AsYa OS: Missing Me - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: princeegoyal

really nice yr...so much of pain...pls do PM me whenevr u post next...i m feeling little dishearted as zoya is dead...so wanna c some life nw..in asad...pls...do PM me..otherwise..i cn't get iver frm it nw...:(


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Aww I'm so sorry for making you sad. I know i'm evil 😉

I've added u in my PM list so u'll receive PMs don't worry 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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goosebumps all over my hands as i type here!


made me cry n smile at d same time
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: shanakyasharan

goosebumps all over my hands as i type here!


made me cry n smile at d same time



Aww I hope you enjoyed reading it though 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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heart breaking very emotional beautifully done thanks for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
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It was superbbb i really live with them u are intelligent genius man really sad love story but very touched and ur dialogues are PERFECT but i have one question zoya at the ge of 5 or 6 CAN write a MSG That me i couldnt make it Like her and what a reply by chootti asad . It seem That asad and zoya were a smart children 😉 . Continuee pleaze i dont care if the story is happy or sad it should be good , but this is more That goood 👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
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I do avoid sad stuff updates but man I had yo read as u wrote it
Loved it
It was more of cute romantic feeling even though it was a sad story
Loved it
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Posted: 12 years ago
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oh that was so sweet ... and sad.

I loved the flashbacks!!! ❤️

Very very nice!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: dumas

<font color="#0000cc" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">heart breaking very emotional beautifully done thanks for the pm</font>



Awww thank youuu! And the pic's sooo sweet! Omg! I have to catch up on the episodes 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ilhamez

It was superbbb i really live with them u are intelligent genius man really sad love story but very touched and ur dialogues are PERFECT but i have one question zoya at the ge of 5 or 6 CAN write a MSG That me i couldnt make it Like her and what a reply by chootti asad . It seem That asad and zoya were a smart children 😉 . Continuee pleaze i dont care if the story is happy or sad it should be good , but this is more That goood 👏



Awww thank youuu 🤗

Hmmm... I've seen some really sharp 5, 6 years old so I figured Zoya could write that too 😆 but hmmm... it would've been better if it was a 7,8 year old 😉

Anyway thanks for giving it a read and commenting... Means a lot 😛
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: jazmeen

I do avoid sad stuff updates but man I had yo read as u wrote it
Loved it
It was more of cute romantic feeling even though it was a sad story
Loved it



Awww you read it just cos I wrote it?! Thats sooo sweet 🤗

Really really appreciate your regular feedback 😳

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