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Sadie

@--starstruck--

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#21

Fizziii! you are a genius!

i was reading this OS through my cell and i started crying! literally crying that my mom actually had to ask "kya hua kahi lagi kya?"

ofcourse i said ya mujhe lagi cuz if i told her the actual reason she might send me to a mental asylum! 😆

it was a brilliant OS dear! 👍🏼

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JeeLeZaraa

@JeeLeZaraa

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#22

Such a sad os. Very well written.

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NainaAlex

@NainaAlex

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#23

I know all of us are frustrated at Asad,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,kya kare😒

but your OS is beautifully written...what pain...

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rogerrocks

@rogerrocks

Trailblazer

+ 4

Posted: 12 years ago

#24

You know what? Reading this before leaving to attend my classes was such a BAD BAD IDEA😆 This made me cry and now am depressed That was so so beautiful..

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Sohini Dasgupta

@.SoHu.

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 12 years ago

#25

This was W.O.W!!!
No words to describe futher!!

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@ChamakChallo91

Voyager

Posted: 12 years ago

#26

That was really sad 😭

Love the way you described zoya's pain!!

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SleepingBeauty.

@SleepingBeauty.

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 12 years ago

#27

While reading this, i had tears. I had this pain inside me which troubled me throughout the time i read it. This was a very very touching OS and i think it has become one of my favourites now. Goes into my bookmark. But OMG THIS WAS TOO GOOD! Loved the way you described the feeling Zoya went through. And Asad, i hate him for doing this to Zoya, he deserved whatever he is going through.

Fizzi you are amazing at sad stories! Write more please? Please?

Edited by SleepingBeauty. - 12 years ago