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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: Enchantress

Oh , two more OS. Give the links I will have to read them,,.. Well , you can do it this way like complete the other two and then return to this. Take your time.. We will wait but don't leave it like that..

I am not gonna continue this cause i left it to the readers to think whats next and link to my other oss

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3539605

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3517834

^ yeh dono complete nahi kiya! 😉

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3521005 < yeh completed hai!

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cyndu

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Posted: 12 years ago

#82

😃

Edited by -cyndu- - 12 years ago

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shreya mehra

@shreya11mehra

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Posted: 12 years ago

#83

amazing update...plz continue soon...n add me in ur pm list

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#84

Originally posted by: shreya11mehra
amazing update...plz continue soon...n add me in ur pm list

Glad you liked it but i am not gonna continue this os 😃

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#85

Originally posted by: Cup-Of-Chai
Amazing! Loved it

Really! :D
thanks 😉

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

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Posted: 12 years ago

#86

SWITCH YOUR SPEAKERS ON

Asad was close really close to zoya..he could feel her breath on his neck..he could feel her curves on his body and her heartbeat. Zoya was on Asad her eyes still close but there was a small smile on her face!

Asad moved his hand on her back his hands led to the other dori of zoya's blouse..He caught the dori and pulled it! He felt zoya breath getting faster,He heard a other thunder and felt a grip on his arm. His one hand was around zoya's waist and the other was held tightly by zoya. Asad moved to her neck and gave a small wet kiss which made zoya to hold his hand even more tightly.

ASAD:Zoya.

ZOYA:Hmmm

Asad went towards her ears and held her earring with his teeth and removed it..while he slowly moved to the other ear his lips slowly brushed with hers! He took the other earring and removed it!

Zoya's breath was faster so she slowly loosened the grip! Asad moved his had towards her wrist and removed her bangles and kissed her wrist.

Then suddenly the power was back...Asad saw zoya's red cheeks and smiled while she dig herself in him. Asad bend towards the table to switch off the light That time zoya escaped.

ASAD:Zoya ruko

Zoya came back to the door gave a naughty look and ran towards the garden and Asad followed her. When he came to the garden he saw zoya enjoying the rain. Zoya saw him looking at her from the door..

ZOYA:Ayyiye na Mr khan.

She closed her eyes and enjoyed the rain. She opened her eyes as she felt the teasing fingers on her stomach! She made a move to run but she couldn't Asad caught her arm and pulled her which again made her to land on his chest!Few strands of hair came on her face Asad slowly removed it and kissed and cheeks and removed the water from her left cheeks.Zoya on the other hand was collecting water in her palm seeing the right time she put it on asad's face which made him to leave the grip she again she tried to escape but this time Asad held the pallu of her saree..

ASAD:Not so easy Zoya.

He held the pallu tightly and covered zoya with it..he slowly lifted her and moved towards the bench made her lay on the bench and he sat on the ground. Zoya looked into his eyes and looked away and blushed.

ASAD:Zoya mujhe dekho.

Zoya saw asad with a smile.

ASAD:Zoya abb jo hoga shadi ke baad hoga..Aur hokar rahega (with a teasing smirk)

Zoya had tears seeing Asad..she felt protected..proud! She didn't waste even a second and hugged him. Both felt Their life was complete and both knew its incomplete without each other!

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I had no plans to continue but i felt it was a boring Saturday and Niharika aur Milli ki pyaari si please ke liye i updated.

Kaisa hai bura bohot bura batadejiye do comment 😃

Edited by -cyndu- - 12 years ago

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Milli bakshi

@MILII_BAKSHI

Sparkler

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Posted: 12 years ago

#87

res

i will be right back to give u bada wala comment..tu ruk!!

UNRES

EK SHAYARI SUN...

" ek mouj ki kashti thi ek andheri galiyann...

ye padhne ke bad kash me tumhe wahi chhod ati...😆"

yar i love the start i love you wrote it because of me...m so happy...

par suhagraat ka kya hua...😭

umeed dila ke thanda kar diya...

i still love the proposal style...

asad ne start he kyu kiya...end tak ruka kyu nai..zoya room se bhagi kyu???

ye sare sawaal ke sath tune mujhe aj phir cooker par chhod diya..i so hate you..now😕😆

maza aya...yar padhkar...but...

sg ka kya...

barish😭

Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 12 years ago

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cyndu

@-cyndu-

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#88

Ok fine Milli...dekh Meine MEINE itni jaldi update kardiya! 😆

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Ishq-Dua

@Ishq-Dua

Rocker

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Posted: 12 years ago

#89

I was in ASYA Land

girl you are awesome I felt like I was watching an ASYA episode and I really needed that since it's a Saturday

you are talented

I loved reading this

adding music made it more beautiful I was blushing and smiling like crazy while I read it

you rock

thanks for this amazing Os😳

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niharika

@nihamrm

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#90

Awee mere please ka itna effect hai mujhe yeh nahi pata tha
aur yeh kya hai
Asad ne abhi abhi Zoe ko shaadi ke liye propose kiya
i cant believe it
And start padne ke baad mera yeh reaction tha------- 😳😳
Acha tha yaar
Love ya

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