey both looked at each other
Dere eyes pooping out
n both Jst ran to gt to hr b4 d othr one

Gal- c d link
"http://t.co/Bpvg2V2hV0"

Both together: hi beautiful
V R D investigators of CBLI. aur aap...
Gal: hi...m taani
V n S: n v r single
Suddenly a loud voice frm behind
SAMRAAATTT...
It ws Sharon coming in full angry mood. She Jst catches samrat of his collar n pushes him to d wall..
Sh: acha to tum single ho???
Sa: Nahin babes..main to sirf...
N dere dey goes ..fighting

By d tym vicky grabs taani to side m continues
V: ignore thm
Tl me Hw cn I help u???
T: actually I hv cm here Bcz of my husband...
V: u u u r marrieddd..????
T: yes.. Kyun
Vicky z shocked n stunned he stood dere still...(bg: dil k armaan aansuon mein beh gye...)


Taani waving in frnt of him...xcuse me Mr...
Bt no response
Dn she hears someone call her name frm behind
Zoya: TAANI...!!!
Taani turns back n z supr happy to c hr frnd zoya in frnt of hr
Both d gals hug each othr
T: wow yr u r here
M supr happy
Z: yea dear I Jst joined it few months ago
By d way Hw z rey n ur married lyf..???
T: dnt ask
Bt first of al tl me Hw cd u marry without letting me knw
Where z ur 'Vo'.????
Z:(blushing) Woh actually it al happened vry fast so cdnt contact u
Bt I l Jst introduce him to u
Mr.khan she calls him n dere enters a young man well built- d chief
Asad: yes darling u called me
Z: meet my frnd taani
A: hi taani
NYC to meet h
T: same here jeeju
Taani to zoya: kya baat hai... Tumhari to lottery lag gyi... He z supr handsome
Asad trying to read zoyaz rxn n smiles
Z: leave dat n tl me d reason behind ur cmng here
T: ( bcms a bit sad) vo actually Kuch dinon se I feel dat rey z cheating on me. I think he z having an affair wid kriya his dance partner
Z:r u serious...Bt rey lvd u a lot
T: I dnt knw yr..I m cnfused ...cn u al plz help

Asad comes on frnt n calls his team
Vicky , Chachu, shy...come here guyz
V gt our new case...
Vicky comes out of his dreamland n replies
Bt sam n shy r still busy fighting
Its only wn dey hear dere boss shouting dere names dey cm to knw wtz happening


Nw whole team n taani m d discussion room
A: so taani tell me..why do u thnk so???
T: Bcz frm d last few days he comes home late n on my asking he Jst says dat he ws at d dance academy
Bt I hv found out dat he lies al d tym n he z wid kriya...n also he z been withdrawing too mch cash frm our joint account n doesn't tl me d reason...
A: okay
Dnt wry taani
CBLI L look into d matter n l find out d truth soon
Right guyz..???
Everyone: yes sir...v l

To b continued...



Part 2- pg 2
Edited by Reyansh23 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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That is something interesting.

Do continue soon.

Dee
Edited by Enchantress - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Please continue it soon its interesting and pm me :-)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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woooww man!! damn intrstng n unique!!
continue sooon n plzzz PM me !
tnkooo 4 d PM!!
IT WS LUVLLYY
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting! continue !
and pm me!!!<3
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awsomemman!!
A different concpt and intresting..
Please update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
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A NEW CONCEPT PLEASE PM ME
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CASE-1 taarey
Part 2

Day 1
Al ws decided n strategy ws made...
Sam shy n vicky l go to d academy n enquire abt rey
Whereas Asya wd go behind kriya...
Dere dey leave...team CBLI in full confidence...

Scene1- reyansh dance tutorial
Vicky Sam n shy goes in d academy. Vicky notices d hot female dancers doing dere warm up moves...he pokes Sam n shows him d same
Both of thm cdnt resist Bt Shy...!!!
So Sam tells hr to go m meet d manager (Whoz an old man) n by dat tym dey l go n ask othr people around ( which wr dose dancers obviously)
Shy unaware of dere plan moves to f managers room
D guyz wink at each other n move towards dere not so called goal...
Sam n vi: hey gals...wts up..!!!
Al d gals lkd suspiciously at d 2 random guyz in dere rehearsal hall
To make things easy fr thm Sam n vicky introduced THMSELVES as fashion photographers fr a renowned magazine n tl thm dat dey wanted few pics of dem...
Dat excited albd gals present dere n den started d photography session
Both of dem gt THMSELVES clicked wid d gals.. Wy dey wanted ws Jst to b close to thm...
Dey wr njyng dere tym wid lots of chicks around

Other side shy ws goin to dat rum in a hurry n suddenly she bangs in someone ...ws abt to fall so she closed hr eyes Bt thm she felt herself in someone's arms...she opened hr eyes n dere it stood young n handsome guy wid hr arms around hr...
Introduction - d guy z none othr th rey
Link"http://t.co/hZ5r5UIeZ2"

By dey had dere audience too who wr staring at thm
Vicky saw thm in at pose n Went to Sam who ws busy in holding a dancer to gt hr pose right fr d photograph
He looked in d direction I which vicky told him n
THAMMM...
He dropped dat poor dancer on d floor n paced out of d rehearsal hall to d corridor where d 2 of thm stood still in d same pose
Sam: ahemmm...
Sorry to disturb u guyz Bt Hw u seen my sweet n shareef gf anywhere..????
Rey n taani stood straight
Shy: wt yr Sam.. I ws abt to fall wn dis charming guy saved me .. U shd thnk him fr saving ur gf frm injury...
Sam: oh really...
Thanku so much sir
Without u I wd hv Jst lost he
I l b ur slave al my lyf... U owe it...
Vicky z trying to control his laughter
Shy: shut up Sam n behave

