SS: AAK Junior's Secret Diary [Part 3 Page 39] - Page 14

Originally posted by: sophie420

Fari,

First, Welcome back, I haven't seen you on the forum or read your work in a while!

Second, I just love your writing! I've been a fan, ever since Destinies Interwined!

And this SS has such a unique and interseting concept!

This is so adorable, reading through a baby's POV! I'm loving Ahsan, already!

Update Soon!

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Awww thank youuu 🤗 Yesss it does feel great to be back among you awesome ppl! I missed you all 😳

You're such a sweetheart for loving my work! I don't think I'm that good still you like it, I'm very much flattered 😳 Thanksss 🤗

Originally posted by: .Poonam.

Super cute! I never came across the IPK version, so this is all fresh for me.. Loving it, and look forward to reading more.. :)

If you haven't read that one then you'll enjoy this one 😳 Thanks for giving it a read 😛

Originally posted by: merrydock

A lot of it seems like ASR Junior's secret Diary. like the car ride home, the night time, i wish you could have made more changes.

i'm looking for ward of how you describe the other characters from this prospective. i hope the two families are together or closer by 2015.

Yes, it is going to be quite the same! The thing is I used almost all my creativity on writing that one! Like seriously! So yeah this one's going to contain much of the scenes from the previous one! Like I said at the start, if you've read Ashar's Diary then you don't need to read this one cos its going to be very similar 😛

This is just amazing. You don't know how much I loved it. I am ready to read the whole SS at a go. loved the concept and your writing style so much.

Why you stopped there. hmph. I was glued to reading it. I wanna read the whole story in a sitting. Its amazing, wonderful. You right so so well. Loved to read this so much. I loved the name Ahsan Ahmed khan. And you introduced Razia as a horrible creature to Ahsan. ROFL
I loved how he could listen Mitwa, Ishq pe zor nahin music. I didn't like him not liking his Ammi-Abbu's romance. But what to do? He is a baby. lol
And how much he is thinking of himself being the center of attraction for girls when he will grow up! naughty baby lol
Do continue soon. Believe me I am ready to finish the whole story if I get it right now.

Originally posted by: Aazeen02

pleasure was mine dear...
Yup have accepted ur buddy request... N it wud b awesome reading next...
Btw, I dunno ur name... May I?

My name's Fari! What can I call you? 😳

Originally posted by: laizu

This is just amazing. You don't know how much I loved it. I am ready to read the whole SS at a go. loved the concept and your writing style so much.

Why you stopped there. hmph. I was glued to reading it. I wanna read the whole story in a sitting. Its amazing, wonderful. You right so so well. Loved to read this so much. I loved the name Ahsan Ahmed khan. And you introduced Razia as a horrible creature to Ahsan. ROFL
I loved how he could listen Mitwa, Ishq pe zor nahin music. I didn't like him not liking his Ammi-Abbu's romance. But what to do? He is a baby. lol
And how much he is thinking of himself being the center of attraction for girls when he will grow up! naughty baby lol
Do continue soon. Believe me I am ready to finish the whole story if I get it right now.

Awww such a long comment on a single update? 😳 I'm flattered!
Oh I love the name Ahsan so I gave it to AsYa's kid! And I love its meaning as well cos it means The Best!

My brother's name Ahsan too but most of the time I'm calling him Sunny and he gets annoyed as hell 🤣

Thank youuu sooo much for reading! I hope the coming chapters keep you just as hooked 😛

Dear Diary,

Back again with some more entries! Writing is my only artistic outlet and mode of expression because I still can't speak. But I've learned to smile now! What a relief- I've been laughing inwardly for weeks at my Ammi's dreadful Shairi's and my Abbu's suicidal expressions that follow.

Anyways, met my Daada's second wife and family for the first time in my life. I don't know how Daada got married a second time and managed to get away with it. If my Abbu had even 'thought' of making such a mistake, my Ammi would've chopped him in teeny tiny little pieces and fed him to the street dogs!

