Os:asya...funny completed - Page 3

Hey guys m glad u like it maine toh just fun mein likha tha...ok i will conti it...

Originally posted by: mizzundaztud

🐷 🤪 ha hahaaaq chinki ke papaaa... lolzzz,lmfao...and that tannu, abeychudail tujhe kya pata ki jammy itna sadisliye hai coz weding night khatam ho gayi... he wanted moreee

omg...

Awwn that was so cute and funny lol
You Neva know dil mom she mght take that challenge too if she doubt says ddnt consummate she will do that tooo lmao

Part 2
asad:ammi yeh apne kya kiya...
Dil:kya kiya maine...
Zoya:ammi apne office me aj sab ko chutti de di woh bhi mujhe bataye bina...
Dil:ami hoon tuhmari itna bhi nahi kar sakti kya...
Zoya:jane dijiye na chinki ke papa...gussa chod dijiye aur hamare saath baithkar breakfast kijiye...
Asad:bas ho gaya zoya ab tum mujhe phirse chinki ke papa nahi bulaogi varna...
Dil::varna kya asad...
Asad:ammi aap beech main mat boliye apko toh zoya bholi bhali lagti hain na...
Najma:bhaijan aap bhabhi ko kuch mat kahiye...
Asad:haan haan kyu na bolu main a...
Najma:pata hai bhaijan woh chinki ki hone wali ammi hai...
Zoya:tamatar tumne bilkul sach kaha maine toh yeh socha hi nahiii...
Dil:jane do ab pata hai asad maine kisiko bulaya hai aaj...
Asad:kise...
Dil:ayan ko...
Zoya:ammi kya keh rahi hai aap apne uss rabert ko bulaya hai...
Asad:zaroor apka kuch plan hoga aami...
Ayan enter...
Ayan:good morning everyone...
Zoya:good morning rabert...yeh kya hua tuhmare ghosle jaise baal gayab ho gaye lagta hain hair cut karwa ke aaye ho ab ache lag rahe hoo ayaan...
Ayaan:thanx bhabhi woh kya hai na garmi bohot ho gayi thi na iss liye bal katwa diye woh hamare ghar mein raziya mumani e bhi ek new hair style karwaya hai...toh pata nahi chal raha tha actuly ayan kon hai confussion na ho paye issliye bhi katwa diye...
Asad:accha kiya ayan warna main toh tuhme pehchan hi nahi pata...
Dil:sach kaha chinki ke papa ne...
Ayan:chinki yeh kon hai ab...
Najma:hamare bhaijan ki hone wali beti...
Ayaan:kya aap ko toh shadi kal hi hui hain na toh aap itni jaldi bhaljaan aap bade chupe rustam nikle...
Asad:ab tum bhi shuru hogaye yeh log majak kar rahe hai...
Ayaan:sach main bhaijaan...
Zoya:haan robert...
Asad:lagata hai yeh sachmain pagal ho gaye hai mujhe yaha se kahi door kuch dino ke liye jana chahiye...
Dill:dekha zoya asad ne honneymoon bhi plan kar diya tuhmne lekke kahin door jana chahta hai kahi ham isse disturbe kar diya toh...
Ayaan:bhaijaan aap...
Asad:bas ho gaya aab...
Zoya:toh paking kare kya...
Ayaan:haan bhaijannn mujhe jaldi se maama...banana hai kya...
Alll lough..


So guys hows it...

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That was hilarious indeed
Chinki ke papa and honeymoon and all eh

LOLOLOL xD Damn hilarious! I just read both parts! Love it! 🤣 Died laughing!!! xD LOOL OMG still laughing!!! Please continuee and PM me for next part!!! Thank youuu :)))

You have a good comic flair - these are really good - you should write more. Just take care of the grammar and spelling for an easier read. Pay attention to font and spacing and add some directions for your characters and their reactions...it adds to your story...

Originally posted by: Laila2009

You have a good comic flair - these are really good - you should write more. Just take care of the grammar and spelling for an easier read. Pay attention to font and spacing and add some directions for your characters and their reactions...it adds to your story...

U should enter the competition OS for TFK. Check out the sticky on the front page (I'm one of the judges😉).

thax diii try karongi par maine yeh aisehi likha tha...just for fun...but mein improve karongiii...

O god it was very funy just awesm. Do pm me whn u cont.

Lolzz ... 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