Rey: if u guyz r done...thn may I ask who u r..????
Al 3 looked at each othr n thn vicky spoke
V: v r frm d ...magazine n v want to write n article abt dis ance academy who help d budding dancers to achieve dere aim
R: oh datz gr8
Hi m reyansh singhania...d owner
Bt m really sorry guyz I need to go ne
Itz urgent Bt u cn ask my assistants fr whatever u want
Take care

N rey leaves

Nw d trio gt to di dome serious work
Dey enquire abt reyz character n behaviour frm d gals out dere
N also picks up some office records frm his cabin
To dere surprise dey found out at rey z a vry polite boss n he respects women a lot
Nvr hs been any issue of him wid anyone
So he ws d PURRRFECT one...



Scene 2
Asya outside kriya's house in d car
A: why isn't she goin to d academy today..???
Z: mujhe kya PTA mr. Khan
Main koi jyotishi hoon kya..???
Asad gas he a 'l u shut up 'look
Zoya understood d silent talk n thn looks out to find a PAANIPURI stall dere
She shouts GOLGAPPE
n starts pleading.. Mr. Khan .. Vo delhiye paani puri
Chaliye na khaate hain. Vaise bhi bhut tym ho gya
Plzzz
A:behave miss farooqui. V r on duty...
Z: Allah miyaan wts wrong wid u mr.khan
V r nw married fr almost a month n u stil don't believe it dat I m Mrs. Khan nw... Kya itna mushkil hai..???
A: ahhh
M sorry fr dat
Bt v still r on duty mrs khan n dey look so unhygienic
Is dat fun nw.???
Z: hawww... Hw cn u say no to such delicious looking PAANIPURI...!!!
Isi baat pe ek sher arz hai

" duty krte krte Ik din nikal jayegi Meri jaan
duty krte krte Ik din nikal jayegi Meri jaan
Kabhi sadak pe GOLGAPPE kha kr to dekhiye mr khan.."
Shukriya shukriya...

Asad feel lyk banging his head on d wall
Bt after controlling his emotions he says.. Ok Chalo zoya
Varna agar Ik or itni khatarnaak shayeri Maine suni to asylum jana pad jayega

Both of dem leave fr d stall n zoya starts njyng d paanipuri
Zoya eats almost 2 plates n asad z stil stick up wid d first paanipuri.. He seem s to b analysing it frm al d sides

Den suddenly he sees a white Honda city to stop in frnt of kriya's house n rey steps out of it wid a briefcase in his hand
A: Ltz go .. He z here
Z: mmm jsttt lawst owne lefttt...wid hr mouth full
Asad Jst grabs he hand n pulls her
N dere dey stand outside kriya's window trying to listen wts goin on inside

Rey: kriya yeh lo 5lakh rupae Jo tumne mangwaye the
Kab dene hain..??? Aur Haan main bhi saath chalunga..
Kriya: Nahin rey...Usne mujhe akele bulaya hai n Vaise bhi main aap ko is musibat mein Nahin dslba chahti
R: thnx kriya... Tum mujhe har baar bacha leti ho

Asya z unable to understand wt dey wr talking abt
K: don't wry.. Akhir frnds hote Kis liye hain..
R: par phir bhi I hate dis... Gunaah mujhse hua hai n I want to accept it in frnt of al
I can't lie any more ESP to taani...I lv her a lot m she trusts me blindly
K: no rey
Tumhari upar kitne dancers ki hope n future depend krta hai. Agar yeh baat bahar PTA chal gyi k ' d reyansh singhania ' z a MURDERER fur unki lives l turn into hell
R: datz why main chup hoon

Silence
N den rey tls hr dat he z leaving

Asya z supr shocked after hearing dis convo
Z:Allah miyan rey n murderer...!!!yakeen ni hota
Main taani ko kya bataungi
A: I knw .. Yeh sab bhut shocking hai.. Bt nw Ltz go to d office


Scene3- CBLI office - discussion room
everyone z shocked aftr hearing Asya
Nw dere ws a contradiction btw d 2 investigations today
Sam: seriously mujhe to Laga k vo bhut hi acha aadmi hai
Shy: I knw.. Itna hot dude or ek killer...Nooo
Sam (a bit jealous) : ab saare hot guyz mere kaise shareef n seedhe thodi na hote hain...
Asad: ahemm ahemm
Sam: I mean mere aur mamu jaise.. Kyun zoya..???
Zoya gvs him a 'Chl jhoote' look
Vicky: I agree guyz
Surat se seerat ka Nahin Pta chalta...
Everyone :ahh whattt..???
Vic: Hindi thi guyz
U wnt understand ...ITZ DEEP
N fr u
Gv me d beat guyz...
"Gaye the hum investigate krne love
Lekin shock ho gye hum sunkar yeh sab
I don't knw kaise react karegi taani yeh sunkar
K uska pati rey hai ek khunkhaar murderer..."


To b continued ...

Plz ignore mistakes
Dis z our first attempt

Note:
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Part3 on page 4

Edited by Reyansh23 - 12 years ago

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