Believe it or not, Ammi can have a bit of a temper. Like last week, Abbu mentioned some 'Tannu' by mistake and Ammi got so pissed off, she made him sleep in my room for a week. I hardly consider this a punishment but Abbu looked pretty upset so I assume he must really enjoy sleeping in his own bed...

Anyways, I don't think Abbu likes Daada very much considering how robotic he got and the way he furiously started massaging his head looked like he was going to rub it right off his neck!

And then without warning, he grabbed Dilshad Daadi's arm and tried to drag her out of the room. Thank God, Ammi intervened by loudly exclaiming, "Allah Miya! What's wrong with you, Mr. Khan?"

My abbu seems pretty helpless when Ammi screeches like that so he stormed back to his room to throw a huge anger tantrum and break as many things as he could lay his hands upon. Seriously, at time like these, I feel like he's the baby around here...

Rashid Daada seems to suffering severely from a serious inability to make decisions. He stood in the drawing room for half an hour after everyone had been seated, trying to decide whether to sit next to Dilshad Daadi or Shireen Daadi, his gaze flickering between the two helplessly. Just when he looked ready to cry, Shireen Daadi put an end to his misery by making the decision for him and made him sit between her and Dilshad Daadi.

But I've to say, if there's one person on this planet on this planet who seriously needs to grow himself a spine, it's Rashid Daada.

Now, don't even get me started on Shireen Daadi. I'm in awe of the people living in her house for patiently enduring her without banging their own heads on the wall. She is the type of person who makes everyone look like a genius just by being herself.

Seriously, if there was a category of the thickest person alive in Guinness Book of World Records, Shireen Daadi would've won it by a landslide.

Nuzhat, Nighat and Humaira went totally crazy over me and all I had done was throw them a cheesy little smile. Girls totally melt when I do that!

I was enjoying the attention when suddenly this wild-looking man snatched me from their arms and started leering at me. I can't put into words how terrified I got! I had just opened my mouth to start screaming for my life before this barbarian bit my head off, when Nighat Phuppi came to my rescue and took me back in her arms, thus saving my life.

I later learned that the savage-looking guy was Ayaan, my Abbu's brother. To say I was shocked would be the understatement of the century. That untamed-looking thing was my Abbu's little brother?? If you ask me, he looked more fitting to be Tarzan's younger brother.

Someone really needs to introduce the concept of a barber to this man! He actually looks like he hasn't stepped inside a barber's shop since he was my age!

I further learned that Ayaan was married to Humaira, the pretty girl who seemed to have trouble putting me down for even a second. I could not believe it! Just what had she seen in that guy is beyond my comprehension.

The only theory I can come up with, to explain this wedlock is that either Humaira's eye sight must be really weak or she must have fallen in love with him because I've heard that love also makes a person blind. I didn't think that phrase was meant literally but obviously it does.

I quickly made a mental note to myself not to fall in love ever.

While Humaira was busy playing with me, Ayaan Chacho sneaked up from behind and asked her when was she going to make him a father. Humaira blushed so deeply I was afraid she was going to pass out!

Exactly what was so blush-inducing about the comment is something I failed to understand. All they had to do was to go to the nearest hospital and purchase a baby for themselves. What in the world is so embarrassing about that? Adults can be so dense sometimes...

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Aaahhh! Found a bit of a shocking news today. Heard Ammi telling someday that my Abbu is a constructor and constructs buildings!

If you ask me, that's just a fancy name for a labor. He can call himself a constructor but he ain't fooling nobody.

My ego has taken a severe blow here. Can't believe my Abbu spends his time at the office hauling blocks of cements and bricks. But now that I think about it, that does explain why he has such a muscular body without doing any workouts!

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Likes and Comments please 😉

OMG its totally awesome and awesome...


loved it to the core <3

please do update hurry please

Wow..You're too good..